Some comments.
(;CA[UTF-8]ST[2]SZ[19]GM[1]FF[4]AP[GOWrite:2.2.21]RE[W+8.50]WR[3k]BR[3k]KM[6.5]FG[259:]TM[600.0]GN[ ]RU[Japanese]PM[0]PC[The KGS Go Server at <!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://www.gokgs.com/">http://www.gokgs.com/</a><!-- m -->]OT[5x20 byo-yomi]DT[2011-02-01]PW[Other dude]PB[Me]
;B[qp]BL[597.825]
;WL[595.202]W[dd]
;C[*** Interesting idea.]B[co]BL[592.903]
;WL[593.357]W[pd]
;C[*** This way Black has a nice enclosure which he may not have gotten if he had made this play first.]B[dq]BL[590.821]
;WL[591.582]W[jc]
;B[kq]BL[586.708]
;WL[587.533]W[jj]C[*** If White was going to play here, he should not have played the previous move low.]
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;C[*** Playing into White's hands. See variation.]B[qf]BL[583.254]
;WL[585.292]W[pf]C[*** White shores up his weakness.]
;B[pg]BL[581.576]
;WL[583.937]W[of]
;B[qe]BL[580.343]
;WL[582.73]W[qd]
;B[qh]BL[578.833]
;WL[581.679]W[je]C[*** Ouch!]
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;C[*** Too low. White is making his stones work together. See variations.]B[cf]BL[576.051]
;WL[579.718]W[df]C[*** A pincer is probably better.]
;B[dg]BL[574.598]
;WL[578.747]W[ef]
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;C[*** See variation.]B[ce]BL[573.344]
;WL[577.752]W[cd]
;B[ch]BL[572.124]
;WL[575.884]W[op]
;B[pn]BL[567.538]
;WL[573.973]W[qq]
;B[rq]BL[566.092]
;WL[572.211]W[qr]
;B[pp]BL[561.955]
;WL[566.474]W[oq]
;B[oo]BL[559.792]
;WL[564.436]W[rr]
;B[rp]BL[557.863]
;WL[561.899]W[lp]
;B[kp]BL[555.068]
;WL[559.476]W[lq]
;B[lo]BL[553.618]
;WL[557.781]W[mo]
;B[mn]BL[551.963]
;WL[556.051]W[ln]
;B[ko]BL[549.676]
;WL[554.13]W[no]
;B[nn]BL[547.241]
;WL[552.342]W[lr]C[Right about now I feel like I should have a good game. White is sealed and living very small. My shape feels very thick. ]
;B[pq]BL[543.326]
;WL[550.904]W[or]
;B[kr]BL[539.816]
;WL[544.892]W[pr]
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;C[*** Not a bad idea. But see variations.]B[nh]BL[533.779]
;WL[541.217]W[mf]
;C[*** Why?]B[pe]BL[529.793]
;WL[538.344]W[od]
;C[*** Why?]B[oe]BL[527.962]
;WL[537.462]W[ne]
;C[*** Why?]B[de]BL[522.982]
;WL[534.152]W[ed]
;B[ee]BL[519.621]
;WL[532.904]W[fe]
;B[ff]BL[518.236]
;WL[531.551]W[ge]
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;C[*** See variations.]B[fg]BL[509.529]
;WL[523.498]W[gp]
;C[I feel like in this space, I should be able to cap him and make his life difficult.
*** This fight should clinch the win.]B[gn]BL[505.018]
;WL[519.104]W[hn]
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;C[Maybe this was expecting too much.
*** It aims at too little. Which is bigger, the bottom left or the left side? Your variation is good.]B[ho]BL[499.976]
;WL[517.034]W[fn]
;C[ ]B[go]BL[496.088]
;WL[515.609]W[fo]
;C[I think this was my real mistake in the area though.
*** It is consistent with your previous plays, ]B[fp]BL[494.977]
;WL[513.848]W[ep]
;B[fq]BL[493.751]
;WL[511.544]W[eq]
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;C[*** See variation.]B[dp]BL[484.43]
;WL[507.53]W[fr]
;B[gq]BL[482.738]
;WL[506.156]W[gr]
;B[hq]BL[480.51]
;WL[503.792]W[eo]
;B[dr]BL[477.42]
;WL[502.153]W[er]
;B[dm]BL[471.867]
;WL[488.85]W[fl]
;C[*** Very bad. Strengthens White.]B[em]BL[467.972]
;WL[487.146]W[fm]
;B[hl]BL[465.66]
;WL[477.048]W[gk]
;B[ij]BL[463.136]
;WL[473.733]W[hj]
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;C[*** Too timid. See variation.]B[ik]BL[460.392]
;WL[468.981]W[eh]
;B[eg]BL[457.933]
;WL[465.678]W[dk]
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;C[*** Small. See variation.]B[cm]BL[445.52]
;WL[460.139]W[hh]
;B[ii]BL[442.725]
;WL[450.469]W[bl]
;B[ek]BL[430.124]
;WL[447.51]W[el]
;B[ck]BL[425.945]
;WL[433.272]W[cl]
;B[dl]BL[422.965]
;WL[432.164]W[dj]
;B[cj]BL[421.261]
;WL[429.756]W[di]
;B[ci]BL[417.35]
;WL[417.283]W[hr]
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;C[*** See variation. End of comments.]B[kh]BL[408.584]
;WL[415.464]W[mh]
;B[mi]BL[406.576]
;WL[413.152]W[ni]
;B[mg]BL[373.273]
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;WL[401.095]W[lh]
;B[lg]BL[370.311]
;WL[399.441]W[li]
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;C[*** See variation.]B[ng]BL[366.691]
;WL[393.893]W[mj]
;B[ki]BL[361.162]
;WL[391.821]W[kj]
;B[lk]BL[358.827]
;WL[390.036]W[lj]
;B[oj]BL[344.889]
;WL[370.55]W[ji]
;B[jh]BL[341.489]
;WL[366.374]W[ih]
;B[kf]BL[338.678]
;WL[362.383]W[oi]
;B[pj]BL[330.523]
;WL[358.089]W[kl]
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;B[in]BL[317.901]
;WL[316.767]W[jm]
;B[im]BL[311.311]
;WL[303.924]W[nj]
;B[ml]BL[303.638]
;WL[302.741]W[om]
;B[on]BL[300.442]
;WL[298.807]W[nl]C[At this point, I don't see a way to stop the second eye, but I figure that I have solidified the right side and that I have some points on the left, so I feel kind of ok, but I realize that his top is huge. ]
;B[pl]BL[294.565]
;WL[214.133]W[pi]
;B[qi]BL[289.974]
;WL[210.819]W[ok]
;B[pk]BL[286.221]
;WL[206.564]W[ll]
;B[lm]BL[247.735]
;WL[201.337]W[mk]
;B[kd]BL[224.683]
;WL[192.726]W[ke]
;B[le]BL[221.678]
;WL[177.449]W[ld]
;B[md]BL[219.433]
;WL[175.485]W[lc]
;B[me]BL[212.655]
;WL[164.583]W[mc]
;B[nd]BL[209.759]
;WL[162.012]W[nc]
;B[nf]BL[204.149]
;WL[158.31]W[rd]
;B[hi]BL[196.532]
;WL[153.237]W[gi]
;B[gh]BL[189.844]
;WL[148.284]W[jg]
;B[kg]BL[187.203]
;WL[136.443]W[iq]
;B[hp]BL[183.777]
;WL[134.412]W[ds]
;B[cs]BL[176.979]
;WL[132.441]W[es]
;B[br]BL[174.885]
;WL[123.175]W[fi]
;B[jf]BL[167.36]
;WL[113.931]W[ie]
;B[bd]BL[153.565]
;WL[111.661]W[bc]
;B[be]BL[151.107]
;WL[109.543]W[ac]
;B[se]BL[146.163]
;WL[106.678]W[re]
;B[rf]BL[143.957]
;WL[105.291]W[sd]
;B[sf]BL[142.74]
;WL[99.781]W[gg]
;B[fh]BL[136.343]
;WL[94.145]W[hf]
;B[if]BL[125.543]
;WL[86.2]W[hg]
;B[js]BL[115.311]
;WL[83.046]W[is]
;B[ls]BL[112.91]
;WL[81.325]W[mr]
;B[jr]BL[99.591]
;WL[76.98]W[ir]
;B[mm]BL[94.382]
;WL[59.157]W[jn]
;B[jo]BL[84.233]
;WL[52.715]W[ip]
;B[io]BL[74.422]
;WL[36.166]W[jk]
;B[hk]BL[57.924]
;WL[33.655]W[gj]
;B[km]BL[53.436]
;WL[29.781]W[jl]
;B[kn]BL[50.569]
;WL[23.385]W[ol]
;B[pm]BL[46.901]
;WL[11.364]W[do]
;B[bo]BL[41.642]
;WL[0.968]W[sq]
;B[sp]BL[39.076]
;WL[20.0]W[oh]OW[5]
;B[og]BL[36.165]
;WL[20.0]W[sr]OW[5]
;B[dh]BL[27.207]
;WL[20.0]W[ei]OW[5]
;B[gf]BL[22.278]
;WL[20.0]W[he]OW[5]
;B[ig]BL[16.805]
;WL[20.0]W[gm]OW[5]
;B[hm]BL[14.216]
;WL[20.0]W[dn]OW[5]
;B[cn]BL[11.782]
;WL[20.0]W[ms]OW[5]
;OB[5]B[ks]BL[20.0]
;WL[20.0]W[ad]OW[5]
;OB[5]B[ae]BL[20.0]
;WL[20.0]W[gl]OW[5]
;OB[5]B[nm]BL[20.0]
;WL[20.0]W[nk]OW[5]
;OB[5]B[tt]BL[20.0]
;WL[20.0]W[tt]OW[5]TW[aa:sb][cc:ic][ej:fk][fd:kd][fs:hs][kc][kk:lk][mi][mp:nq][nr][ns:ss][oc:sc]TB[af:bf][ag:cg][ah:bk][al:cl][am:bn][ao][ap:cq][ar][as:bs][cr][df:ef][gp][hn][jg][lf:mf][ln][ne][of:pf][po:so][qg:sg][qj:sn][rh:si]
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;C[I think I should play this quickly and take his eye. ]B[nj]
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;C[*** You just have to. Even though it will be a tough fight. The ponnuki is just too big.]B[mj]
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;W[ng]
;B[lh]
;W[oh]C[This would have been terrible for me. ]
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;C[*** Much better, eh?]B[li]
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;C[*** Big.]B[ji]
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;B[ii]
;W[ik]
;C[*** Remember, your purpose is to solidify your win. Even if White lives, you should make nice territory.]B[jk]
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;B[er]
;W[fr]
;B[gq]
;W[dr]
;B[eo]
;W[dp]
;B[cp]
;W[cq]
;B[do]
;W[es]
;C[*** What is big?]B[fm]
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;B[hm]
;W[gm]
;B[fn]
;W[im]
;C[Something like this looks much better.
*** Yes.]B[hl]
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;C[*** Capture is better, since White has no peep. But see how overconcentrated Black is?]B[eg]
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;C[*** The center fight should clinch the game by solidifying territory.]B[jh]
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;C[Maybe I should try something like this?
*** If you are ahead, why risk it? ]B[jg]
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;C[*** It is the left side and lower left quadrant where Black is weakest and where the plays are big. ]B[hj]
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;C[*** Black aims to settle his group and make White a bit overconcentrated.]B[cd]
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;B[dj]
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;B[di]
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;B[dg]
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;C[*** Prevents a White play here, which would be big, and strikes at White's weakness, which is the thin relation between the tengen stone and the stone on the top side.]B[je]
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