This was a game from this evening on KGS. I was maybe not feeling the sharpest, and so didn't read things through that well, but would appreciate some comments on where I need to put in more work. I feel my Tesuji skills are very poor, but my worst skills are in fighting..

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I'm not sure but I think 15 was a joseki error on Black's part.

See this


Black is cut in two and one group is under heavy attack (or maybe even dead)?

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This is the one I usually use. If I just need to connect to the original stone, I use the below:

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No, your cut is too soon for W. See vars.

I now understand that the cut is too early, but black's hane is also too early right? Is variation 2 in your diagram better?

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mogosoup, extend at Q15 is joseki, as mentioned in the SGF.

Thanks - very helpful. I clearly messed up that corner!