(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]
GN[Rank]PW[saran75 ]PB[videeke ]DT[2015- 8- 5-20-58-40]PC[Tygem Baduk]AN[Even : Black 6.5 Dum]MULTIGOGM[1]
;B[pd]
;W[pp]
;B[ce]
;W[dp]
;B[cn]
;W[fq]
;B[dk]
;W[dc]
;B[fc]
;W[cg]
;B[ee]
;W[be]
(;B[cd]C[this crawling seems very pasive, doesnt the hane work?]
;W[bd]
;B[cc]
;W[eg]
;B[ci]
;W[bc]
;B[bb]
;W[cf]
;B[bh]C[uhm, are you aware of the c18 aji? it seems weird that first you crawl passively on the second line for no appearent reason and then you ignore what looks like an actual threat]
;W[hc]
;B[gg]
;W[bg]
;B[af]C[what am I seeing..]
;W[di]
;B[cj]
;W[ch]
;B[bi]
;W[fi]
;B[jc]
;W[he]
;B[ef]
;W[fg]
;B[gf]
;W[db]
;B[cb]
;W[fb]
;B[eb]
;W[ec]
;B[gb]
;W[fd]
;B[gc]
;W[ed]
;B[ge]
;W[gd]
;B[df]
;W[hb]
;B[dg]
;W[dh]
;B[ag]C[do I actually need to explain to you that this result is horrific for black?]
(;W[bf]
;B[hi]
;W[ek]
(;B[hk]
;W[lc]
;B[el]
;W[fk]
;B[dj]
;W[ej]
;B[fl]
;W[ae]
;B[ac]
;W[gh]
;B[hh]
;W[gk]C[these white moves are quite bad, he shouldnt have let you hane at e8]
;B[gl]
;W[gi]
;B[hj]
;W[gj]
;B[kd]C[this feels like overplay because h18 is superstrong and you have the h13 cut]
;W[oc]
;B[pc]
;W[ld]
;B[kf]
;W[le]
;B[if]
;W[od]
;B[ob]
;W[nb]
;B[pb]
;W[oe]
;B[qf]
;W[qk]
;B[nq]
;W[oq]
;B[qi]
;W[qn]
;B[mb]
;W[nc]
;B[mg]
(;W[og]
;B[pf]
;W[ng]
;B[mf]
;W[lb]
;B[na]
;W[ke]
;B[je]
;W[kc]
;B[jd]
;W[jb]
;B[cq]
;W[cp]
;B[dq]
;W[ep]
;B[bp]
;W[bo]
;B[bq]
;W[co]
;B[bn]
;W[an]
;B[fr]
;W[gr]
(;B[eq]
;W[gp]
;B[er]
;W[dn]
;B[hq]
;W[gq]
;B[dm]
;W[en]
;B[np]
;W[hr]
;B[po]
;W[qo]
;B[qq]
;W[qp]
;B[or]
;W[pq]
;B[pr]
;W[qr]
;B[kq]C[those last few move by white were very passive imho]
;W[mr]
;B[nr]
;W[lq]
;B[lp]
;W[kr]
;B[jr]
;W[jq]
;B[kp]
;W[iq]
;B[ks]
;W[lr]
;B[mq]
;W[ir]
;B[ms]
;W[js]
;B[ml]
;W[mj]
;B[lj]
;W[li]
;B[mi]
;W[mh]
;B[ni]
;W[nh]
;B[lh]
;W[ki]
;B[nj]
;W[lg]
;B[kh]
;W[kg]
;B[jh]
;W[lf]
;B[jf]
;W[in]
;B[jm]
;W[jn]
;B[km]
;W[bm]
;B[cm]
;W[bl]
;B[ap]
;W[ao]
;B[rj]
;W[nn]
;B[mn]
;W[rk]
;B[sk]
;W[mo]
;B[lo]
;W[no]
;B[mp]
;W[sl]
;B[sj]
;W[rm]
;B[nm]
;W[oo]
;B[kn]
;W[om]
;B[rr]
;W[rq]
;B[qs]
;W[hm]
;B[hl]
;W[nl]
;B[mm]
;W[qh]
;B[rh]
;W[qg]
;B[rg]
;W[nk]
;B[mk]
;W[oj]
;B[oi]
;W[pj]
;B[pi]
;W[pg]
;B[gn]
;W[gm]
;B[im]
;W[hn]
;B[of]
;W[nf]
;B[mc]
;W[md]
;B[jo]
;W[io]
;B[op]
;W[pn]
;B[ip]
;W[fm]
;B[jp]
;W[hp]
;B[ma]
;W[oa]
;B[pa]
;W[la]
;B[oa]
;W[bk]
;B[ah]
;W[jg]
;B[ig]
;W[ns]
;B[os]
;W[qq]
;B[rs]
;W[sr]
;B[qj]
;W[ol]
;B[gs]
;W[hf]
;B[hg]
;W[pe]
;B[qe]
;W[ic]
;B[id]
;W[hd]
;B[oh]
;W[me]
;B[hs]
;W[ls]
;B[fs]
;W[ca]
;B[ba]
;W[da]
;B[ab])
(;B[er]C[no]
;W[gp]C[now you have sente]))
(;W[jb]C[doesnt this work?]
(;B[kb]
;W[kc]
(;B[ib]
;W[jd]
;B[ic]
;W[id]
;B[ja]
;W[lb])
(;B[lb]
;W[ic]
;B[jd]
;W[na]))
(;B[ib]
;W[kb])))
(;B[el]
;W[fk]
;B[hk]
;W[fl]
;B[em]C[this feels pretty good for black still, since h13 cut is a bit awkward]))
(;W[ae]C[should be here of course]))
(;B[bd]
(;W[bf]
;B[cd])
(;W[cd]
;B[dd]
;W[cc]
;B[bf])))
for the most part white played very passively (he probably felt ahead and wanted to be safe? I dunno) except in upper left, which imho was a disaster for black
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Any tips ?
attacking while being weak yourself simply doesnt work