My OGS friend 'dem' and I played this game over the last couple of months. I started the game at 9k and ended it at 7k, he started at 10k and for some reason is now 11k.
I've read through it once and added my own feelings about it (and would like feedback on my feedback) - the middle game makes me cringe, but it's a motivation to stop playing that way I suppose (and reviewing other recent games I can see a tendency emerging to make random anti-suji in the hope that some path emerges, for sure).
I should absolutely have lost this game multiple times over, but my friend very kindly let me back in.
We are hoping to get reviews from different sources, so I've brought it to L19. Feedback for both players would be much appreciated!
Lessons for Joel so far:
Stop making multiple weak groups (and stop flailing in general)
Play consistency and have a plan from move to move
Look at the whole board and re-check group status
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which I picked up from Takagawa that nobody has mentioned yet, a very important idea that made a big difference in my play as an SDK. While my first impulse for 
stones, there is a simple move that I now think may be better, a move that is obviously a good move once you think of it. 
See below.