A few comments on the opening.
(;CA[UTF-8]FF[4]GM[1]DT[2018-04-07]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/12371211]PB[Glum1]PW[Enog]BR[13k]WR[12k]TM[1200]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]CP[online-go.com]RE[B+R]SZ[19]KM[0.5]RU[japanese]AB[pd]AP[Sabaki:0.33.4] ;W[dp] ;B[pq] ;W[dd] ;B[qk] ;W[nc] ;B[pf] ;W[kq] ;B[po]C[This feels a little flat for black. The usual ideas if continuing locally are A or B, but you can also tenuki at, for example, C.]LB[fq:C][mp:A][np:B] ;W[jn] ;B[ic] ;W[gc] ;B[lc] ;W[qc] ;B[pc] ;W[pb] ;B[ob] ;W[qb] ;B[oc] ;W[re] ;B[rg]LB[rf:A]C[A, the joseki move, is more forceful here.] ;W[hf] ;B[le]C[Small. Maybe look at the left side and wedge at A or approach at B.]LB[cj:A][cn:B] ;W[kg] ;B[mg] ;W[lj] ;B[ni]TR[kg][lj][mg][ni]C[The marked exchanges are better for white than black. Black seems to be answering passively.] ;W[cj]C[So it's big for white to get to play in the most open area first.] ;B[cq] ;W[cp] ;B[dq] ;W[ep] ;B[eq] ;W[fq] ;B[fr] ;W[gq] ;B[gr] ;W[hq] ;B[bp]LB[ej:A]C[Black is already alive at the bottom and can play at A instead of continuing here, which strengthens white too much.] ;W[bo] ;B[bq] ;W[ef] ;B[cc] ;W[db] ;B[dc] ;W[eb] ;B[ec] ;W[cd] ;B[fb]C[Reading error?] ;W[fc] ;B[gb] ;W[hb] ;B[hc] ;W[ga] ;B[fd] ;W[gd] ;B[ge] ;W[fa]C[The opening is a success for white. In general, black should play more actively. The marked moves are thinking only about black's area.]TR[bp][mg][ni][po] ;B[ed] ;W[he] ;B[ff] ;W[ee] ;B[cf] ;W[de] ;B[bd] ;W[be] ;B[fe] ;W[eg] ;B[fg] ;W[eh] ;B[gh] ;W[fi] ;B[gi] ;W[gk] ;B[ij] ;W[ji] ;B[ii] ;W[ih] ;B[gj] ;W[fj] ;B[hk] ;W[gl] ;B[hl] ;W[hh] ;B[hi] ;W[fh] ;B[gg] ;W[jk] ;B[hn] ;W[gm] ;B[jm] ;W[hm] ;B[im] ;W[km] ;B[kl] ;W[jl] ;B[jj] ;W[kk] ;B[kj] ;W[lk] ;B[ki] ;W[hd] ;B[jh] ;W[if] ;B[kn] ;W[lm] ;B[il] ;W[jo] ;B[in] ;W[go] ;B[gn] ;W[fn] ;B[fo] ;W[en] ;B[bc] ;W[ce] ;B[ml] ;W[ll] ;B[nk] ;W[on] ;B[mn] ;W[mm] ;B[nm] ;W[nn] ;B[mo] ;W[om] ;B[np] ;W[nl] ;B[mk] ;W[ln] ;B[ol] ;W[nm] ;B[pm] ;W[pn] ;B[qm] ;W[qn] ;B[rp] ;W[rn] ;B[rm] ;W[nr] ;B[or] ;W[nq] ;B[oq] ;W[hr] ;B[mi] ;W[gs] ;B[er] ;W[ib] ;B[jc] ;W[lp] ;B[jg] ;W[jf] ;B[kf] ;W[ke] ;B[lf] ;W[kd] ;B[kc] ;W[li] ;B[lh] ;W[mp] ;B[no] ;W[ho] ;B[io] ;W[ip] ;B[ko] ;W[lo] ;B[jp] ;W[jq] ;B[kp] ;W[sm] ;B[sl] ;W[sn] ;B[rk] ;W[sp] ;B[sq] ;W[so] ;B[rr] ;W[cb] ;B[bb] ;W[ba] ;B[jb] ;W[qo] ;B[qp] ;W[oo] ;B[op] ;W[qe] ;B[pe] ;W[rf] ;B[qf] ;W[mj] ;B[nj] ;W[ld] ;B[md] ;W[id] ;B[jd] ;W[je] ;B[ia] ;W[oa] ;B[na] ;W[pa] ;B[nb] ;W[qd] ;B[sf] ;W[se] ;B[sg] ;W[rb] ;B[ig] ;W[hg] ;B[ao] ;W[an] ;B[co] ;W[bn] ;B[cn] ;W[cm] ;B[bm] )
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