Here is one of the most recent games that I have played, please criticize and help me improve:
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| Author: | PROVOK3 [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 9:46 pm ] | ||
| Post subject: | Help me improve my game | ||
Here is one of the most recent games that I have played, please criticize and help me improve:
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| Author: | Joaz Banbeck [ Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:38 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
It's late here, so I have just time for a few comments. Your grasp of fuseki seems very good for 13K - you had good balance through the first 20 moves. Work a little on joseki and you'll be several stones stronger. In particular, move 5 at N16 is stretching too far. O16 is most often played, though O17 and N17 have been seen too. A few other thoughts before my forehead bumps the keyboard: try to avoid the empty triangle shape ( http://senseis.xmp.net/?TheEmptyTriangleIsBad ), and avoid being on the receiving end of the hane at the head of two stones ( http://senseis.xmp.net/?HaneAtTheHeadOfTwoStones ) as happened at moves 11/12. |
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| Author: | Joaz Banbeck [ Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
| Author: | Mosdefgo [ Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
Just a quick thought: You were pretty fortunate that your opponent didnt kill your lower left group with a move at A6 instead of A5. |
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| Author: | Redundant [ Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
Mosdefgo wrote: Just a quick thought: You were pretty fortunate that your opponent didnt kill your lower left group with a move at A6 instead of A5. A6-B6, then A4 and A5 are miai for two eyes. |
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| Author: | Mosdefgo [ Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
Redundant wrote: Mosdefgo wrote: Just a quick thought: You were pretty fortunate that your opponent didnt kill your lower left group with a move at A6 instead of A5. A6-B6, then A4 and A5 are miai for two eyes.   That shows just how rusty I am. Thank you for the correction.
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| Author: | judicata [ Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Help me improve my game |
Regarding Black 5--I agree with Joaz that it is generally too loose. My comment is just sort of an aside: It amazes me that virtually every response to an approach (and virtually every approach) can be a good move depending on the overall position. Here is a game between Fujisawa Shuko (w) and Go Seigen (b) (white won by 2 points): And here is a game between Kato Masao and Hua Yigang in 1973, in which Masao uses the response: (full disclosure, Masao loses this game) Again, I completely agree that a bit tighter response is usually better, and this is an unusual move (27 pro games in my database of tens of thousands of games). Still, I thought it was interesting. |
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