At the moment, win ratio is about 2:1, so it will take about 40 games to move up one rank. My reading is getting better but at a snail's pace.

Strong players critique are most welcome.

In this game, you completely outplay white, who seems desperate to make enough weak groups that one will die. It would be easier and more helpful to critique a loss or close game.

Makes sense. I'll go play one now.