Most of my comments centre around: (a) have consistent plans, and stick to them; (b) learn the difference between which points are big and which are small; (c) avoid tunnel vision (tenuki when an area of the board stops being big).
- Up to move 28 looks okay to me (though personally I would have played 24 at K16). Move 21 was clearly premature - make it look silly. 30 and the following moves are a little vague. In particular:
- Your shape at the top is weak. Be careful of the cutting points you've left now that black's strengthened his stones.
- Can you really afford the crazy shape at 34? If black cuts at M11 and then connects at N13, what's your plan?
- 38 is very small. It's not useful for black to invade there, and it's not big even if he does.
- 44 is a meaningless threat that just serves to strengthen black and gets L9 captured.
- 52 and 54 are very small. As black made a mistake at 55, you got to play 56, which was a good move, but you must follow it up by connecting at Q10, which will significantly weaken R10. 58 feels very small. 60 is a pass.
- 64 is not urgent now that you and black are both more or less locally alive. The moves from 66 to 72 gave black territory (is 66 even sente?).
- It's not quite clear to me what 82 does. If you wanted territory in that area, G9 is bigger.
- 84: If you care about the stone you put down at F11, don't abandon it when it gets attacked! (Though I don't really think the F11 stone came to any use. What was your plan for it, and why did you give it up?)
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