One thing I'm always worried about when giving review is that I'm insinuating there's one correct way to play the game. Playing next to stones has their time and place, and advice to stop playing attachments should be taken with grain of salt. Later in your journey you may learn about sabaki techniques that make use of attachments.
Advice like "don't play next to stones" is just giving shortcut to relatively good playing. I strongly encourage you to experiment with different moves and shapes. Being shown how they work or don't work should make it so that you have fewer gaps in your understanding. Be wary of becoming bookish joseki slave who thinks their play is perfect and sees no room to improvise. I like your style of playing.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[0.50]TM[1800]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]
PW[liroye]PB[Vladimir]WR[8k]BR[9k]DT[2013-04-30]PC[The KGS Go Server at http://www.gokgs.com/]C[Vladimir [9k]: hi gg
]RE[W+52.50]
;B[pd]BL[1788.908]
;W[pp]WL[1797.853]
;B[dd]BL[1786.046]C[liroye [8k]: hi gg 2
]
;W[cp]WL[1793.643]
;B[eq]BL[1738.202]
;W[ep]WL[1786.98]
;B[fp]BL[1711.714]
;W[eo]WL[1782.022]
(;B[ip]BL[1701.687]C[Toge: Moving out to J4 at this point leaves white good move at D3.]
;W[dq]WL[1780.477]
(;B[er]BL[1695.396]C[Toge: I would just connect.]
;W[dr]WL[1778.336]
(;B[oq]BL[1689.166]C[Toge: Black's stone becomes outnumbered.]
;W[pq]WL[1775.238]
;B[lp]BL[1675.274]
;W[nq]WL[1772.579]
;B[op]BL[1672.574]
;W[or]WL[1771.815]
;B[pr]BL[1652.39]
;W[qr]WL[1769.84]
;B[nr]BL[1650.251]
;W[ps]WL[1768.666]
;B[np]BL[1647.489]
;W[mq]WL[1766.667]
;B[mr]BL[1643.948]
;W[lq]WL[1763.087]
;B[lr]BL[1622.677]
;W[kq]WL[1759.893]
;B[kr]BL[1619.177]
;W[kp]WL[1749.592]
;B[lo]BL[1599.832]
;W[jo]WL[1747.012]
;B[im]BL[1591.362]
;W[jn]WL[1739.848]
;B[jm]BL[1586.999]
;W[kn]WL[1736.692]
;B[nl]BL[1558.564]
;W[lm]WL[1717.096]
;B[kl]BL[1528.746]
;W[nn]WL[1669.394]
;B[on]BL[1505.124]
;W[no]WL[1644.516]
;B[oo]BL[1481.555]
;W[mp]WL[1642.457]
(;B[mn]BL[1430.635]C[Toge: Black need not worry about the stones inside. They make cross shape which means white will only have one eye inside. Generally the best way to play is to surround first and benefit from the attack that way even if you don't kill the stones.]
;W[mo]WL[1617.811]
;B[mm]BL[1408.273]
;W[nm]WL[1607.963]
;B[ml]BL[1337.096]
;W[om]WL[1600.729]
;B[pn]BL[1319.849]C[Toge: As soon as you figure out your stones are going to die, it's best to not add more to the dead group

]
;W[pm]WL[1599.223]
;B[qn]BL[1312.414]
;W[qm]WL[1598.297]
;B[rn]BL[1299.612]
;W[rm]WL[1596.783]
;B[sm]BL[1285.052]
;W[sl]WL[1595.049]
;B[sn]BL[1277.332]
;W[rk]WL[1593.561]
;B[ln]BL[1270.642]
;W[jr]WL[1583.619]
;B[jq]BL[1261.402]
;W[iq]WL[1581.97]
;B[jp]BL[1256.039]
;W[hp]WL[1576.275]
;B[io]BL[1252.073]
;W[hr]WL[1573.36]
;B[ho]BL[1211.37]
;W[gp]WL[1569.959]
;B[go]BL[1199.377]
;W[fq]WL[1567.396]
;B[fo]BL[1162.168]
;W[en]WL[1556.987]
;B[gq]BL[1152.704]
;W[hq]WL[1553.076]
;B[gr]BL[1143.455]
;W[gs]WL[1548.911]
;B[fr]BL[1134.649]
;W[ks]WL[1546.868]
;B[ls]BL[1115.89]
;W[js]WL[1522.913]
;B[is]BL[1108.966]C[Toge: Very nice.]
;W[rp]WL[1485.047]C[liroye [8k]: good
]
;B[pj]BL[1089.811]
;W[qj]WL[1481.897]
;B[qi]BL[1082.11]
;W[ri]WL[1477.294]
;B[ql]BL[1043.011]
;W[qk]WL[1456.506]
;B[pl]BL[1030.74]
;W[pk]WL[1453.046]
;B[ol]BL[1017.86]
;W[rl]WL[1451.366]
;B[oj]BL[1006.913]
;W[qh]WL[1447.767]
;B[pi]BL[984.552]
;W[qe]WL[1438.384]
;B[qd]BL[978.461]
;W[pe]WL[1436.756]
;B[oe]BL[971.805]
;W[of]WL[1435.044]
;B[nf]BL[888.708]
;W[og]WL[1428.702]
;B[re]BL[878.385]
;W[rf]WL[1425.866]
;B[se]BL[861.481]
;W[sf]WL[1420.578]
;B[rc]BL[851.027]
;W[qg]WL[1419.528]C[Toge [1d]: t15 is better played as straight connection at s16 or sometimes t16
]
;B[ng]BL[829.078]
;W[oh]WL[1416.363]
;B[nh]BL[816.101]
;W[ok]WL[1415.069]
;B[nj]BL[809.295]
;W[nk]WL[1412.553]
;B[mk]BL[805.738]
;W[mj]WL[1407.582]
;B[ni]BL[791.513]
;W[ko]WL[1404.925]
;B[km]BL[785.042]
;W[nd]WL[1403.917]
;B[od]BL[778.063]
;W[nc]WL[1395.368]
;B[lc]BL[757.55]
;W[gc]WL[1388.416]
;B[ic]BL[748.46]
;W[ge]WL[1385.96]
;B[ie]BL[741.417]
;W[db]WL[1384.165]
;B[cc]BL[721.781]
;W[ec]WL[1381.034]
;B[dg]BL[715.221]
;W[cj]WL[1377.857]
;B[dl]BL[667.031]C[Toge: You have good sense of attacking and reducing opponent's territories.]
;W[cl]WL[1367.713]
;B[cm]BL[661.508]
;W[dm]WL[1361.044]
;B[em]BL[655.62]
;W[dn]WL[1359.258]
;B[ck]BL[640.088]
;W[bl]WL[1357.614]
;B[ek]BL[636.868]C[Toge: This shape doesn't work in this case. I'll show you why.]
;W[bk]WL[1354.737]
;B[dk]BL[629.505]LB[bk:4][ck:1][dk:3][ek:5][bl:2]C[Toge: Imagine the stones were played in different order. Move number 5 would feel silly for black, wouldn't it? We can see here that solid connection of 3 protects against atari of 4 in better shape.]
;W[bg]WL[1352.476]
;B[cf]BL[620.05]
;W[bf]WL[1350.521]
;B[be]BL[617.109]
;W[cb]WL[1348.933]
;B[bb]BL[610.486]
;W[gg]WL[1344.831]
;B[fn]BL[598.624]
;W[cg]WL[1325.522]
;B[de]BL[585.7]
;W[dh]WL[1323.926]
;B[eh]BL[579.291]
;W[eg]WL[1320.214]
;B[df]BL[576.324]
;W[di]WL[1316.533]
;B[ei]BL[555.003]
;W[gi]WL[1305.821]
;B[fg]BL[545.622]
;W[ff]WL[1304.538]
;B[ef]BL[541.862]
;W[fe]WL[1300.656]
(;B[ed]BL[506.854]C[Toge: This doesn't really do anything except making white repair his shape.]
;W[fd]WL[1298.729]
;B[hi]BL[476.806]
;W[hh]WL[1294.297]SQ[gg][hh][gi]C[Toge: Take note of this shape. White has tiger's mouth with marked stones. It's very effective.]
(;B[hg]BL[468.094]C[Toge: This black stone is immediately outnumbered two to one and white can next add a third stone. When attacking, try to keep distance.]
;W[hf]WL[1287.856]
;B[ig]BL[462.644]
;W[if]WL[1286.888]
;B[jf]BL[439.779]
;W[jg]WL[1284.07]
;B[ih]BL[436.771]
;W[je]WL[1261.967]
(;B[hd]BL[389.707]C[Toge: This is the last nail to coffin. White gets powerful ponnuki right in the middle of your territory.
End of comments.]
;W[kf]WL[1257.072]
;B[gd]BL[374.101]
;W[jd]WL[1244.079]
;B[gh]BL[345.679]
;W[id]WL[1238.141]
;B[hc]BL[334.309]
;W[jc]WL[1232.405]
;B[jb]BL[306.875]
;W[kb]WL[1230.904]
;B[gb]BL[298.951]
;W[fc]WL[1224.491]
;B[he]BL[278.637]
;W[ib]WL[1219.236]
;B[hb]BL[265.976]
;W[ja]WL[1218.167]
;B[gf]BL[254.387]
;W[jf]WL[1214.209]
;B[eb]BL[228.25]
;W[fb]WL[1201.155]
;B[fa]BL[217.376]
;W[ea]WL[1199.822]
;B[me]BL[185.142]
;W[ld]WL[1186.921]
;B[md]BL[168.03]
;W[mc]WL[1181.481]
;B[oc]BL[159.059]
;W[ne]WL[1176.281]
;B[mb]BL[141.776]
;W[nb]WL[1172.795]
;B[ob]BL[127.774]
;W[le]WL[1166.92]
;B[mf]BL[117.351]
;W[lb]WL[1161.936]
;B[na]BL[106.248]
;W[kc]WL[1159.054]
;B[mc]BL[103.77]
;W[ki]WL[1158.232]
;B[jj]BL[86.785]
;W[lj]WL[1156.94]
;B[lk]BL[83.18]
;W[ji]WL[1148.112]
;B[ii]BL[74.334]C[Toge [1d]: n17 felt like reflex. It's quite small move at this stage. Securing the rest of the center should bring black close to victory
]
;W[kk]WL[1143.019]
;B[kj]BL[64.564]
;W[ll]WL[1138.705]C[Vladimir [9k]:

Vladimir [9k]: icant believe this
]
;B[jk]BL[26.736]C[liroye [8k]: it was just a pression ...
]
;W[lk]WL[1134.566]
;B[dj]BL[10.819]
;W[ci]WL[1132.563]
;B[bm]BL[1.291]
;W[cn]WL[1126.69]
;B[bn]BL[30]OB[5]
;W[bo]WL[1125.195]
;B[ds]BL[30]OB[5]
;W[cs]WL[1121.999]
;B[es]BL[30]OB[5]
;W[cr]WL[1115.833]
;B[dc]BL[30]OB[5]
;W[ga]WL[1112.943]
;B[rq]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[rr]WL[1104.148]
;B[sp]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[qq]WL[1102.476]
;B[sq]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[sr]WL[1098.947]
;B[so]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[ro]WL[1087.825]
;B[ns]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[os]WL[1084.064]
;B[ir]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[ba]WL[1077.628]
;B[ab]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[in]WL[1074.998]
;B[hn]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[lg]WL[1054.087]
;B[mh]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[lh]WL[1052.193]
;B[jh]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[kh]WL[1051.253]
;B[lf]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[mi]WL[1046.691]
;B[ph]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[pg]WL[1045.25]
;B[af]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[ag]WL[1042.775]
;B[ae]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[la]WL[1041.278]
;B[bh]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[bi]WL[1035.759]
;B[aj]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[ai]WL[1017.527]
;B[ak]BL[30]OB[4]
;W[bj]WL[1010.5]
;B[]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[fm]WL[1009.23]
;B[el]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[hm]WL[1006.921]
;B[hl]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[1004.951]
;B[ch]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[ah]WL[1001.832]
;B[gf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[il]WL[999.452]
;B[gm]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[996.237]
;B[qp]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[qo]WL[993.371]
;B[gf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[jl]WL[992.486]
;B[ik]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[990.948]
;B[ke]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[kd]WL[988.482]
;B[gf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[sd]WL[987.479]
;B[rd]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[985.292]
;B[qf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[pf]WL[982.937]
;B[gf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[fs]WL[980.014]
;B[hs]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[978.947]
;B[qs]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[rs]WL[975.993]
;B[gf]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[bc]WL[973.638]C[hophong1: hi
]
;B[bd]BL[30]OB[3]
;W[gg]WL[970.953]
;B[oi]BL[30]OB[2]
;W[gf]WL[959.335]
;B[sh]BL[30]OB[2]
;W[rh]WL[954.999]C[liroye [8k]: thx for the gg
]
;B[]BL[30]OB[2]
;W[ca]WL[954.192]C[Vladimir [9k]: ty
]
;B[]BL[30]OB[2]
;W[aa]WL[951.216]
;B[ac]BL[30]OB[2]
;W[]WL[951.215]
;B[]BL[30]OB[2]TW[da][fa][ha][ia][ka][eb][gb][hb][jb][hc][ic][gd][hd][he][ie][ke][qf][kg][rg][sg][bh][ch][sh][li][si][aj][rj][sj][ak][mk][sk][al][ml][nl][ol][pl][ql][am][bm][cm][mm][sm][an][bn][ln][mn][on][pn][qn][rn][sn][ao][co][do][lo][oo][po][so][ap][bp][dp][lp][np][op][qp][sp][aq][bq][cq][oq][rq][sq][ar][br][pr][as][bs][qs][ss]TB[oa][pa][qa][ra][sa][nb][pb][qb][rb][sb][bc][nc][pc][qc][sc][ad][cd][nd][sd][ce][ne][eg][fh][hh][fi][gi][ej][fj][gj][hj][ij][fk][gk][hk][fl][gl][il][jl][fm][hm][gn][gp][hp][fq][hq][iq][hr][jr][fs][gs][js][ks][ms]C[Toge [1d]: I wish I could review
Vladimir [9k]: i would like that also
Vladimir [9k]: i'll ppst this game in my thread
])
(;B[kf]C[Toge: There is no other option but to play this.]))
(;B[jh]C[Toge: Perhaps like this? White group lives, but it's alright.]))
(;B[hf]C[Toge: Black could poke here. White is effectively connected, so the trade of H14 to G14 gives black more effective outside shape and white group is no stronger.]
;W[gf]C[Toge: White connects.]
;B[ih]C[Toge: Afterwards black could jump a bit longer without risk of getting cut, making nice framework to center.]))
(;B[nm]TR[om]C[Toge: Protects cutting point.]))
(;B[nq]C[Toge: This is usual approach.]))
(;B[fq]
;W[dr]C[Toge: Black doesn't need to respond to this yet.]))
(;B[dq]
;W[cq]
;B[iq]
;W[cj]C[Toge: This is one way both players have balanced result. Black ends in sente.]))