Main lesson: many people at these levels like to focus on the opening moves.
Of course, the opening is interesting and it's good to study.
But what they fail to understand is their biggest mistakes are not in the opening moves.
Rather, it is in their follow-ups.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[-5.50]TM[60]
PW[kuma1409]PB[golearner9]WR[12k]BR[13k]DT[2014-03-03]PC[IGS:]C[ ]RE[B+29.50]LT[]NB[16]NW[17]RR[Normal]
;B[pd]BL[47]
;W[dc]WL[60]
;B[pq]BL[43]
;W[cp]WL[54]
;B[qk]BL[15]
;W[dj]WL[51]
;B[fp]BL[597]
;W[cm]WL[46]
;B[jq]BL[561]
;W[jd]WL[43]
;B[cf]BL[528]C[gs. This is probably a bad move.
e. No problem at these levels -- all your big mistakes come later, in the follow-ups.]
(;W[ch]WL[37]C[See var.]
(;B[gd]BL[499]C[gs. another bad move i guessed.
See var.]
;W[de]WL[34]
;B[ff]BL[470]
;W[df]WL[31]
;B[ed]BL[464]C[Bad exchange -- good for W, bad for B.]
;W[dd]WL[29]
;B[gf]BL[444]LB[ed:3][gd:1][cf:a][ff:2][gf:4]C[Very, very slow.
Locally, we see a common problem, misunderstanding, at these levels.
Many people at these levels like to focus on opening moves, such as where to play (a).
However, that is not the biggest problem. The biggest mistakes are in the Follow-ups.
Here, after (a), out of the four follow-ups, at least two are iffy.
THAT is the main problem -- mistakes in the follow-ups.]
;W[mc]WL[27]
(;B[nc]BL[438]C[gs. i want to make it over concentrated. is this okay ?
e. Not OK. Bad move. Basics mistake. See var.]
;W[md]WL[26]LB[nc:a][nd:b]C[Notice you forced W to be stronger --
W has now gained 1 liberty, from 4 to 5, than before this contact move.
Your (a) stone, on the other hand, has lost 1 liberty on contact, from 4 to 3.
Your force W to become stronger, and your (a) weaker, at this moment.
Now you have to continue to push at (b) to continue this contact fight...]
(;B[pf]BL[432]LB[nb:c][mc:b][nc:a][nd:d]C[...which you failed to do.
Notice after your bad (a)-(b) exchange, which made W stronger and your (a) weaker,
locally W has sente moves, such as (c), (d), etc.
See var.]
(;W[ph]WL[23]C[See var.]
;B[ok]BL[403]
;W[nh]WL[20]
;B[nf]BL[393]
;W[lh]WL[16]
;B[lf]BL[386]
;W[ne]WL[13]
;B[oe]BL[376]
;W[nd]WL[12]
;B[oc]BL[358]
;W[jf]WL[10]
;B[mg]BL[317]
;W[mh]WL[6]
;B[kg]BL[313]
;W[ec]WL[2]
(;B[fc]BL[295]
;W[ee]WL[600]
(;B[fd]BL[289]C[Again, too slow, too small. See vars.]
;W[hc]WL[599]LB[ic:c][fd:b][cf:a]TR[hb]C[gs. would triangle be better? i want to settle this group but i failed completely.
e. You are one step behind W, because of your slow move (b).
You wanted B (c) for yourself, to try to make a base.
Now W gets this huge shared point first. It is now too late
for you to settle here.
Another local tally -- after your opening move (a),
out of your 6 local follow-ups, 3 of them are iffy.
The biggest problem is not in your opening moves.
It is in your follow-ups.]
;B[gb]BL[252]
;W[hb]WL[595]
;B[ie]BL[214]
;W[je]WL[593]
;B[id]BL[209]
;W[ic]WL[592]
;B[jc]BL[192]
;W[kc]WL[590]
;B[jb]BL[188]
;W[kb]WL[589]
;B[jg]BL[114]
;W[if]WL[576]
;B[hh]BL[89]
;W[ig]WL[506]
;B[ih]BL[594]
;W[hg]WL[501]
;B[eg]BL[487]TR[gg][fh]C[this looks weird but i was trying to avoid toothpaste since i cannot stop white from pushing through if i played at either triangle point.]
;W[gg]WL[491]
;B[dg]BL[480]
;W[cg]WL[489]
;B[ei]BL[433]
;W[gh]WL[403]
;B[di]BL[413]
;W[ci]WL[325]
;B[cj]BL[398]
;W[dk]WL[320]
;B[bj]BL[376]
;W[bf]WL[316]
;B[fj]BL[366]
;W[gi]WL[314]
;B[gj]BL[352]
;W[hi]WL[312]
;B[hj]BL[333]
;W[ii]WL[309]
;B[ji]BL[324]
;W[ij]WL[307]
;B[jj]BL[318]
;W[ik]WL[305]TR[fj][gj][hj]C[at this point i thought the three triangle stones are enough for my escape but i was wrong. ]
;B[jk]BL[308]
;W[mk]WL[301]TR[gm]C[maybe playing at triangle point is better?]
;B[jm]BL[263]
;W[il]WL[299]
;B[jl]BL[260]
;W[mm]WL[296]
;B[pn]BL[249]
;W[fl]WL[294]
;B[gl]BL[244]
;W[gm]WL[597]
;B[hl]BL[235]
;W[hk]WL[596]
;B[gk]BL[232]
;W[hm]WL[595]
;B[im]BL[115]
;W[fm]WL[576]
;B[hd]BL[110]
;W[fe]WL[572]
;B[ha]BL[100]
;W[ja]WL[570]
;B[gc]BL[69]
;W[ib]WL[479]
;B[mp]BL[15]
;W[oj]WL[477]
;B[pj]BL[12]
;W[oi]WL[474]
;B[qh]BL[581]
;W[qg]WL[472]
;B[pg]BL[564]
;W[qi]WL[467]
;B[rh]BL[562]
;W[ri]WL[459]
;B[pi]BL[556]
;W[oh]WL[457]
;B[rg]BL[551]
;W[nk]WL[455]
;B[ol]BL[540]
;W[nl]WL[453]
;B[om]BL[501]
;W[ll]WL[430]
;B[lj]BL[453]
;W[mj]WL[426]
;B[lk]BL[444]
;W[li]WL[424]
;B[ni]BL[438]
;W[ln]WL[419]
;B[km]BL[410]
;W[nn]WL[415]
;B[mo]BL[395]
;W[mn]WL[413]TR[kp]C[maybe triangle point better ?]
;B[jo]BL[367]
;W[lp]WL[409]
;B[lq]BL[363]
;W[np]WL[407]
;B[nq]BL[352]
;W[no]WL[405]
;B[op]BL[341]
;W[lo]WL[396]
;B[mq]BL[338]
;W[po]WL[598]
;B[oo]BL[308]
;W[on]WL[594]
;B[qo]BL[287]
;W[pm]WL[592]
;B[qn]BL[257]
;W[ql]WL[588]
;B[qm]BL[248]
;W[nm]WL[583]
;B[lm]BL[239]
;W[pl]WL[580]
;B[pk]BL[236]
;W[rl]WL[579]
;B[rk]BL[230]
;W[rj]WL[578]
;B[sl]BL[223]
;W[rm]WL[570]
;B[rn]BL[597]
;W[jp]WL[564]
;B[ip]BL[568]
;W[kq]WL[558]
;B[kp]BL[564]
;W[lg]WL[551]
;B[kf]BL[541]
;W[kj]WL[549]
;B[kk]BL[538]
;W[jh]WL[548]
;B[kh]BL[531]
;W[ng]WL[546]
;B[mf]BL[524]
;W[eq]WL[539]
;B[fq]BL[519]
;W[ep]WL[537]
;B[fo]BL[508]
;W[eo]WL[535]
;B[fn]BL[496]
;W[en]WL[533]
;B[mb]BL[433]
;W[lb]WL[530]
;B[na]BL[411]
;W[la]WL[528]
;B[er]BL[383]
;W[dr]WL[525]
;B[fr]BL[380]
;W[ho]WL[522]
;B[hp]BL[376]
;W[go]WL[521]
;B[ds]BL[338]
;W[cs]WL[516]
;B[cr]BL[300]
;W[es]WL[598]
;B[fs]BL[297]
;W[gp]WL[597]
;B[gq]BL[287]
;W[br]WL[593]
;B[ds]BL[274]
;W[cq]WL[592]
;B[ih]BL[238]
;W[in]WL[587]
;B[jn]BL[231]
;W[gn]WL[585]
;B[io]BL[226]
;W[ma]WL[581]
;B[nb]BL[222]
;W[od]WL[581]
;B[pc]BL[218]
;W[ke]WL[580]
;B[le]BL[594]
;W[ld]WL[579]
;B[og]BL[523]C[not sure what i was thinking . hmm]
;W[qe]WL[568]
;B[pe]BL[519]
;W[rc]WL[566]
;B[qf]BL[513]
;W[qb]WL[564]
;B[ra]BL[510]
;W[pb]WL[562]
;B[sb]BL[492]
;W[rd]WL[561]
;B[re]BL[485]
;W[se]WL[560]
;B[rf]BL[471]
;W[ob]WL[558]
;B[rb]BL[439]
;W[qa]WL[555]
;B[oa]BL[395]
;W[qc]WL[551]
;B[qd]BL[385]
;W[sd]WL[549]
;B[hn]BL[366]
;W[sc]WL[540]
;B[in]BL[353]
;W[hh]WL[536]
;B[jh]BL[348]
;W[me]WL[532]
;B[es]BL[334]
;W[ki]WL[507]
;B[kr]BL[292]
;W[hr]WL[501]
;B[hq]BL[288]
;W[sa]WL[587]
;B[rb]BL[284]
;W[]WL[587]
;B[]BL[279]
;W[]WL[587]C[]
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(;B[ic]C[Try to make a base. See also 3rd var.])
(;B[fi]C[Run !]))
(;B[ee]C[would the alternative be a better move ?]))
(;W[nb]LB[mc:b][nc:a][pf:c]C[Thanks to your bad (a)-(b) exchange, plus the (c) tenuki,
now W can take away your cash, in sente. See continuation.]
;B[oc]
;W[ob]LB[nc:1][pd:a][pf:2]C[W continues to take away your cash, in sente.
A similar pattern emerges in this corner -- after your opening move (a),
both your local follow-ups, (1) and (2), are iffy.
Once again, the biggest problem is not in your opening moves.
It is in your follow-ups.]
;B[pb]
;W[qc]
;B[pc]))
(;B[nd]LB[mc:b][nc:a]C[Once you start the contact fight (a)-(b), you have to continue with the fight.]))
(;B[oc]LB[kc:a]C[In this case, don't make contact with W to make W stronger.
For example, if you don't make W stronger, then W still has weaknesses
such as (a). Your contact exchange in the game forced W to fix his weakness !]))
(;B[cc]C[Interesting to look up this joseki.]
;W[cd]
;B[dd]
;W[bc]
;B[cb]
;W[de]
;B[ed]
;W[ce]
;B[bb]
;W[fe]
;B[ee]
;W[ef]
;B[ec]
;W[df]C[Look up and study this joseki.]))
(;W[cd]))