Hi, well not being a Dan level player it's quite possible everything I say is 180 degrees wrong
but you might find it interesting to see what comments I made. - I haven't had much experience reviewing other people's game records either
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]RU[Japanese]SZ[19]HA[5]KM[0.50]TM[1500]OT[
5x30 byo-yomi]PW[zync]PB[supernerd]WR[14k]BR[19k]DT[2014-05-21]PC[The KGS Go Ser
ver at http://www.gokgs.com/]AB[dd][pd][jj][dp][pp]C[supernerd [19k?]: hi gg
zync [14k]: hi gg
]RE[W+4.50];W[qn]WL[1492.471];B[nq]BL[1497.408];W[qp]WL[1489.89];B[qq]BL[1491.80
4];W[rp]WL[1441.286];B[rq]BL[1485.741]C[I'd play elsewhere, eg R10 or R9];W[sp]W
L[1418.655]C[7 should be elsewhere - definately not good to play the first line,
e.g. White should extend or make another approach IMO]
(;B[sq]BL[1471.578]C[No need to play this move, especially this early.];W[on]WL[
1411.678];B[pj]BL[1458.788]C[I think that's a good move, perhaps better to play
R10? either way it's a big move.];W[op]WL[1410.327];B[oq]BL[1453.056];W[np]WL[13
86.033];B[mp]BL[1435.854];W[mn]WL[1372.397];B[lp]BL[1403.972];W[jq]WL[1358.906];
B[kq]BL[1380.557];W[kp]WL[1344.799]
(;B[jp]BL[1368.014];W[ko]WL[1343.368];B[iq]BL[1353.245];W[jr]WL[1340.78];B[kr]BL
[1350.729];W[ip]WL[1325.574];B[hp]BL[1326.8];W[io]WL[1317.25];B[ir]BL[1317.712];
W[js]WL[1307.214];B[fp]BL[1309.838];W[ho]WL[1300.124];B[gp]BL[1302.549];W[ks]WL[
1275.459];B[ls]BL[1298.046];W[jo]WL[1274.254];B[is]BL[1291.817];W[jp]WL[1271.595
];B[lr]BL[1285.175];W[gr]WL[1241.555];B[gq]BL[1264.628];W[fr]WL[1232.588];B[er]B
L[1252.79];W[cp]WL[1208.52];B[co]BL[1247.296];W[bp]WL[1152.924];B[bo]BL[1242.625
];W[dr]WL[1145.673];B[eq]BL[1220.457];W[es]WL[1138.795];B[cq]BL[1196.209];W[bq]W
L[1123.734];B[cr]BL[1175.132];W[do]WL[1109.275];B[dn]BL[1143.967];W[eo]WL[1104.5
27];B[ep]BL[1135.995];W[en]WL[1092.229];B[dm]BL[1130.891];W[em]WL[1046.637];B[dk
]BL[1116.435];W[fk]WL[1039.158];B[dh]BL[1110.527];W[dj]WL[1030.733];B[ck]BL[1088
.135];W[ao]WL[1016.899];B[an]BL[1078.112];W[bn]WL[995.167];B[cn]BL[1037.916];W[am]WL[967.798];B[bm]BL[1025.764];W[an]WL[964.676];B[al]
BL[1018.805];W[dl]WL[950.109];B[cl]BL[1009.322];W[el]WL[948.076];B[cj]BL[1006.332];W[ej]WL[939.618];B[ap]BL[994.187];W[di]WL[916.243];
B[ci]BL[986.633];W[ef]WL[880.088];B[df]BL[974.089];W[cf]WL[868.427];B[de]BL[962.112];W[bd]WL[845.078];B[cc]BL[943.876];W[bc]WL[826.868
];B[cb]BL[933.05];W[bb]WL[825.152];B[cg]BL[905.884];W[bf]WL[815.12];B[ba]BL[897.475];W[bh]WL[808.283];B[bg]BL[887.052];W[ag]WL[806.611
];B[ce]BL[855.232];W[be]WL[796.393];B[ca]BL[818.288];W[eh]WL[793.337]C[White top left group is dead.]
(;B[ab]BL[790.224];W[ac]WL[786.945];B[aa]BL[787.126]C[102 is unnecesary, even if White captures b100, it is a false eye.];W[ch]WL[773.
94];B[dg]BL[784.3];W[eg]WL[771.278]
(;B[ae]BL[776.415]C[b106 is not necessary. A14 cannot become an eye (its false), even if white is allowed to play at A15.];W[ed]WL[765
.84];B[jd]BL[763.628]C[Glad to see you taking the initiative to play big point like this.];W[af]WL[726.031]C[White's still dead

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hough only ifthe black group you let get disconnected with white 103 is not captured first.];B[bi]BL[732.475];W[aq]WL[682.351];B[ao]BL
[715.893];W[hs]WL[661.851];B[hq]BL[679.807];W[go]WL[658.888];B[fd]BL[663.001];W[ee]WL[656.104]
(;B[fc]BL[644.323];W[ec]WL[641.787];B[eb]BL[607.379];W[ds]WL[590.111];B[pg]BL[496.847];W[as]WL[576.992];B[br]BL[459.742];W[jl]WL[546.0
73];B[jg]BL[446.659];W[mj]WL[537.117];B[mi]BL[427.625];W[nc]WL[524.259]
(;B[mc]BL[406.305]C[Not a good move. I would have thought P17 or M17.]
(;W[ne]WL[486.61]
(;B[me]BL[373.097]C[Not playing contact moves might have helped you have a much easier time in this region.];W[og]WL[443.14];B[nf]BL[3
67.924];W[of]WL[440.581];B[nd]BL[353.594];W[oe]WL[433.546];B[od]BL[329.077];W[qf]WL[421.978];B[pf]BL[323.076];W[pe]WL[420.834];B[qe]BL
[313.783];W[qd]WL[414.361];B[re]BL[300.674];W[qg]WL[407.296];B[qh]BL[286.343];W[ph]WL[401.277]C[supernerd [19k?]: oops
supernerd [19k?]: lol
];B[qi]BL[239.64];W[nh]WL[397.389];B[mh]BL[227.619];W[mf]WL[394.311];B[lf]BL[196.384];W[mg]WL[388.831];B[lg]BL[178.918];W[ng]WL[385.64
1];B[ld]BL[166.754];W[ni]WL[383.577]
(;B[pn]BL[145.067]C[Are you trying to seperate white here?];W[po]WL[374.43];B[pq]BL[141.611];W[pl]WL[370.504];B[rg]BL[88.926];W[rf]WL[
360.371];B[sf]BL[74.075];W[rh]WL[347.695];B[lj]BL[35.356];W[lk]WL[319];B[rd]BL[1.317];W[qc]WL[315.361];B[pc]BL[30]OB[5]
(;W[pb]WL[302.236]C[White 171 at S17 is better. I wonder what White was trying to do? - saving white 129 isn't very big.];B[rc]BL[30]
OB[4];W[qb]WL[296.055]
(;B[nb]BL[30]OB[4];W[ob]WL[277.972]
(;B[oc]BL[30]OB[4]C[It's not necessary to capoture that stone. Playing at S18 would put black ahead in the capturing race];W[rb]WL[27
5.703]C[Ok, white got teh key spot. White has 5 liberties, black has three];B[na]BL[30]OB[4];W[sc]WL[266.812];B[sg]BL[30]OB[4];W[sh]W
L[261.092];B[sb]BL[30]OB[4];W[sa]WL[256.177];B[kk]BL[30]OB[4];W[mk]WL[249.481];B[li]BL[30]OB[4];W[kl]WL[247.797];B[hj]BL[30]OB[4];W[kh
]WL[246.53]
(;B[kg]BL[30]OB[4];W[ji]WL[240.129];B[ij]BL[30]OB[4];W[ih]WL[226.487];B[hg]BL[30]OB[4];W[hh]WL[211.433];B[ig]BL[30]OB[4];W[gh]WL[208.9
06];B[gf]BL[30]OB[4];W[lh]WL[207.198]C[Easy to say with hindsight, black @ M12 would have been a lot better than at G14.];B[jh]BL[30]O
B[3];W[ki]WL[196.912];B[kj]BL[30]OB[3];W[ii]WL[194.016];B[fo]BL[30]OB[3];W[fn]WL[191.632];B[no]BL[30]OB[3];W[oo]WL[186.808];B[lo]BL[30
]OB[3];W[mo]WL[182.58];B[ln]BL[30]OB[3];W[kn]WL[177.668];B[lm]BL[30]OB[3];W[mm]WL[175.477];B[ll]BL[30]OB[3];W[ml]WL[172.606];B[fh]BL[3
0]OB[2];W[fi]WL[167.329];B[fg]BL[30]OB[2];W[gg]WL[160.248];B[ff]BL[30]OB[2];W[gi]WL[159.007];B[il]BL[30]OB[2]C[This groups is dead, no
point wasting a move on it.];W[im]WL[154.902];B[oa]BL[30]OB[2]C[White still wins the race so can ignore this move];W[fe]WL[135.41];B[
ge]BL[30]OB[2];W[gd]WL[133.611];B[dc]BL[30]OB[2];W[ei]WL[126.636];B[gc]BL[30]OB[2];W[hd]WL[121.568];B[he]BL[30]OB[2];W[ic]WL[85.892];B
[ib]BL[30]OB[2];W[jc]WL[77.567];B[jb]BL[30]OB[2];W[ke]WL[69.213];B[le]BL[30]OB[2];W[kd]WL[61.591];B[id]BL[30]OB[2];W[hc]WL[52.127];B[h
b]BL[30]OB[2];W[kc]WL[47.239];B[ie]BL[30]OB[2];W[lb]WL[24.982];B[mb]BL[30]OB[2];W[if]WL[30]OW[5];B[jf]BL[30]OB[2];W[ga]WL[30]OW[3];B[g
b]BL[30]OB[2];W[ka]WL[30]OW[3];B[lc]BL[30]OB[2];W[kb]WL[30]OW[3];B[ja]BL[30]OB[2];W[ea]WL[30]OW[3];B[da]BL[30]OB[2];W[pa]WL[30]OW[3];B
[kf]BL[30]OB[2];W[rk]WL[30]OW[3];B[fa]BL[30]OB[2];W[km]WL[30]OW[3];B[ri]BL[30]OB[2]C[No hope for this move unless white doesn't realis
e this group is in atari. All you're doing is giving white one more stone. Also, because you didn't notice the cut at N3 it was the d
ifference between winning and loosing.];W[se]WL[30]OW[3];B[]BL[30]OB[2];W[mq]WL[30]OW[3];B[mr]BL[30]OB[2];W[lq]WL[30]OW[3];B[nr]BL[30]
OB[2];W[ps]WL[30]OW[2];B[ns]BL[30]OB[2];W[hr]WL[30]OW[2];B[ar]BL[30]OB[2];W[ek]WL[30]OW[2];B[ah]BL[30]OB[2];W[]WL[30]OW[1];B[]BL[30]OB
[2]TW[qa][ra][sb][rc][rd][sd][qe][re][nf][pf][sf][pg][rg][sg][mh][oh]
[qh][hi][li][mi][oi][pi][qi][ri][si][fj][gj][hj][ij][jj][kj][lj]
[nj][oj][pj][qj][rj][sj][gk][hk][ik][jk][kk][nk][ok][pk][qk][sk]
[fl][gl][hl][il][ll][nl][ol][ql][rl][sl][fm][gm][hm][jm][lm][nm]
[om][pm][qm][rm][sm][gn][hn][in][jn][ln][nn][pn][rn][sn][lo][no]
[qo][ro][so][lp][mp]TB[ea][ga][ha][ia][ka][la][ma][bb][db][fb][kb][lb][ac][bc][hc][ic]
[jc][kc][nc][ad][bd][cd][gd][hd][kd][md][be][je][ke][af][bf][cf]
[ag][bh][ch][ai][aj][bj][ak][bk][bl][am][cm][an][bn][bp][cp][aq]
[bq][dq][fq][dr][fr][gr][hr][or][pr][qr][rr][sr][as][bs][cs][ds]
[es][fs][gs][hs][ms][os][ps][qs][rs][ss]C[supernerd [19k]: well played

zync [14k]: thk
supernerd [19k]: thanks for the game
supernerd [19k]: ah
supernerd [19k]: i forgot to mark a stone dead
supernerd [19k]: j14
supernerd [19k]: oh well
])
(;B[jh]C[White can't push through at L13 anyway and this captures white 189.];W[kg];B[kf];W[jf];B[if];W[je];B[ie];W[ke];B[kd]))
(;B[rb]C[Black can win this captuing race now.]))
(;B[rb]))
(;W[rc];B[sc];W[se];B[sd];W[sg];B[se];W[sb]))
(;B[ql]C[Better, perhaps this group can live though it's weak.]))
(;B[md];W[nd];B[of]))
(;W[md]C[Inviting a crosscut, to help make shape and live in black's area]))
(;B[oc];W[nd]
(;B[nf])
(;B[lc];W[nf];B[oe]
;W[ne]C[White's group is looking pretty weak - and you're making territory on the right and left.])))
(;B[ec]C[I'm not sure I would have clamped but you can play here rather than F17.]))
(;B[gd];W[ae];B[jd]))
(;B[gd]
(;W[ab];B[ad])
(;W[ad];B[ab])))
(;B[ko];W[jp]
;B[ln]C[Is this better?]))
(;B[on]C[Doesn't this look better, for example?]))