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Author:  DiogoBarbosa [ Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Please, anyone can give me a review about this game? (12k)

Hello, everybody!
Please, anyone can help-me with a review about this game? I'm black.

Thank you all a lot!!!!!
Nice weekends everybody.


Author:  S2W [ Fri Apr 24, 2015 11:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please, anyone can give me a review about this game? (12

Here are some thoughts:

Author:  EdLee [ Sat Apr 25, 2015 12:18 am ]
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Hi DiogoBarbosa,
:b7: No problem; this is a good move.
Especially at these levels, o16 or s2w's R14 -- both are OK.
But I prefer the original o16, 1-space jump -- good move.
This is not a problem at all. You didn't lose the game here.
Your big mistakes are elsewhere (see below).

:b9: OK. W played strangely here. B has a few good options. 3-3 at R17 also possible.
You just want to make sure W suffers here.

:b11: Trying to be fancy; greedy. Just connect solidly -- the result is already very good for B,
because W played strangely here. Just make sure W suffers.
I'm sure you did not read out what would happen if W pushed and cut.
You did not consider the results. Which means you were gambling here.

:b13: Now you have 2 cuts. You did not read either of them.

:b17: Now you have 3 cuts.

:b21: This looks like a vital point, but does not actually work.
You have many cuts.

:b31: Did you have a plan when W runs ( :w32: ) ? ( No. )

:b43: Push solidly at D3.

:b51: This cut makes no sense. You did not think about the ladder.

:b53: This makes no sense. You did not think about the ladder.

:b55: This cut makes no sense.

:b69: , :b71: Terrible. Very bad shape for Black.
Please see Toothpaste .

End of notes.

DiogoBarbosa, may I ask how many games have you finished in your entire Go career -- rough estimate ?

Author:  DiogoBarbosa [ Sun Apr 26, 2015 9:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please, anyone can give me a review about this game? (12

S2W and EdLee,
Thank you a lot!!!

The review and commentaries helped me so much.
I see now, I played very and very mistakes and stupid moves.
I can see that I have many basic things to fix yet...

EdLee, I have more or less 230 games on 19x19.

Author:  EdLee [ Mon Apr 27, 2015 12:16 am ]
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Quote:
I have more or less 230 games on 19x19.
Good. :tmbup:
Quote:
I have many basic things to fix yet...
True for most of us. :)

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