hello im ades, i would like to ask you all a help of commenting my game
in this game i played as black
looking forward to your help, thanks before..
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| Author: | Ades [ Wed Jun 10, 2015 10:32 am ] | ||
| Post subject: | a game i've just played | ||
hello im ades, i would like to ask you all a help of commenting my game in this game i played as black looking forward to your help, thanks before..
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| Author: | EdLee [ Wed Jun 10, 2015 10:52 am ] |
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Hi Ades,  You are very happy to reply and block at R10.This exchange is good for Black and bad for White.  White should take R10 himself -- it's huge. Still R10 is very big. Both of you for some reason are missing R10.   Strange. Just block at R10 !! Very bad. Just reply and block at P13. Both of you missed P13. White can simply push at P13 -- broken shape for Black. Terrible. Same mistake as , -- broken shape for White here. Absolutely no concept of basic shapes. Hane at R5. You are also confused here. Still, R5.Standard basic shape problems at these levels -- Please see Toothpaste and small gaps . |
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| Author: | Ades [ Thu Jun 11, 2015 1:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: a game i've just played |
hi EdLee thanks for your reply.. i'll try to study your advices and also by reading the link you gave to me, i've noticed lot of mistake mistake IMO i've noticed not closing gap  helping white to squeezing out the toothpaste :b101: that is so far what i've noticed beside the mistake you point out cmmiw i hope for your correction |
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| Author: | EdLee [ Thu Jun 11, 2015 5:18 pm ] |
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Ades wrote: not closing gap Good.
helping white to squeezing out the toothpaste  101 |
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| Author: | Ades [ Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: a game i've just played |
anyone else who can give me your point of view, comment, or critics? im craving to learn something more knowing other point of view rather just than 1 would be great |
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