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Author:  hjeunm [ Sat Jan 22, 2022 11:04 am ]
Post subject:  Request to review game

Need to improve our play, we both new. Play for around 3 month till now.

Attachments:
23.1.22.40587565-235-hjeunm-DC0370.sgf [2.29 KiB]
Downloaded 223 times

Author:  jlt [ Sun Jan 23, 2022 1:12 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Request to review game

The game you are referring to is here:

https://online-go.com/game/40587565

however the game is private and we can't open it. So you need to download the sgf file and post it on the forum. Follow these instructions: https://lifein19x19.com/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=833

Edit: the initial post has been edited and the sgf added.

Author:  rhwocns [ Fri Jan 28, 2022 3:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Request to review game

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Author:  jlt [ Fri Jan 28, 2022 7:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Request to review game

I didn't notice you edited the initial post and added an sgf file.

White needs to watch his shapes, as there are often many cutting points. For instance :w86: should have been at F10.

Black played too much on one side of the board and should have approached the top left corner at some point. For instance :b71: wasn't necessary since the group R11 was already safe, so Black could have approached the top left corner instead.

Both players played very small moves when there were bigger moves on the board, such as moves 131, 135, 137, 138.

Author:  Joaz Banbeck [ Fri Jan 28, 2022 5:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Request to review game

[admin]
Here is the game so that everyone can see it. The OP is white.

BTW, does anyone know why the file will load here, but generates an error on eidogo?
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