Very nice. The start feels a bit off, but it settles into the right kind of tempo after that.
BTW, this might be better suited to the Creative Writing section, instead of the Off Topic section
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| Author: | NoSkill [ Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Story i wrote |
http://www.wattpad.com/2243059-the-rose ... rsion?d=ud Criticism would be much appreciated! |
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| Author: | HermanHiddema [ Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:42 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Story i wrote |
Very nice. The start feels a bit off, but it settles into the right kind of tempo after that. BTW, this might be better suited to the Creative Writing section, instead of the Off Topic section
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