Uberdude wrote:Just a few quick comments:
- I'm not sure g15 was good, how about o4?
- Don't like s9 as it makes black stronger. In the normal Chinese when this happens black already has q14 so there was not so much chance to come in the right side so you don't mind making that area stronger, not you do. o5 instead?
- p7 needed?
- k16 was poor, if o17 harder for white.
- s16 wrong order, r14 could o18 turn and white will have to live in gote (yeah you have clamp but that's small).
- c11 kick?
- e5 soft
- d9????? maybe reduce now, or f16.
- b8 can he tenuki?
For G15, I was concerned about black moving the stone, but it does seem small in comparison.
How would you follow up with O5, assuming black responds? I took P7 later because I didn't want black to build too much strength in sente, but I'm not sure.
Regarding C11, I thought after the kick that black E11 would be annoying, and there would be more aji for the other black stone also. I'm very uncertain about the position, though, as it spirals into many many variations.
What do you recommend instead of E5? Inside shoulder hit? B7? I agree he can tenuki b8 instead and I probably should have reduced directly.
, and agree that I felt I was ahead as white around
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and
? I'm not sure how you would expect black to play against it or white to follow up?
is the key point for the attack, I think. The future is murky, however.
, when White goes for it, White has five groups none of which has a decent shape. So probably they have to try something: Black has an advantage.
goes at Q7 to cut, I think. Don't get shut in.
is the wasteful way. Play at S18 instead. White can't capture without getting cut. This technical point comes up all the time (123 principle in action).
needs to be one to the right to get some momentum.
should be P5.
is all sorts of bad shape.
I would try H8 to induce E10 and then extend along the side.
ends up playing on a small scale.
is just helpful to Black. Clearly White should deal with upper side as priority.
is an overplay: P17 is fine here.
goes at L16, but
is all wrong. As White I'd be thinking F11, G13 and then M18 to get back in the game.
should be one to the left, but now Black should win.
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was looking to concentrate on the top, and
so I didn't get sealed into the corner. I considered pushing white along with ataris but decided it was bad play, and also atariing the two stones from the other side, but that seemed to keep me stuck in the corner too.