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Story i wrote
Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:36 pm
by NoSkill
Re: Story i wrote
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:42 am
by HermanHiddema
Very nice. The start feels a bit off, but it settles into the right kind of tempo after that.
BTW, this might be better suited to the Creative Writing section, instead of the Off Topic section
