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How terrible am I at reading!! :)
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 4:21 pm
by jms
This was a game from this evening on KGS. I was maybe not feeling the sharpest, and so didn't read things through that well, but would appreciate some comments on where I need to put in more work. I feel my Tesuji skills are very poor, but my worst skills are in fighting..
http://files.gokgs.com/games/2012/5/16/jms-cesarM10.sgf
Re: How terrible am I at reading!! :)
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 4:54 pm
by Bill Spight
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]B[ms]
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Re: How terrible am I at reading!! :)
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 6:23 pm
by mogosoup
I'm not sure but I think 15 was a joseki error on Black's part.
See this
http://www.lifein19x19.com/forum/download/file.php?id=1741
Black is cut in two and one group is under heavy attack (or maybe even dead)?
Re: How terrible am I at reading!! :)
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 7:19 pm
by illluck
$$c Punishment
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 1 O O 4 . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . 7 X X 2 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 3 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
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[go]$$c Punishment
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 1 O O 4 . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . 7 X X 2 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 3 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
This is the one I usually use. If I just need to connect to the original stone, I use the below:
$$c Punishment
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 O O 2 . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . 4 X X 3 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------
- Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$c Punishment
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 O O 2 . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . 4 X X 3 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 7:44 pm
by EdLee
mogosoup wrote:Black is cut in two and one group is under heavy attack (or maybe even dead)?
No, your cut is too soon for W. See vars.
Re:
Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 10:13 pm
by mogosoup
EdLee wrote:mogosoup wrote:Black is cut in two and one group is under heavy attack (or maybe even dead)?
No, your cut is too soon for W. See vars.
I now understand that the cut is too early, but black's hane is also too early right? Is variation 2 in your diagram better?
Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 2:56 am
by EdLee
mogosoup,

extend at Q15 is joseki, as mentioned in the SGF.

Re: How terrible am I at reading!! :)
Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 4:33 pm
by jms
Thanks - very helpful. I clearly messed up that corner!
