Well, there are several critiques I can give about your game, but I'll focus on the life and death of your group from move 22 on.
First - move 45 should have been here. However, you might wonder what will happen to the marked stones if white keeps trying to capture them.
$$m45 Push through with the atari
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$$ | . . . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O B O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O B O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O 1 O B B B O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . B O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O . B B O . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$m45 Push through with the atari
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$$ | . . . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O B O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O B O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O 1 O B B B O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . B O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O . B B O . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
This atari and push leads to an interesting sequence if white insists on the capture from the inside - a ladder.
$$m45 Push through and ladder
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$$ | . . . . . 7 5 O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . 9 8 6 O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . 3 2 O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O 1 O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O 4 X X O . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$m45 Push through and ladder
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$$ | . . . . . 7 5 O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . 9 8 6 O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . 3 2 O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O 1 O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O 4 X X O . . . . . . . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Even though the ladder fails in this game because of a white stone on the left, black can use the laddering stones to his advantage like this:
$$m55 Tons of ataris
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$$ | . . . . O X X O 1 . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X O O O X O 4 . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O 3 . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O 6 9 . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O 5 7 . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O O X X O 8 . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$m55 Tons of ataris
$$ | . . . . . . . 2 . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . O X X O 1 . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X O O O X O 4 . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O 3 . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O 6 9 . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O 5 7 . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X . O O X X O 8 . . . . . . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
After this atari, the two white stones on the bottom lose a capturing race to the black stones on the inside.
White's wall was pretty weak. So what if white reinforces it instead to try to capture from the outside? Both groups have 4 liberties and black moves first, so black should win the capturing race.
$$m47 Killing the white stones
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$$ | . . . . . . 2 O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X 9 O 6 X X O . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . 4 3 5 7 a 8 . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$m47 Killing the white stones
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$$ | . . . . . . 2 O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X 9 O 6 X X O . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . 4 3 5 7 a 8 . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
White cannot atari from the inside and needs to make an approach move from below before taking. Descending to "a" was a key mistake at move 45, but in this case the point to attack on white's group is move 49.
(EDIT: Nevermind about the ko, there's also a move if you attack from the outside.)
$$m49
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$$ | . . . . . . O O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X 1 O 3 X X O . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . 2 4 5 . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$m49
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$$ | . . . . . . O O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . O X O . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . X O O X O . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O X O X X X O . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . . O X X O . X O . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . O X X 1 O 3 X X O . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . 2 4 5 . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
I'll review other parts of the game in another post - this time via an SGF file to make it easier to follow...