A favor to ask.
Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:27 pm
This was my last game. Can someone review it? I'd like to send it to my opponent, since I'm terrible at reviews.
(;CA[utf-8]RU[Japanese]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]GM[1]FF[4]AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]ST[2]DT[2014-01-24]
PC[KGS]PB[TeaDog]BR[11k]PW[KenPruitt]WR[11k]KM[6.5]TM[1800]RE[W+Resign]MULTIGOGM[0]
;B[qd]BL[1792.6];W[dp]WL[1796.58];B[dd]BL[1782.72];W[pp]WL[1793.66];B[kc]BL[1776.57]
;W[qj]WL[1768.67];B[cn]BL[1750.87];W[fp]WL[1763.93];B[dj]BL[1743.43];W[qg]WL[1759.63]
;B[oc]BL[1736.52];W[jd]WL[1700.28];B[kd]BL[1733.12]
(;W[ke]WL[1696.99]C[This shape has problems. See var.]
(;B[le]BL[1720.18]C[Soft. See var.];W[lf]WL[1688.55];B[me]BL[1705.29];W[mf]WL[1685.68]
;B[je]BL[1701.74];W[kf]WL[1683.69];B[id]BL[1700.04];W[jf]WL[1679.53];B[ie]BL[1695.06]
;W[cc]WL[1672.92];B[dc]BL[1689.73];W[cd]WL[1670.15];B[ce]BL[1688.28];W[be]WL[1669.03]
;B[cf]BL[1686.28];W[bf]WL[1667.95]
(;B[bg]BL[1685.14]C[See var.];W[cg]WL[1659.46]
(;B[ch]BL[1673.44]C[See also var.];W[dg]WL[1658.04]
(;B[de]BL[1671.69]C[Shape. See var.];W[bh]WL[1655.99];B[bi]BL[1667.27];W[ag]WL[1654.72]
;B[ci]BL[1664.87]TR[ch][cf]SQ[dg][cg][bf][bh]C[This shape is a complete disaster for B.]
;W[db]WL[1613.97];B[eb]BL[1662.97];W[cb]WL[1612.55]
(;B[ec]BL[1661]C[Basic shape mistake. See var.];W[bp]WL[1595.37]
(;B[ff]BL[1658.49]C[Too slow, too small. See var.];W[jq]WL[1588.78];B[nq]BL[1645.68]
;W[oq]WL[1585.63]
(;B[nr]BL[1637.5]C[Wrong basic shape. See var.];W[np]WL[1583.29];B[mp]BL[1635.36]
;W[mo]WL[1581.5];B[no]BL[1631.82];W[op]WL[1580.1];B[lo]BL[1630.8];W[mn]WL[1579.18]
;B[lp]BL[1628.79];W[lr]WL[1578];B[mq]BL[1626.96];W[jm]WL[1565.65];B[pr]BL[1610.62]
;W[qq]WL[1559.6];B[qr]BL[1607.99];W[rr]WL[1558.58];B[rs]BL[1602.39];W[or]WL[1555.7]
;B[os]BL[1600.37];W[rq]WL[1552.04];B[ln]BL[1471.92];W[lm]WL[1548.5];B[km]BL[1469.34]
;W[mm]WL[1545.86];B[jn]BL[1458.3];W[kl]WL[1539.89];B[in]BL[1441.14];W[im]WL[1537.71]
;B[hn]BL[1437.95];W[kn]WL[1536.45];B[ko]BL[1436.47];W[km]WL[1527.31];B[jo]BL[1421.04]
;W[fl]WL[1523.43];B[iq]BL[1362.02];W[ir]WL[1518.24];B[hq]BL[1352.42];W[hr]WL[1515.69]
;B[jp]BL[1347.72];W[jr]WL[1512.91];B[kq]BL[1344.81];W[kr]WL[1510.32];B[lq]BL[1339.82]
;W[gq]WL[1509.36];B[ho]BL[1322.79];W[dl]WL[1505.9];B[cl]BL[1317.84];W[ck]WL[1502.44]
;B[dk]BL[1310.96];W[cm]WL[1500.51];B[bk]BL[1300.73];W[bl]WL[1498.16];B[cj]BL[1299.93]
;W[cl]WL[1496.83];B[fh]BL[1291.3];W[en]WL[1494.44];B[hl]BL[1245];W[hm]WL[1491.68]
;B[gj]BL[1240.9];W[hk]WL[1465.85];B[gk]BL[1225.93];W[gl]WL[1462.98];B[hj]BL[1219.01]
;W[ik]WL[1455.96];B[fk]BL[1217.17];W[ek]WL[1453.3];B[ej]BL[1215.38];W[el]WL[1452.41]
;B[ji]BL[1203.21];W[li]WL[1449.01];B[kj]BL[1197.43];W[lj]WL[1447.54];B[kk]BL[1191.93]
;W[lk]WL[1444.3];B[ig]BL[1180.66];W[if]WL[1442.98];B[hf]BL[1177.02];W[jg]WL[1441.45]
;B[ih]BL[1175.72];W[ne]WL[1434.88];B[nd]BL[1162.38];W[oe]WL[1431.71];B[pe]BL[1126.5]
;W[pf]WL[1430.29];B[qe]BL[1121.44];W[eg]WL[1427.39];B[fg]BL[1113.49];W[od]WL[1417.51]
;B[nc]BL[1109.14];W[pd]WL[1415.66];B[qc]BL[1100.83];W[pc]WL[1414.14];B[pb]BL[1099.69]
;W[ob]WL[1391.81];B[nb]BL[1096.16];W[qb]WL[1390.31];B[oa]BL[1090.27];W[rb]WL[1389.13]
;B[rc]BL[1086.5];W[sc]WL[1382.68];B[sd]BL[1083.04];W[sb]WL[1381.72];B[qa]BL[1079.56]
;W[se]WL[1380.46];B[qf]BL[1055.04];W[pg]WL[1375];B[ij]BL[896.469];W[jk]WL[1368.39]
;B[kh]BL[889.797];W[ki]WL[1365.14];B[jj]BL[886.404];W[jh]WL[1364.01];B[eh]BL[881.077]
;W[rf]WL[1361.88];B[nf]BL[789.536];W[of]WL[1359.14];B[ng]BL[788.252];W[mg]WL[1356.95]
;B[nh]BL[786.03];W[mh]WL[1347.9])
(;B[np]C[Basic shape is extend UP.]))
(;B[nq]C[Take a big point.]))
(;B[fc]LB[ea:a][fa:b]C[It has to do with the end-game. Later, when W hanes (a), B can block at (b) and ends in sente.
In the game, B ends in gote. Big difference.]))
(;B[ef]))
(;B[bh];W[dg]C[Sente.];B[ef];W[ci]C[B has no good reply.]))
(;B[cg];W[db];B[eb];W[cb];B[fc]C[Joseki.]))
(;B[je]C[Cut and fight.]))
(;W[jf]))
PC[KGS]PB[TeaDog]BR[11k]PW[KenPruitt]WR[11k]KM[6.5]TM[1800]RE[W+Resign]MULTIGOGM[0]
;B[qd]BL[1792.6];W[dp]WL[1796.58];B[dd]BL[1782.72];W[pp]WL[1793.66];B[kc]BL[1776.57]
;W[qj]WL[1768.67];B[cn]BL[1750.87];W[fp]WL[1763.93];B[dj]BL[1743.43];W[qg]WL[1759.63]
;B[oc]BL[1736.52];W[jd]WL[1700.28];B[kd]BL[1733.12]
(;W[ke]WL[1696.99]C[This shape has problems. See var.]
(;B[le]BL[1720.18]C[Soft. See var.];W[lf]WL[1688.55];B[me]BL[1705.29];W[mf]WL[1685.68]
;B[je]BL[1701.74];W[kf]WL[1683.69];B[id]BL[1700.04];W[jf]WL[1679.53];B[ie]BL[1695.06]
;W[cc]WL[1672.92];B[dc]BL[1689.73];W[cd]WL[1670.15];B[ce]BL[1688.28];W[be]WL[1669.03]
;B[cf]BL[1686.28];W[bf]WL[1667.95]
(;B[bg]BL[1685.14]C[See var.];W[cg]WL[1659.46]
(;B[ch]BL[1673.44]C[See also var.];W[dg]WL[1658.04]
(;B[de]BL[1671.69]C[Shape. See var.];W[bh]WL[1655.99];B[bi]BL[1667.27];W[ag]WL[1654.72]
;B[ci]BL[1664.87]TR[ch][cf]SQ[dg][cg][bf][bh]C[This shape is a complete disaster for B.]
;W[db]WL[1613.97];B[eb]BL[1662.97];W[cb]WL[1612.55]
(;B[ec]BL[1661]C[Basic shape mistake. See var.];W[bp]WL[1595.37]
(;B[ff]BL[1658.49]C[Too slow, too small. See var.];W[jq]WL[1588.78];B[nq]BL[1645.68]
;W[oq]WL[1585.63]
(;B[nr]BL[1637.5]C[Wrong basic shape. See var.];W[np]WL[1583.29];B[mp]BL[1635.36]
;W[mo]WL[1581.5];B[no]BL[1631.82];W[op]WL[1580.1];B[lo]BL[1630.8];W[mn]WL[1579.18]
;B[lp]BL[1628.79];W[lr]WL[1578];B[mq]BL[1626.96];W[jm]WL[1565.65];B[pr]BL[1610.62]
;W[qq]WL[1559.6];B[qr]BL[1607.99];W[rr]WL[1558.58];B[rs]BL[1602.39];W[or]WL[1555.7]
;B[os]BL[1600.37];W[rq]WL[1552.04];B[ln]BL[1471.92];W[lm]WL[1548.5];B[km]BL[1469.34]
;W[mm]WL[1545.86];B[jn]BL[1458.3];W[kl]WL[1539.89];B[in]BL[1441.14];W[im]WL[1537.71]
;B[hn]BL[1437.95];W[kn]WL[1536.45];B[ko]BL[1436.47];W[km]WL[1527.31];B[jo]BL[1421.04]
;W[fl]WL[1523.43];B[iq]BL[1362.02];W[ir]WL[1518.24];B[hq]BL[1352.42];W[hr]WL[1515.69]
;B[jp]BL[1347.72];W[jr]WL[1512.91];B[kq]BL[1344.81];W[kr]WL[1510.32];B[lq]BL[1339.82]
;W[gq]WL[1509.36];B[ho]BL[1322.79];W[dl]WL[1505.9];B[cl]BL[1317.84];W[ck]WL[1502.44]
;B[dk]BL[1310.96];W[cm]WL[1500.51];B[bk]BL[1300.73];W[bl]WL[1498.16];B[cj]BL[1299.93]
;W[cl]WL[1496.83];B[fh]BL[1291.3];W[en]WL[1494.44];B[hl]BL[1245];W[hm]WL[1491.68]
;B[gj]BL[1240.9];W[hk]WL[1465.85];B[gk]BL[1225.93];W[gl]WL[1462.98];B[hj]BL[1219.01]
;W[ik]WL[1455.96];B[fk]BL[1217.17];W[ek]WL[1453.3];B[ej]BL[1215.38];W[el]WL[1452.41]
;B[ji]BL[1203.21];W[li]WL[1449.01];B[kj]BL[1197.43];W[lj]WL[1447.54];B[kk]BL[1191.93]
;W[lk]WL[1444.3];B[ig]BL[1180.66];W[if]WL[1442.98];B[hf]BL[1177.02];W[jg]WL[1441.45]
;B[ih]BL[1175.72];W[ne]WL[1434.88];B[nd]BL[1162.38];W[oe]WL[1431.71];B[pe]BL[1126.5]
;W[pf]WL[1430.29];B[qe]BL[1121.44];W[eg]WL[1427.39];B[fg]BL[1113.49];W[od]WL[1417.51]
;B[nc]BL[1109.14];W[pd]WL[1415.66];B[qc]BL[1100.83];W[pc]WL[1414.14];B[pb]BL[1099.69]
;W[ob]WL[1391.81];B[nb]BL[1096.16];W[qb]WL[1390.31];B[oa]BL[1090.27];W[rb]WL[1389.13]
;B[rc]BL[1086.5];W[sc]WL[1382.68];B[sd]BL[1083.04];W[sb]WL[1381.72];B[qa]BL[1079.56]
;W[se]WL[1380.46];B[qf]BL[1055.04];W[pg]WL[1375];B[ij]BL[896.469];W[jk]WL[1368.39]
;B[kh]BL[889.797];W[ki]WL[1365.14];B[jj]BL[886.404];W[jh]WL[1364.01];B[eh]BL[881.077]
;W[rf]WL[1361.88];B[nf]BL[789.536];W[of]WL[1359.14];B[ng]BL[788.252];W[mg]WL[1356.95]
;B[nh]BL[786.03];W[mh]WL[1347.9])
(;B[np]C[Basic shape is extend UP.]))
(;B[nq]C[Take a big point.]))
(;B[fc]LB[ea:a][fa:b]C[It has to do with the end-game. Later, when W hanes (a), B can block at (b) and ends in sente.
In the game, B ends in gote. Big difference.]))
(;B[ef]))
(;B[bh];W[dg]C[Sente.];B[ef];W[ci]C[B has no good reply.]))
(;B[cg];W[db];B[eb];W[cb];B[fc]C[Joseki.]))
(;B[je]C[Cut and fight.]))
(;W[jf]))
, once again, see Toothpaste.Ken, review the toothpaste in your Jan 17 game, Post 20.