Thanks, it worked that time
Wow, this took much longer than the first due to the amount of commentary and background info (which was far more painful to translate, to be honest - I ended up giving up finding translations for some player names and biographical information).
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PW[檀啸]PB[李东勋]DT[2012-10-17]EV[第14届农心杯三国擂台赛第2局]PC[韩国釜山农心饭店]SO[http://weiqi.tom.com]US[棋圣道场]C[http://weiqi.tom.com
棋圣道场-->精彩时局
13:00,每方1小时，读秒1分钟1次.安达勋九段解说蓝烈编译
1 hour main time, 1 byoyomi period of 1 minute.
Analysis: An Tal-hun 9p
Chinese translation: Lan Lie]RE[W+0.50]
;B[pd]C[第1手：大家好，我是安达勋九段。这一局韩国队先锋将李东勋初段执黑。
Hi everyone, I'm An Tal-hun 9p. In this game Lee Donghoon 1P will play black.]
;W[dd]C[李东勋年仅14岁，在选拔决赛半目险胜李昌镐，随后李昌镐婉拒外卡，农心杯13年全勤纪录宣告终结。李世石同样婉拒。排名第一的朴廷桓(20岁)荣获外卡。可以说，如果没有李东勋的半目胜，李世石很有可能接受外卡，与李昌镐携手出战。
Lee Donghoon is only 14 years old, he won the final of the preliminaries against Lee Changhao by half a point. Afterwards Lee Changhao gently refused the wild card spot, ending his 13-year perfect attendance record for the Nongshim Cup. Lee Sedol also refused, and the number 1 ranked Park Junghwan (20 years old) received the honour. It may be said that if Lee Donghoon did not get that half point win it was likely that Lee Sedol would have accepted the wild card spot and play on the same team as Lee Changhao.]
;B[qp]C[李东勋(生于1998年2月4日)在农心杯选拔赛击败金显灿、姜儒泽、罗玄、李昌镐，一举刷新崔哲瀚的入选韩国农心杯阵容最年少纪录(15岁5个月)。
Lee Donghoon (born February 4th, 1998) defeated (4 professional players and broke the record for the youngest Korean team player to participate in the Nongshim Cup (previously held by Choi Cheol-han at 15 years and 5 months).]
;W[dp]C[
檀啸1993年3月10日生于长春，04年初段，2012年七段。2011年第11届理光杯、第44届全国个人赛男子甲组冠军、第7届威孚房开杯冠军。去年檀啸首度出战农心杯，曾豪取四连胜。本次中国队选拔赛檀啸连胜周睿羊、胡耀宇、陈耀烨、王檄，夺得胜者组冠军率先出线，连续两年获代表权。
Tan Xiao was born on March 10th, 1993 (some biographical information). Last year he played in the Nongshim Cup for the first time and won 4 straight games. In this year's preliminaries Tan Xiao defeated (4 Chinese professionals) and qualified for the second year in a row as the champion of the winners' division.]
;B[fq]
;W[cn]
;B[op]
;W[jq]C[
第8手：这一手普通的下法是分投右边或者挂右上角。檀啸大概是想把局面细分化。
The common move here is to wedge on the right side or approach the top right. Tan Xiao is probably seeking to break up the board.]
;B[dr]
;W[cq]
;B[hq]
;W[mq]
;B[nr]C[
第13手：左下黑棋有些薄味，但是李东勋先捞实地。
There is some thinness for the lower-left black group, but Lee Donghoon takes territory first.]
;W[jo]
;B[cf]
;W[di]
;B[ef]
;W[fd]
;B[bd]
;W[cc]
;B[bi]C[第21手：因为左边白棋厚，所以黑棋尽快求安定。
Black settles as soon as possible because white is solid on the left.]
;W[ic]
;B[pj]C[
第23手：目前布局体现的是李东勋的构思。
Currently the opening demonstrates Lee Donghoon's plan.]
;W[nc]C[
第24手：从整体看，黑棋的右边要比白棋的上边大。
第24手：但是，左边白棋很厚，所以黑棋需要把握好先行的效率。
On the whole, black's right side is bigger than white's top.
But, white is very thick on the left, so black has to make sure to apply the efficiency of the initiative (first move advantage).]
;B[oc]
;W[nd]
;B[pf]C[第27手：现在李东勋下得很顺畅，感觉不到行棋有紧张感，作为新手他进入状态很快。
Now Lee Donghoon's play is quite fluid, no sign of nervousness, he enters the proper mindset quite quickly for a new player.]
;W[gp]C[第28手：檀啸是作为快棋派出名。
Tan Xiao is famous for his brisk pace of play.]
;B[fp]
;W[gq]
;B[gr]
;W[hp]
;B[hr]
;W[fo]LB[eo:a][ip:b]C[第34手：下一步黑棋a扳出是气势的下法，只是要预先损进去，有负担。如果简单向中腹突围，须扳b。
Next move black a is kiai, but there's some risk as it loses some points beforehand. B is the move if black wants to go into the centre simply.]
;B[cr]
;W[eq]
;B[er]
;W[ep]
;B[fr]C[
第39手：黑棋这么走，固然是彻底的实利作战，但是味道有些坏吧。
This sequence that black chose is a purely territorial way of playing, but there's some bad aji left.]
;W[ce]LB[be:a][de:c][cg:b]C[第40手：现在白棋最大限度利用厚味。下一步黑棋如果挡a，白棋就b夹，黑棋有些难办。下一步黑棋大概挤c才行。
第40手：总之，现在黑棋普通应是困难，应该求变。目前的局面，感觉是檀啸一举夺回了主动权。
第40手：这盘棋让我联想起我出战农心杯。我因为紧张，处处捞实地，结果被周鹤洋的厚味压垮了。
Now white uses thickness to the max. If black blocks at a next, white will clamp at b, and it's a bit difficult for black. Next black probably has to atekomi at c.
Basically, black's normal response is difficult and he should therefore seek variance. The current situation feels like Tan Xiao has taken the initiative at once.
This game reminds me of my own play in the Nongshim Cup*. I took territory everywhere because I was nervous and got crushed by Zhou Heyang's thickness.
*illluck: That was a game back in 2004, I believe.]
;B[be]
;W[ch]C[第42手：白棋这步尖，黑棋也很难应。
This kosumi is also a difficult move to respond to.]
;B[cd]
;W[de]
;B[df]
;W[bg]
;B[bf]
;W[bc]LB[bh:a]C[第48手：这个变化结果，黑棋很难受。下一步黑棋如果a挤过，太薄了。感觉黑棋是选择了最坏的变化图。
This variation is quite awkward for black. The connection with the wedge at a is too thin. Feels like black chose the worst variation.]
;B[bh]
;W[cg]
;B[ag]
;W[cj]
;B[bj]
;W[ck]
;B[bk]C[第55手：黑棋下的是地铁围棋。
Black is playing subway Go.]
;W[bl]LB[ci:a]C[第56手：下一步黑棋还不能挤a，条件不成熟。
Next it's still too soon for black to play at a.]
;B[dc]
;W[ec]
;B[db]
;W[eb]C[第60手：檀啸大概是这样一种风格，在棋的内容、用时等等全方位上压迫对手。
Tan Xiao's style is to pressure the opponent from all fronts such as the content of play and the time used.]
;B[fe]
;W[ed]
;B[fi]
;W[fg]
;B[bb]
;W[cb]
;B[ac]
;W[da]C[第68手：左上角黑棋现在没有必要走掉啊。
Black didn't have to play the top left out yet.]
;B[cl]LB[ci:b][dl:a]C[
第69手：黑棋是不是有了什么漂亮手段？
第69手：啊。。。左上角黑棋是有必要先走。下一步白棋如果a打吃，黑棋就b挤，这样要出棋。
第69手：白棋忽然要崩了。因为是必然次序，没有什么回旋余地。此刻檀啸要出冷汗了吧？
Does black have a neat way to play?
Ah... black does have to play the top left first. Next if white atari at a black can wedge in at b - there's a working sequence there.
White suddenly is about to collapse. Because this is a forced sequence there's not much room for maneuver. Tan Xiao must be breaking out in a cold sweat right now.]
;W[dl]
;B[ci]C[第71手：双方如果达成妥协，这盘棋会是漫长的局面。
If both sides reach a compromise the game last a while.]
;W[eh]C[第72手；这步是好手。妥协结果白棋相对更厚些。
This is a good move, white is comparatively thicker after the compromise.]
;B[dh]
;W[ei]
;B[jd]C[第75手：黑棋用强。
Black plays strongly.]
;W[jc]
;B[ld]C[第77手：李东勋缓过劲后，连发重拳。
Lee Donghoon playing strong moves one after the other after recovering.]
;W[mf]C[第78手：檀啸也是不甘示弱，不是简单跳，而是飞罩。
Tan Xiao isn't backing off either, playing the keima cap rather than the simple jump.]
;B[kg]
;W[mh]
;B[ki]
;W[mj]
;B[kk]
;W[ph]
;B[oh]C[第85手：黑棋的意思是，此处普通的变化结果是白棋棋形重复。白棋需要变招了，在右边就地做活。总之，棋局再次出现了胜负处。
Black's meaning is that the normal sequence here leads to overconcentration of white's shape. White has to seek variance and live locally on the right. Basically, another major turning point in the game.]
;W[qc]
;B[pc]
;W[pg]
;B[of]C[第89手：黑棋强悍的反击，变化结果黑棋厚。
Strong counterattack by black, the result of this variation is that black is thick.]
;W[og]
;B[ng]C[第91手：一派乱战的局面。白棋还有最复杂的开劫变化。
第91手：檀啸开始长考，落子慎重了。
A complex fight. White also has the most complex ko variation.
Tan Xiao is thinking a long time about the next move, being more careful with his play.]
;W[nh]LB[nf:a]C[第95手：白棋在a断是乱战局面，檀啸规避了。李东勋依旧是对实地敏感。
There would be a complicated fight if white had cut at a instead, Tan Xiao has avoided that variation. Lee Donghoon is still very sensitive about territory.]
;B[nf]
;W[oi]
;B[kc]
;W[ke]C[第96手：角部还有白棋做活的余味。
第96手：黑棋现在不好应。
Still living aji in corner.
Difficult for black to respond.]
;B[kd]
;W[jj]LB[lh:b][kj:a]C[第98手：黑棋如果接a，白棋b再刺。
If black connects at a, white will peep again at b.]
;B[ji]C[第99手：白98的刺有些不尽人意，感觉是在浪费左上一带残留的味道。
The white peep was a bit suboptimal, feels like wasting the aji left on the upper-left.]
;W[re]C[
第100手：檀啸似乎是处处投放试问手找头绪，这两步很难看作是一贯的思路。
Tan Xiao seems to be placing probes everywhere to find purchase on the game, it's hard to see the last two moves as stemming from a consistent train of thought.]
;B[qf]
;W[qb]
;B[rf]
;W[qe]
;B[pe]
;W[qd]
;B[ij]
;W[mg]C[第108手：是预想的进行。
第108手：变化结果黑角变成白角，而黑棋在中腹赢得了厚味。
That was the expected sequence.
The result of the variation is that the black corner turned to white and black gained thickness in centre.]
;B[me]
;W[mb]
;B[qi]
;W[id]
;B[je]C[第113手：现在中腹的白棋有薄味。
Now white's middle ground is a bit thin.]
;W[nl]C[第114手：黑棋右边应，双方实空的轮廓就基本确定。
After black responds on the right the basic territorial outline of both sides are mostly determined.]
;B[fk]C[
第115手：白棋上边全部合起来有15目，左下有10夺目，这样白棋有30目厚的实地。黑棋是左边、左下、右下合起来有30目。而黑棋潜力在中腹和右边，如果白棋抢先打入右边，黑棋实地没有什么优势。
White has about 15 points total on top, more than 10 points on the lower left, so about 30 points of territory. Black has about 30 points from the left, the lower left, and the lower right. Black's potential is around the centre and the right side. If white invades on the right first black does not have much advantage in terms of territory.]
;W[fh]
;B[dj]C[第117手：这步断在了妙处。
Exquisite cut here.]
;W[cm]C[
第118手：白棋接也可以，但是干脆提掉了。
White can also connect here instead, but chose to simply capture.]
;B[dk]
;W[ek]C[第120手：下一步，黑棋该补右边了。
Next black should protect the right side.]
;B[cl]
;W[ej]
;B[gd]
;W[gc]
;B[ck]
;W[fl]C[
第124手：这步扳，局部也是大恶手。进入读秒后，李东勋的状态有些紊乱。
This hane (I assume this refers to G16 as the current hane seems important) is a terrible move locally. Lee Donghoon's play is a bit disorderly after entering byoyomi.]
;B[pb]
;W[kb]
;B[pm]LB[pl:a]C[第129手：黑棋虽然补了，但是残留的余味很讨厌。白棋可以靠入a后扭断。
第129手：整体上感觉白棋稍厚。只是右上角残留一个万年劫，这个变数不好预测
There is some annoying aji even though black has protected. White can attach at a and then cut.
Overall it feels like white is a bit more solid, but there's a ten thousand year ko on the upper right which brings a lot of variability.]
;W[oo]C[第130手：这步棋体现了檀啸良好的棋感。
This move demonstrates Tan Xiao's great instinct.]
;B[no]C[
第131手：是最强手，有胜负手的意义。
The strongest* and game deciding move.
*illluck: for those unfamiliar with the term under the Go context, "strongest" does not mean "best", but is instead closer to "uncompromising".]
;W[pl]
;B[ql]
;W[om]
;B[pk]
;W[np]
;B[po]
;W[on]
;B[oq]
;W[lj]C[第140手：黑棋如果接，右边就要决堤。
If black connects the right side will be busted.]
;B[ol]
;W[kj]LB[ii:b][ik:a]C[第142手：是双方气势的进行。下一步黑棋长a无理，会被断开b。
Both sides demonstrating spirit. Next black a is over play, white will cut at b.]
;B[nk]C[第143手：双方不断转换，但是形势依然难解难分。
Constant exchanges by both sides, but the situation/outcome is still difficult to determine.]
;W[ml]
;B[mo]
;W[br]C[第146手：是先手官子。
Sente endgame.]
;B[jr]
;W[kr]
;B[ip]C[第149手：局部檀啸有些想当然了？
A bit of wishful thinking by Tan Xiao?]
;W[io]
;B[jp]
;W[kp]
;B[iq]
;W[lo]
;B[hi]C[第155手：黑棋走得很老练。
Very experienced play by black.]
;W[kq]
;B[js]
;W[sb]C[第158手：檀啸手疾眼快地补掉了棋局最大变数，右上角的万年劫，看来他是对形势抱有乐观。
Tan Xiao quickly removed the ten thousand year ko, the largest variable in the game. Seems like he is optimistic about his prospects.]
;B[gl]
;W[ig]C[第160手：白棋点在了黑棋的痛点。
White hit black's weak point.]
;B[fm]
;W[el]C[第162手：虽然白棋没有补中腹，但最终还是会成白棋实地。
Even though white did not protect the centre it will still be white's territory at the end.]
;B[gf]C[第163手：这一手体现了李东勋良好的胜负感，救活一子的同时间接补强。
This move shows Lee Donghoon's great game sense*, saving the stone and at the same time protecting.
*illluck: Not sure how to translate 胜负感. It's basically being sensitive to the situation and choose moves accordingly. For example, playing the move that aims for the most gain when it is necessary to win even though it is more risky.]
;W[ik]
;B[hk]
;W[il]
;B[mk]C[
第167手：这步是打将。
Time-suji.]
;W[lk]C[第168手：整体上感觉还是白棋厚些。
Overall still feels like white is more solid.]
;B[nm]
;W[mm]
;B[nn]
;W[gj]
;B[hj]C[第173手：白棋有了错觉？如果中腹断不了，黑棋有得一争。
Did white have an illusion? If cutting is not possible black has an opportunity.]
;W[ih]
;B[hh]
;W[hg]C[第176手：黑棋在读秒中走了大恶手。中腹黑棋可能整体被截断。
Black played a terrible move in byoyomi. The entire centre may be cut off.]
;B[gg]
;W[ie]
;B[gh]
;W[he]C[第178手：黑棋很困难。
Very difficult for black.]
;B[ge]C[
第180手：黑棋不行了。
Over for black.]
;W[ne]
;B[jb]
;W[lb]
;B[ii]
;W[ee]
;B[ff]
;W[kf]
;B[hc]
;W[ib]
;B[gb]
;W[ab]
;B[aa]
;W[hb]
;B[fc]
;W[fb]C[第196手：差距已经很大了，白棋盘面也有余。
Very big difference already, white is ahead on board without komi.]
;B[fj]C[第197手：啊。。。这步非常大。
Ah... Very big move.]
;W[gm]C[
第198手：是好手。
Good move.]
;B[hm]
;W[gn]C[第200手：白棋的意思是要拿先手。
White aims for sente.]
;B[hl]
;W[im]
;B[bm]
;W[bn]
;B[gc]C[第204手：白棋虽然在上边有所退让，但依然是白棋优势。
White still ahead even though he back off a bit on top.]
;W[ga]
;B[al]
;W[en]
;B[eg]
;W[mr]C[第209手：差距缩小了不少。
The difference has shrunk significantly.]
;B[an]
;W[bp]
;B[ao]C[第212手：现在右边最大。
Now the right side is the largest.]
;W[nj]
;B[ok]C[第215手：因为左上角留有劫味，所以还是白棋稍有余的局面。
White still ahead slightly because of ko aji on top left.]
;W[bs]
;B[hn]
;W[rh]
;B[qh]
;W[rg]
;B[qg]
;W[sf]C[第218手：此处最大。李东勋是因为左上角的劫味，所以选择了厚实下法吧。
Biggest area. Lee Donghoon probably chose this solid way of play because of the ko aji on top left.]
;B[sg]
;W[se]
;B[ri]
;W[sh]
;B[si]
;W[sg]
;B[pn]
;W[mn]
;B[lp]
;W[ko]
;B[mp]
;W[nq]C[第230手：黑棋必须撑左上角的劫。
Black must hold onto the ko on top left.]
;B[os]C[第235手：是精巧的应手。
Neat response.]
;W[na]C[
第236手：檀啸追求安全运转。
Tan Xiao aims for safety.]
;B[oa]
;W[nb]
;B[in]
;W[jn]C[
第240手：李东勋顽强追赶，但感觉还是不够。
Lee Donghoon tenaciously trying to catch up, but still feels a bit short.]
;B[pi]
;W[oh]
;B[ho]
;W[go]C[
第244手：与劫无关，白胜半目。
Ko has no impact on result, white wins by half a point.]
;B[jg]
;W[jf]
;B[lg]
;W[lf]
;B[hf]
;W[if]
;B[ap]
;W[aq]
;B[cs]
;W[bo]
;B[am]
;W[li]
;B[ks]
;W[ms]
;B[qa]
;W[ra]
;B[ns]
;W[lq]
;B[pa]
;W[ls]
;B[ad]
;W[ca]
;B[jh]
;W[lh]
;B[ab]C[总评：黑棋苦战的原因，是因序盘在下边被压的很扁。好在檀啸在左边有些意气用事，给了黑棋翻转的机会，棋局复归平衡。黑棋受损是补强右边之前，黑115想在左边中腹便宜一下，结果没有奏效。此后棋局是白棋稍厚的局面，白158补掉右上角，是准确的形势判断。后盘黑棋出现错觉，被割尾巴，但是随后白棋有所松懈，李东勋顽强追赶，但是最终无法克服半目的差距。解说就到这里，再见。明日13时伊田笃史攻擂，檀啸冲击三连胜
The reason for black's difficulty is that he was pressed very flat on the bottom during the opening. But Tan Xiao was a bit too impulsive on the left and gave black a chance to catch up and balance the game. The place where black suffered a loss was that he tried to get something around middle left with 115 before protecting on the right, but it didn't work. Then white was more solid, white 158 to protect the top right was accurate positional judgement. Then black had an illusion in endgame and the tail got cut off, but then white played a bit loosely. Lee Donghoon then tenaciously tried to catch up, but finally could not close the half point gap.
This is the end of analysis.])
Edit:
Note: I suspect that the Chinese translation used "thick" when "solid" is more appropriate, but didn't want to risk distorting the original comments if my understanding is incorrect. Nevertheless, I moved toward "solid" by the end, so just bear that in mind and don't get too confused if the usage didn't seem correct.
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emeraldemon
attacking the weakness of black start to lead the board.
was agile move that made it even
are miai so maintains the balance. 
and fight then white will cut 
and fight. this is not a good picture for black.
looks ideal for white.
exchange was a product of deep reading that interfere 
if white play at 
, 
show that he finished reading already and upto 
black looks good also 
is big so Lee was satisfied with this sequence.
was good answer that created 3 stone saving aji and black lost sente. It appears now white came back from behind.
is correct move that will simplify the board.
is a sharp counter attack that would have put lee into a bad situation. This variation is good for white.