I'm not really stronger than you, so take it with a grain of salt : )
[sgf-full](; GM[1]FF[4]VW[]AP[] SZ[19] HA[0] ST[0] PB[Jedo] PW[RedStick] DT[2010-06-22] PC[The KGS Go Server at <!-- m --><A class="postlink" href="http://www.gokgs.com/">http://www.gokgs.com/</A><!-- m -->] KM[6.5] TM[1800] RU[Japanese] RE[B+12.50] BR[4k] WR[6k] OT[5x60 byo-yomi]CA[UTF-8];B[pd] C[Jedo [4k\]: have a good game] BL[1796.132];W[dc] C[RedStick [6k\]: you too.] WL[1794.417];B[qp]BL[1789.491];W[oq]WL[1781.454];B[pn]BL[1772.107] (;W[lq] C[SoDesuNe: I think this is too passiv, when neglecting to play in a corner. \ Black can play Q3 later on which results in bad shape for White. \ Furthermore while Black has potential development on the right \ side due to his fourth line stone on Q6, your potential development \ is rather small due to the third line. See variation.] WL[1720.985];B[dp]BL[1768.66];W[cn]WL[1684.952];B[fq]BL[1758.88];W[ci]WL[1679.658];B[cl]BL[1744.368];W[bp] C[SoDesuNe: I would not make this exchange. If you just jump out, you can \ still invade the 3*3 later on.] WL[1667.841];B[cq]BL[1740.138];W[en]WL[1654.614] ;B[el]BL[1735.208] (;W[gn] C[SoDesuNe: Your idea of surrounding his bottom left group is good, but I \ think you should also be aware off what the Mini-Chinese-Fuseki \ is about (my opinion ^^). You are building up a framework, which \ purpose lays in inviting your opponent to invade. Then he will \ be at a disadvantage because he can't make a bases there. You're \ task should be to benefit from his struggle for life. See variation.] WL[1636.007];B[gl]BL[1707.233];W[in]WL[1547.146];B[il]BL[1684.002];W[hq]WL[1532.728];B[de]BL[1677.184] (;W[ce] C[SoDesuNe: He's jumping into your pincer, don't make him strong! See variation.] WL[1510.439];B[cf]BL[1654.704];W[cd]WL[1506.556];B[df]BL[1644.848];W[fc]WL[1489.413];B[ei]BL[1636.54];W[qi] C[SoDesuNe: Black's bottom left group is in mortal danger, don't let him \ play B3 for life! If you kill this group the game is over.] WL[1474.941];B[qk]BL[1628.606];W[qf]WL[1467.619] ;B[nc]BL[1625.299];W[rd]WL[1443.765];B[qc]BL[1622.641];W[oi] C[SoDesuNe: You are fine here. B3 is urgent, R3 is huge.] WL[1421.047];B[dm]BL[1619.257];W[dn]WL[1417.06];B[ge]BL[1603.888];W[hd]WL[1367.859];B[jc]BL[1594.735];W[he] C[SoDesuNe: You should ask yourself what Aji C11 has (like threatening to \ connect with B13 and B9 making at least one eye). By pushing \ Black from behind, you're killing most of this Aji and you don't \ gain anything. Urgent B3, huge R3.] WL[1350.282] ;B[gf]BL[1591.686];W[hf]WL[1333.273];B[hg]BL[1582.484];W[gg] C[SoDesuNe: Yeah, overplay I guess.] WL[1293.098];B[hh]BL[1577.275];W[lc]WL[1270.817];B[je]BL[1556.802];W[le]WL[1239.119];B[lb]BL[1539.371];W[kb]WL[1220.308] ;B[gd]BL[1530.046];W[gc]WL[1217.232];B[hc]BL[1503.904];W[ic]WL[1187.63];B[id]BL[1491.401];W[hb]WL[1162.898];B[if]BL[1483.54];W[fg] C[SoDesuNe: Hm, the top is more urgent. Connecting at K18 threatens to play \ S17 to put this Black group in mortal danger, too.] WL[1156.038];B[ef]BL[1445.036];W[ig]WL[1129.805] ;B[jg]BL[1421.934];W[om] C[SoDesuNe: Despite being a ladder breaker, this move accomplishes less for the moment (Moyo is good but killing or threatening groups is better : D). \ B3, R3 or K18.] WL[1107.755];B[ih]BL[1412.99];W[on]WL[1103.048];B[po]BL[1410.166];W[oo]WL[1096.608];B[ho]BL[1400.831];W[hn]WL[1089.38];B[km]BL[1398.274];W[jm]WL[1083.889] ;B[jl]BL[1391.7];W[kn]WL[1068.456];B[kk]BL[1382.884];W[lm]WL[1061.886];B[jq]BL[1374.71];W[io]WL[1056.115];B[hr]BL[1371.942];W[ir] C[SoDesuNe: Wrong side, this give him what he wants. But you should have \ resolved this corner much earlier.] WL[951.167];B[gr]BL[1331.597];W[iq]WL[945.697] ;B[mb]BL[1326.425] (;W[of] C[SoDesuNe: His corner is alive, so your move is pretty small. R3 is the \ biggest move, I think. B3 is still threatening by the way. See variation.
END OF COMMENTS.] WL[903.765];B[ne]BL[1307.46];W[nf]WL[898.211];B[me]BL[1302.885];W[mf]WL[895.598];B[lf]BL[1301.464];W[lg]WL[893.94];B[kf]BL[1300.034];W[jb]WL[892.458] ;B[kc]BL[1289.416];W[oe]WL[875.97];B[od]BL[1281.618];W[pm]WL[856.696];B[qm]BL[1278.627];W[pp]WL[839.236];B[qq]BL[1253.507];W[qn]WL[828.153];B[qo]BL[1250.262];W[ql]WL[825.935] ;B[rn]BL[1232.208];W[rl]WL[815.099];B[pr]BL[1222.139];W[or]WL[809.903];B[bf]BL[1218.556];W[eh]WL[794.908];B[dh]BL[1203.756];W[hk]WL[773.886];B[hl]BL[1172.539];W[lj]WL[770.199] ;B[lk]BL[1156.019];W[mj]WL[766.086];B[ac]BL[1133.679];W[bc]WL[745.201];B[ad]BL[1130.362];W[ae]WL[731.092];B[be]BL[1123.317];W[ab]WL[718.088];B[af]BL[1120.992];W[bb]WL[710.292] ;B[mk]BL[1078.161];W[nk]WL[703.162];B[ll]BL[1066.381];W[nl]WL[693.184];B[mm]BL[1058.659];W[ln]WL[689.932];B[ml]BL[1053.014];W[mn]WL[687.857];B[rc]BL[1044.857];W[qe]WL[655.947] ;B[lh]BL[1021.757];W[mh]WL[640.271];B[kg]BL[1017.353];W[jj]WL[622.73];B[kj]BL[1008.931];W[ki]WL[620.482];B[li]BL[998.753];W[mi]WL[580.135];B[mg]BL[991.307];W[ng]WL[578.544] ;B[is]BL[981.762];W[js]WL[575.149];B[hs]BL[979.597];W[jr]WL[573.617];B[bq]BL[974.797];W[gq]WL[566.886];B[er]BL[969.2];W[fi]WL[556.497];B[ej]BL[950.927];W[fk]WL[536.616] ;B[fm]BL[936.903];W[fn]WL[505.76];B[ek]BL[921.647];W[di]WL[490.535];B[eg]BL[906.339];W[fh]WL[485.601];B[fj]BL[887.62];W[gi]WL[470.958];B[hi]BL[860.336];W[kh]WL[464.193] ;B[lg]BL[852.125];W[jk]WL[462.315];B[kl]BL[843.378];W[gk]WL[417.518];B[gj]BL[817.976];W[ch]WL[393.836];B[dg]BL[812.928];W[bm]WL[381.933];B[bl]BL[809.788];W[cp]WL[360.436] ;B[ap]BL[796.75];W[bo]WL[346.085];B[pq]BL[788.145];W[op]WL[332.111];B[sm]BL[782.256];W[rm]WL[321.357];B[sl]BL[762.055];W[sk]WL[302.971];B[sn]BL[756.824];W[rk]WL[299.188] ;B[sd]BL[721.983];W[se]WL[296.017];B[sc]BL[720.507];W[ep]WL[290.355];B[eq]BL[705.535];W[fp]WL[287.063];B[im]BL[695.934];W[jn]WL[269.286];B[qd]BL[692.628];W[re]WL[264.676] ;B[am]BL[675.007];W[an]WL[262.105];B[al]BL[671.92];W[qn]WL[258.745];B[rp]BL[663.791];W[ao]WL[247.984];B[pe]BL[645.904];W[pf]WL[242.244];B[aq]BL[630.297];W[do]WL[237.665] ;B[dq]BL[622.673];W[ps]WL[233.023];B[qs]BL[619.946];W[os]WL[224.286];B[nm]BL[610.176];W[nn]WL[219.172];B[ed]BL[606.055];W[ec]WL[208.097];B[ka]BL[599.25];W[ja] C[Shadonra [1d\]: bottom right is seki..] WL[203.783] ;B[la]BL[597.242];W[em] C[redundant [4k\]: what sequence?Shadonra [1d\]: wtf i'm 1dShadonra \ [1d\]: start with s2redundant [4k\]: i got thatShadonra [1d\]: s2 \ r2 s3Shadonra [1d\]: er, t3Shadonra [1d\]: sorry] WL[163.845];B[gm]BL[565.924];W[cm]WL[150.394];B[dl] C[redundant [4k\]: after t3 t4] BL[562.686];W[bd]WL[125.935];B[ie] C[Shadonra [1d\]: s5 capture s1] BL[555.814];W[hc] C[Shadonra [1d\]: actually, no need for s5, just s1Shadonra [1d\]: \ oh there's a ko] WL[122.829];B[ae]BL[524.351];W[fd]WL[117.97] ;B[fe] C[dfan [3k\]: No ko if you play S5 first, right?] BL[509];W[dd]WL[112.025];B[ee] C[Shadonra [1d\]: still ko] BL[505.636];W[sr] C[redundant [4k\]: noperedundant [4k\]: for white hereShadonra [1d\]: \ alive, double koShadonra [1d\]: er, alive w/o double ko] WL[83.981];B[sq] C[redundant [4k\]: more fun to live with double ko, thoughShadonra \ [1d\]: no it isnt, you'll lose every other ko] BL[416.755];W[rs] C[Shadonra [1d\]: ok, it's sekioShadonra [1d\]: that's seki with \ a ko, btwredundant [4k\]: or black can double ko and live] WL[53.65];B[qr]BL[345.669];W[so] C[Shadonra [1d\]: noperedundant [4k\]: how?redundant [4k\]: beforeShadonra \ [1d\]: i dunnoShadonra [1d\]: i think i misread that] WL[49.989];B[ro]BL[292.424];W[rr]WL[42.518] ;B[qm] C[Shadonra [1d\]: hmm, ko threatsShadonra [1d\]: i think w has more] BL[278.685];W[fl]WL[18.277];B[ik]BL[270.405];W[qn]WL[13.831];B[nj] C[Shadonra [1d\]: not a threatredundant [4k\]: b wins] BL[263.546];W[qm]WL[60]OW[3];B[oj]BL[243.093];W[ol] C[Jedo [4k\]: yeah, bad ko threat <IMG src="./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif" \ alt=":P" title="Razz">] WL[60]OW[3];B[tt]BL[206.567];W[tt] C[RedStick [6k\]: good game. Jedo [4k\]: thanks for the gameRedStick \ [6k\]: congtrats on the series. Jedo [4k\]: thanksJedo [4k\]: it \ was a lot of funJedo [4k\]: what was the correct response at the \ end? or did that have to be seki?RedStick [6k\]: i still can't \ effectivey reduceRedStick [6k\]: not sure.] TB[gs][fs][es][ds][cs][bs][as][fr][dr][cr][br][ar][fl][jk][hk][gk][fk][dk][ck][bk][ak][jj][ij][hj][dj][cj][bj][aj][ki][ji][ii][gi][fi][di][ci][bi][ai][kh][jh][gh][fh][eh][ch][bh][ah][ig][gg][fg][cg][bg][ag][jf][ff][le][ke][nd][md][ld][kd][jd][pc][oc][mc][lc][sb][rb][qb][pb][ob][nb][sa][ra][qa][pa][oa][na][ma] TW[ns][ms][ls][ks][nr][mr][lr][kr][nq][mq][kq][jq][np][mp][lp][kp][jp][ip][hp][gp][no][mo][lo][ko][jo][ho][go][fo][eo][co][bn][pl][qk][pk][ok][sj][rj][qj][pj][oj][nj][si][ri][pi][ni][sh][rh][qh][ph][oh][nh][sg][rg][qg][pg][og][sf][rf][cc][ib][gb][fb][eb][db][cb][ia][ha][ga][fa][ea][da][ca][ba][aa] WL[60]OW[3]) (;W[bq];B[br];W[dr];B[cr];W[eq];B[ep];W[fr] C[SoDesuNe: No easy life. With F1, D1 or D3 you can play a Ko.] )) (;W[fd];B[cc];W[cb];B[cd];W[bb];B[cg];W[ei] C[SoDesuNe: Maybe this?] )) (;W[fm];B[fl];W[gl] C[SoDesuNe: I would play more agressively. But here you have to be careful, \ because of your B4-C3 exchange you might be struggling for life, \ too, in the end.] )) (;W[qq];B[rq];W[pp];B[qo];W[qr] C[SoDesuNe: Maybe this way? White is solid, if Black takes the corner White \ splits the right side, threatening to either approach the Hoshi \ or taking the base of Black's bottom right group.] MA[qj]))[/sgf-full]
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