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Where are you own games and review? That is the most critical part...
Indeed, forget about the pro games. Study a few commented ones, to understand what pro level thinking is really like.
Disagree. Firstly, the emphasis on commented games is, I think, often misleading. Commentary on passages from games may be helpful, but there is too much content in most pro games to assimilate. Secondly, on the few occasions where I have had top pro comment directly, it has not been the same kind of thing as the game commentaries that are filtered through journalists.
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You are right Charles, careful selection is necessary. An Younggil's reviews at gogameguru are top pro analyses. When I read those I could really feel the gap in thinking. Even though it became understandable for me as a low dan, thanks to An, I understood even better that the kind of variations they calculate and the kind of evaluation they make, is at a completely different level. It's not just about being a bit smarter, rather thinking differently. In that sense, commented pro games are a great source of inspiration.
I really don't believe in studying uncommented pro games in large quantities, even less since I read good commentaries, at least not below, say, 5d. We are simply not equipped to derive anything meaningful from such study. I know there are fans of "immersion" but I think it rhymes with "illusion". Imitate the pros and you will get somewhere but you won't get far if you don't understand what you're doing.
It can be fun to browse through pro games. And the illusion that it makes you stronger is also very enjoyable. But it remains an illusion, according to me.
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Charles Matthews wrote:
Knotwilg wrote:
oren wrote:
Where are you own games and review? That is the most critical part...
Indeed, forget about the pro games. Study a few commented ones, to understand what pro level thinking is really like.
Disagree. Firstly, the emphasis on commented games is, I think, often misleading. Commentary on passages from games may be helpful, but there is too much content in most pro games to assimilate. Secondly, on the few occasions where I have had top pro comment directly, it has not been the same kind of thing as the game commentaries that are filtered through journalists.
Knotwilg wrote:
You are right Charles, careful selection is necessary. An Younggil's reviews at gogameguru are top pro analyses. When I read those I could really feel the gap in thinking. Even though it became understandable for me as a low dan, thanks to An, I understood even better that the kind of variations they calculate and the kind of evaluation they make, is at a completely different level. It's not just about being a bit smarter, rather thinking differently. In that sense, commented pro games are a great source of inspiration.
I really don't believe in studying uncommented pro games in large quantities, even less since I read good commentaries, at least not below, say, 5d. We are simply not equipped to derive anything meaningful from such study. I know there are fans of "immersion" but I think it rhymes with "illusion". Imitate the pros and you will get somewhere but you won't get far if you don't understand what you're doing.
It can be fun to browse through pro games. And the illusion that it makes you stronger is also very enjoyable. But it remains an illusion, according to me.
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I agree with Charles.
Besides, to get to pro shodan Shusai Honinbo Meijin recommended playing over 1,000 pro games. Pro games have everything.
I think I found a tiny portion of the "secret" of pro games. It may not be what many first thought! We're a little confused here in the west, but "replaying pro games", and, "replaying pro games" are two completely different activities, something we do not seem to understand very well in the west. I'm planning to finish writing all of my thoughts on " My recent approach to study (I'm going to prove its worth)", I can't claim to know much, but I do wonder what your opinions might be I can say this, When I got to 9 kyu in 2013, I suddenly got stuck, and unable to move up in rank, resorted to spending nearly a year mainly replaying pro games in a hope to raise the level of my weak opening play. And a whole year later, I improved by less than two ranks. I was quite frustrated, and thought it was a wasted year. But now I understand, after moving from 7kyu to 5kyu in 3 months, that 2013-2014 was an important year for my Go-improvement. I was to naive to understand at the time, wanting instant-improvement. However, although my strength did not seem to change, my Go in Jan 2014 was unrecognisable in many respects to Jan 2013, yet you could still tell that it might be the same player from the signature hope-to-kill-dragon mis-maneuvers .
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I haven't been here in a little over a week, because I wanted get a into rythym, to put a little training so we could see some RESULTS.
THEPLAN
Okay, here's my insanely ambitious plan.
I am aiming for Blackbelt, 5th Dan EGF by December 31, 2015. But more importantly, my real goals are not about rank, but ability specification, for I do not aim to become strong soley for my benefit.
Right now, I can usually read at least 10 moves in the more complex positions in my games, given enough time. I usually play rapid, however, and can also be lazy or impatient to play the next move, causing me to only read 6-8 moves every now and then (silly, isn't it ). Reading seems to be the stronger part of my go, but my problem is that I'm prone to basic slip ups, missing 5-move sequences after reading 10-15 moves, so fundamentall training is important. The goal is to be able to read at least 15 moves in any given position by the 25th of December 2014, hopefully bringing my reading up to 4 dan, my real skill level of course much weaker due to my ddk opening skill, before the London Open, (where I aim to Go above the bar). Problem is, I have about three weeks to do so, so tsumego is important! Wake up an hour early and do Go Puzzles!
The Hitachi problems vary wildly in difficultly problem to problem, the challenge is to solve elementary ones in 30sec and Intermediate ones in 60sec, however I am only getting around a 40% success rate. I must increase that to 75% before the 25th. I started from problem 400, so you can have a shot at solving 50 of them in under 1 minute using a timer.
One other problem is the fact that I seem to be falling apart in the opening in every single game game I play, especially the joseki. I think the best solutions might be to replay many pro games quickly (I'm slacking up on this part) and play many, many fast games, and to look up the joseki in all of them. Positional judgement is possibly the worst part of my play, probably second only to joseki. An aspect I must work on.
I think things might be improving, but I have to start playing more games next week to see. I may finally be able to post some here!
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I was shocked when found the result was only B+5.5, The game appeared to be out of a Mr Bean show, (on my part) Two blunders in a row is a tough act to follow I also played another game, and lost in a similar way, But manually turning Tygem and Wbaduk games int sgf files and commenting them took much, much longer than expected.
So I only put One.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[1200]OT[3x30 byo-yomi] GN[Positivity is what pulls you through.]PW[Elom]PB[qtytretru]WR[1k]BR[1k]DT[2014-12-12]GC[;)]PC[Tygem (Japan)]WT[Britain]BT[Japan]AN[Elom]RE[B+5.50] ;B[pc] ;W[qc] ;B[qd] ;W[pd] ;B[rc] ;W[qb] ;B[pe] ;W[od] ;B[rb] ;W[qe] ;B[rd] ;W[pb] (;B[qf] ;W[oe] ;B[pf] ;W[qo] ;B[dd] ;W[fc] ;B[hc]C[I was worried about this move when I played at A.
I have absolutely no idea what to do, weather I should play counter pincer or not, etc.
This is a classic example of the trouble I'm facing with my play at the moment.] ;W[df] ;B[kc] ;W[cc] ;B[nc] ;W[oc] ;B[nb]C[Black completely extinguishes the influence...] ;W[dc]C[.in exchange for a large corner.] ;B[ob] ;W[id]C[Again, played out of thin air and no ideas.] (;B[me] ;W[of] ;B[og] ;W[nf] ;B[mf] ;W[ng] ;B[nh] ;W[mh] (;B[oh]C[!] ;W[mg] ;B[nj] ;W[ic] ;B[kf]C[No clue what's going on here.] ;W[if] ;B[kh] ;W[mj] ;B[nk] ;W[jg] ;B[kg] ;W[mk] ;B[ml] ;W[ll] ;B[lm] ;W[kl] ;B[km] ;W[mm] ;B[nl] ;W[jm] ;B[lk]C[My opponent didn't seem to hesitate when she/he played this move.] ;W[lj] ;B[kk] ;W[kj] ;B[jl] ;W[ji]C[Again, black immediately pushed and cut.] ;B[jh] ;W[ih] ;B[ii] ;W[ij] ;B[hi]C[I did not believe that black could be killed, but i didn't spend precious time trying to be "extra sure".] ;W[ld]C[Tried anyway. Yep, just like 3 years ago.] ;B[kd] ;W[le] ;B[lf] ;W[lc] ;B[lb] ;W[kb] (;B[jb] ;W[ke] ;B[je] ;W[jd] ;B[jf] ;W[jc] ;B[ig] ;W[hh] (;B[ie]C[Crucial error.] ;W[hf] ;B[hg] ;W[gh] ;B[gf] ;W[he] ;B[hd] ;W[ge] ;B[fe] ;W[gd] ;B[gg] (;W[gi]C[So the game continues...] ;B[fh] ;W[fi] ;B[fd] ;W[gc] ;B[eh] ;W[ei] ;B[dh] ;W[ef] ;B[ff] ;W[di] ;B[ch] ;W[ci] ;B[ej]C[I think I must have left the undo function disabled.] ;W[fj] (;B[de] ;W[cf] ;B[be] (;W[eg]C[Excuse the bad moves.] ;B[bf] ;W[ce] ;B[cd] ;W[bh] ;B[bg] ;W[bi]C[181-121 is nonsense.] ;B[bc] ;W[bb] ;B[ab] ;W[md] ;B[dp]C[At this point I have no idea what to do as white. This is where the game starts to crumble (assuming I didn't make a joseki mistake earlier)] ;W[fq] ;B[jp] (;W[dn]C[It's a good thing there are'n any Go police, or I would be arrested for bad moves... wasting all the thickness.] ;B[cn] ;W[cm] ;B[co] ;W[fn] (;B[dr] ;W[il] (;B[jn] ;W[im] ;B[pn] ;W[rm]LB[qm:A]C[Better of at A.] ;B[qq]C[It turns out black is behind, but i did not know that at the time, so this move confused me slightly.] (;W[pq]C[White need not fear the lower side territory.] ;B[pr] ;W[pp] ;B[oq] ;W[qr] ;B[rr] ;W[or] ;B[qs] ;W[nq] ;B[op] ;W[oo] ;B[np] ;W[mp] ;B[no] ;W[nn] ;B[qp] (;W[mo]C[Ridiculous move.] ;B[ro] ;W[rn]C[Terrible move.] ;B[qn] ;W[po] ;B[rp] ;W[om] ;B[ql]C[Black punishes white.] ;W[qm] ;B[pl] ;W[pm] ;B[rl]C[At this point, I thought that I had completely lost, but as it turns out, black had just come back from the jaws of resignation. I forgot about the upper side. With that kind of attitude, I deserved to lose.] ;W[ko]LB[kn:A][jo:B]C[White is still ahead by a huge margin, but I thuoght that _white_ was behind by a large margin.
A is better than B.] ;B[jk] ;W[kn] ;B[ik] ;W[hj] ;B[mi]C[?] ;W[li] ;B[ni] ;W[lh] ;B[hk] ;W[gk] ;B[in]C[!?] ;W[hm] ;B[hn] ;W[gm] ;B[jq] ;W[hp]C[I thought I had to kill this group to stand a chance of winning. White wins by 15 points if they _live_.
One could say it just goes to show the power of perception. Another, more matter-of-of-fact observation would be that I didn't count. Ouch.] ;B[gq] ;W[gp] ;B[hq] ;W[ip] ;B[iq] ;W[fr] ;B[dm] ;W[em] ;B[dl] ;W[cl] ;B[gr] ;W[kr]C[I play as if I was sure, spending no time to think, but I wasn't.] ;B[fp] ;W[ep] ;B[do] ;W[en] ;B[fo] ;W[eo] ;B[go] ;W[dq] ;B[cq] ;W[eq] (;B[br]C[Black need not fear. This mistake could have been fatal...] ;W[is] ;B[ir] ;W[hs] ;B[gs]C[...If White knew the concept of false eyes and liberties properly...] (;W[kq]C[Err... ??] ;B[fs] ;W[ol]C[Despite the mishap, white is STILL leading. And I was about to resign.] ;B[ok] ;W[sl] ;B[sk] ;W[sm] ;B[rk] ;W[bm] ;B[bn] ;W[js] ;B[cb] ;W[db] ;B[ba] ;W[bp]C[...] ;B[an] ;W[cg] ;B[fg] (;W[jr] (;B[cp] ;W[da] ;B[es] ;W[am] ;B[ck] ;W[dk] ;B[el] ;W[fl] ;B[ek] ;W[dj] ;B[ne] ;W[nd] ;B[qa] ;W[pa] ;B[ra] ;W[kp]LB[ed:A]C[Better at A, which is revers sente. 244-248 is questionable.] ;B[ln]LB[ca:A]C[A is sente, but black is in no hurry.] ;W[lo] ;B[nm] ;W[mn] ;B[ca] ;W[gn] ;B[ho] ;W[jo] ;B[io] ;W[ll] ;B[kl] ;W[hl]C[Unecessary, it is superior to move to the upper left.] ;B[ec] (;W[eb] ;B[hb] ;W[ed] ;B[ee] (;W[ib] ;B[ec] (;W[ha]C[Critical slip, and the final painful, losing move.] ;B[fb] ;W[gb] ;B[ea]C[White lost over 10 points here.] ;W[jj] ;B[ll] ;W[ag] ;B[af] ;W[ah] ;B[os] ;W[ns] ;B[ps] ;W[on] ;B[so] ;W[lg] ;B[jg] ;W[ki] ;B[fa] ;W[ga]C[B+5.5
It seems that my opponent persevered until the very end (unlike me) and although some may not like that style, i *was* constantly blundering at the end on things way below my reading ability, (usually, it's a garantee that I would come out of the opening behind, and start a crazy fight to catch up) a reading ability that is already quite short (just to show the scale of the blunder)]) (;W[fb] ;B[ha] ;W[ia])) (;W[ga] ;B[ib] ;W[gb] (;B[ec] ;W[ja]) (;B[ka] ;W[kc]LB[ja:A][mb:B]C[A and B are matgobi (miai)]))) (;W[fb]C[Interesting because...] ;B[eb] ;W[fa] ;B[ea] ;W[os] ;B[ps] ;W[jj] ;B[ll] ;W[ag] ;B[af] ;W[ah] ;B[so] ;W[ki] ;B[sn] ;W[on] ;B[jg] ;W[lg] ;B[er] ;W[hr]C[Black would win by a half-point])) (;B[ck] ;W[dk] ;B[am] ;W[bl] ;B[al] ;W[bk] ;B[ak] ;W[bj]C[The game would be reversed.])) (;W[am])) (;W[fs])) (;B[jr] (;W[bp] ;B[bq] ;W[bn] ;B[bo] ;W[ao] ;B[cp] ;W[ap] ;B[aq]) (;W[ao] ;B[bp] ;W[br] ;B[cr] ;W[bn] ;B[bo] ;W[bm] ;B[bs] ;W[ar] ;B[ap]) (;W[hs] ;B[gs] ;W[js] ;B[fs] ;W[es] ;B[er] ;W[cr] ;B[ds] ;W[cs] ;B[es] ;W[bp] ;B[cp] ;W[bn] ;B[br] ;W[bq] ;B[bs] ;W[cr] ;B[cs] ;W[bo] ;B[cr] ;W[ar]C[Nice, but...] ;B[is]))) (;W[po]C[White ends up having to play here anyway.] ;B[ro] ;W[rn])) (;W[qk]C[This side is obviously much bigger.] ;B[po] ;W[jr]C[There is bad aji here. weather or not the variations are correct, the right is bigger.] (;B[kr] ;W[kq] ;B[jq] ;W[lr] ;B[ir] ;W[ks] ;B[mq] ;W[lq] ;B[mr] ;W[iq]C[The cut is not a simple thing to deal with.]) (;B[ir] ;W[pq] ;B[qp] ;W[qr] ;B[rr] ;W[jq] ;B[iq] ;W[mq]) (;B[jq] ;W[kr] ;B[ir] ;W[pq] ;B[qp] ;W[qr] ;B[rr] ;W[pp] ;B[pr] ;W[or] ;B[qs] ;W[mq] ;B[oq] ;W[op] ;B[nq] ;W[nr] ;B[np] ;W[oo] ;B[on] ;W[mp] ;B[no] ;W[ms] ;B[lr] ;W[lq] ;B[os] ;W[js] ;B[ls] ;W[iq] ;B[hr] ;W[gq] ;B[hq] ;W[ip] ;B[hp] ;W[io] ;B[jo] ;W[ho] ;B[gp] ;W[fp]))) (;B[ik] ;W[hk] ;B[im] ;W[hl] ;B[jn] ;W[ql])) (;B[qm]C[I would go here imediately, no questions asked (hey, I'm only 1k! Okay, excuses won't get me anywhere, would it...)]) (;B[bm] ;W[ql] ;B[cl] ;W[qi] ;B[dk]C[I think the exchange is good for white. Is that true?])) (;W[ql]C[Black can make more here than I can on the left.])) (;W[bf] ;B[bh] ;W[ce] ;B[bj] ;W[ql]C[White has a promising game, I think])) (;B[cd] ;W[bf]C[Was black afraid of this tesuji?] ;B[bd] ;W[bh] ;B[cg] ;W[cf] ;B[bg] ;W[ag] ;B[bi] ;W[ah] ;B[ai] ;W[af] ;B[bj] ;W[ck] ;B[bk] ;W[cl] ;B[bl] ;W[bm] ;B[am] ;W[bn]) (;B[ce]C[No other choice.])) (;W[fh]C[W+R])) (;B[hf] ;W[gi] ;B[ie] ;W[md] ;B[hd] ;W[ge] ;B[he] ;W[ql]LB[dd:A]C[Black can activate the aftertaste at A whenever the time fits well. I can't really figure out who is leading-- black's influence is formmidable. But...])) (;B[mc]C[This seems to work.] ;W[la] (;B[ma] ;W[mb] ;B[pa] ;W[qa] ;B[lb]C[It's a ko, but black has some local threats.] ;W[ka] ;B[jb] ;W[mb] ;B[ra] ;W[na] ;B[pc] ;W[md] ;B[nd] ;W[ne] ;B[ke] ;W[lb] ;B[ja]) (;B[mb]C[Lifeless move.] ;W[jb]))) (;B[ni] ;W[mg] ;B[mi] ;W[ic] ;B[kf]LB[if:A]C[It is impossible for white to play A now.] ;W[kh] ;B[if] ;W[li]C[Who is better?])) (;B[ic] ;W[kd] ;B[jd] ;W[je] ;B[jc] ;W[ld] ;B[ie] ;W[jf] ;B[if]C[The result would not be so good for white.])) (;B[oe]C[I haven't found any obvious benefit of pushing yet.] ;W[ne] ;B[nd] ;W[oc] ;B[nf] ;W[me] ;B[qf] ;W[mf] ;B[ng]C[Just a larger split.]))
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Despite several seemingly harsh comments, I was actually more amused than annoyed.
Also for some reason I couldn't download the SGF so I had to make my own.
Hopefully some of my exasperations are of use to you.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[0.00] PW[White]PB[Black] ;B[pc] ;W[qc]C[...why? This is like you're throwing several centuries of fuseki in the bin.] ;B[qd] ;W[pd] ;B[rc]C[Attach, hane, crosscut, and then hane again ... ? Why not throw out the rest along with fuseki.] ;W[qb] ;B[pe] ;W[od]C[Black responded quite badly. White has almost good shape and black gote is imminent.] ;B[rb] ;W[qe] ;B[rd] ;W[pb] ;B[qf] ;W[oe]C[Completely undeserved white victory.] ;B[pf] (;W[qo]CR[dd]C[I would have played in that corner, since white is ahead and it's nice to have stones working together.] ;B[dd] ;W[fc]CR[ic]C[This begs for the pincer. A little further back, maybe?] ;B[hc] (;W[df]CR[fe] ;B[kc] (;W[cc]CR[mc] ;B[nc] ;W[oc] ;B[nb]C[The entire advantage you made in that corner has been eradicated. ] ;W[dc] ;B[ob]C[So now you have an eyeless snake in the upper right. The tradeoff seems awful to me.] ;W[id]CR[me][dp]C[Either of these seem pretty obvious to me. Far higher priority than harassing a group which is nowhere near weak.] ;B[me] ;W[of]CR[nf] ;B[og] ;W[nf] ;B[mf] ;W[ng] ;B[nh] ;W[mh] ;B[oh] ;W[mg] ;B[nj] ;W[ic]CR[kg]C[Didn't understand this choice at all.] ;B[kf]C[Black is entertaining the possibility that your blind snake could die.] ;W[if] ;B[kh] ;W[mj] ;B[nk] ;W[jg] ;B[kg]C[You just helped black solidify the walls around your endangered stones. This is not a good thing.] ;W[mk] ;B[ml] ;W[ll] ;B[lm] ;W[kl] ;B[km] ;W[mm] ;B[nl] ;W[jm]CR[kj]C[You should really have spent some time shaping up.] (;B[lk] ;W[lj] ;B[kk] ;W[kj] ;B[jl] ;W[ji] ;B[jh] ;W[ih] ;B[ii] ;W[ij] ;B[hi]C[Black still thinks your eyeless blob is highly vulnerable. I agree.] ;W[ld]C[That's a bold strategy.] ;B[kd] ;W[le] ;B[lf] ;W[lc] ;B[lb] ;W[kb] ;B[jb]C[Black's mistake made up for yours. You got let off.] ;W[ke] ;B[je] ;W[jd] ;B[jf] ;W[jc] ;B[ig] (;W[hh] ;B[ie] ;W[hf] ;B[hg] ;W[gh] ;B[gf] ;W[he] ;B[hd] ;W[ge] ;B[fe] ;W[gd] ;B[gg] ;W[gi] ;B[fh] ;W[fi] ;B[fd] ;W[gc] ;B[eh] ;W[ei] ;B[dh] ;W[ef] ;B[ff] ;W[di] ;B[ch] ;W[ci]C[At this point, black may in fact be dead.] ;B[ej] ;W[fj]CR[cd]C[Chivalry?] ;B[de] ;W[cf] ;B[be] ;W[eg]CR[bf]C[Yeah, that there would have killed it. Time for expletives and tenuki. D4 looks good.] ;B[bf] ;W[ce] ;B[cd]C[You just forced black to take two points in gote, definitively established a live shape inside and forced black to set up for the following hane.] ;W[bh] ;B[bg] ;W[bi]C[You just deliberately threw away sente.] (;B[bc]C[Black is severely unambitious, here. Lucky for white.] ;W[bb] ;B[ab] ;W[md]C[This capture no longer gives life. It's already alive. And there are bigger moves to make now.] ;B[dp]C[Someone finally realizes a corner is still open. I didn't think this was still going to happen. This game feels really sloppy, right to the end. You really need to take care to finish things, and to look a little bit harder for the largest point on the board.
I'm rather stunned at the ranks, more than anything.]) (;B[dp]C[All of black is alive, it's fine to tenuki now.])) (;W[md]C[How about some certain life already?])) (;B[kj] ;W[lk] ;B[li] ;W[mi] ;B[jl] ;W[jk] ;B[il] ;W[kk] ;B[ik] ;W[jj] ;B[ii])) (;W[mc])) (;W[fe] (;B[df] ;W[he]) (;B[he] ;W[df]))) (;W[dd] ;B[pp] ;W[dp]C[Nice or no?]))
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Elom wrote:
The game appeared to be out of a Mr Bean show, (on my part)
appears to be an obvious overplay: the white stones top right are by no means thick, so you need a restrained flanking extension before anything else.
At you should think about shape, for example L11. Pushing battles are rarely seen between strong players, because they typically turn out much better for one side. Here Black benefits, even though your 3-5 point in the lower right is well placed.
It is OK to go well outside the fuseki book, but it requires a thoughtful approach.
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@Tentano, Thanks for taking a look at my game! Yes, this is one of the extreme ends of the "bad game day" spectrum hence me posting here (it looks like a 10 kyu game, I even forgot to add in some other comments I wanted to out in) to contrast it with a less cringe-educing kifu (attitude determines a lot)
@Charles Matthews: Thanks for the notes! Yes, 42 is a definite overplay which I forgot to mention first time round. Black 39 seemed too timid, or should I say missef a opportunity to seal the game, so 40 and 42 were more or less experimental moves, wondering where black might play.
I believe the answer is the extension at R14?
Hopefully, The next game won't be so scary I did make a silly joseki mistake-- no, two, perhaps-- and ended up losing quite a few stones later...
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(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[1200]OT[5x20 byo-yomi] PW[Zahixa]PB[Elom]WR[1k]BR[2k]DT[2014-12-18]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1246175]C[Elom: Hi! ]RE[W+Resign] ;B[pd] ;W[dc]C[Elom: Have a nice game. Zahixa: hi ] ;B[dp] ;W[pq] ;B[ce] ;W[dh] ;B[fd]C[A ridiculous move (expect nothing less ).] ;W[de]C[*Panic* what did I just do? *panic*] ;B[id] ;W[cd] ;B[qo] ;W[pl] ;B[mq]LB[po:A]C[I didn't know this move was Joseki/Jonseok until after the game. Weather it was acceptable here, I'm not sure.
When your oppnent can play move like A, the ladder should be checked first as ladders are often involved.] ;W[po] ;B[pp] (;W[op] ;B[qp] ;W[qq]LB[oo:B][oq:A]C[This move is slightly aggressive, I was anticipating A or B.] ;B[oq] ;W[oo] ;B[rq] ;W[rr] (;B[rp]LB[so:B][nq:A]C[A instead leads to a ko that impossible for black to win. B might have been better shape.] (;W[nq] ;B[or] ;W[nr] ;B[qr] ;W[mp]C[I'm not sure who came out better here.] (;B[pi]C[I was not sure which move was better, but now I think this is clearly bad...] ;W[fq]C[Black can't stop white.] (;B[hq]C[bad and desperate attemp to stop white from claiming the lower side. Fundamentally awful.] ;W[fo] ;B[kq]C[Another bad move. White is one move away from certain victory.] (;W[lq]C[?] ;B[cn] ;W[dr] ;B[ck] ;W[cq]C[This is too much?] ;B[gp]C[Normally, this kind of aji-keshi is bad, but in this case I thought I might be possible.] ;W[fp] (;B[lp] ;W[mr] ;B[lo] ;W[kr] (;B[lm] ;W[jq] ;B[io] ;W[kp] ;B[jn] ;W[ko] ;B[kn]C[Black gained som undeserved influence, so I was OK with the result.] (;W[nc]TR[fd][id]C[I was not sure how to respond, since the marked stones where not so strong.] (;B[oc]C[Dangerous.] ;W[nd] (;B[oe]LB[lc:A]C[Maybe A was superior.] ;W[kc] ;B[jc] ;W[kd]C[These white stones are unassailable, and black is still weak at the top.] (;B[eb]C[Move of confusion.] ;W[ec] ;B[fc] ;W[ie]C[Now the game is effectively irreversable.] ;B[kb]C[Questionable, but I can't easily refute it.] ;W[lb] (;B[jd]C[Impossible. Black doesn't care about the shape, but actually did not read ahead.] ;W[je] ;B[ke] ;W[jb] ;B[ib] ;W[ka] (;B[db]C[Complete lapse of concentration. All that reading practice went out the window ] ;W[hd]C[Huh!] (;B[ic]C[Very damaging, an unthinkable move.] ;W[hb] ;B[gb] ;W[hc] ;B[cc] ;W[bc] ;B[cb] ;W[be]C[As it stands, black is not alive in the corner, so the game could be considered over.] ;B[bh] ;W[bg] (;B[qk]C[Overplay] ;W[ql]C[White can kill the upper left at any time.] ;B[ci] ;W[ch] ;B[gn] ;W[go]C[Hmm...] ;B[ho] ;W[fn] ;B[ok] ;W[gm] (;B[ki] ;W[ii] ;B[jj] ;W[ij] ;B[ee] ;W[dd] ;B[bb] ;W[ab] ;B[kg] ;W[hf]C[White is succesful! This move means, "I've won!"] ;B[ej] ;W[di] ;B[dj] ;W[fi] ;B[ne] ;W[bi] ;B[gc]C[Looking for a place to resign.] ;W[ga] ;B[fa] ;W[ha] ;B[gg] ;W[ff] ;B[fh] ;W[ei] ;B[gi] ;W[fj] ;B[ef] ;W[eg] ;B[gf] ;W[ge] ;B[hk] ;W[ik]C[Elom: I have lost Zahixa: ty Elom: Thanks for the game! ]) (;B[gg]C[Only move, but...] ;W[kh]LB[qc:A]C[The weakness at A means white is winning.])) (;B[ee] ;W[dd] ;B[fg]C[Only move.] ;W[qc] ;B[qd] ;W[ob] ;B[pc] ;W[pb] ;B[qb] ;W[qj] ;B[qi] ;W[mg]C[Black can't win, but can at least save face.])) (;B[gb]C[Better directly.])) (;B[hd]C[Considering the damage already done, black should stop trying to be clever. Like this, the game can continue.])) (;B[he] ;W[jd] ;B[ic] ;W[if])) (;B[if]C[Black cannot attack white severely without risking his own stones. There is a weaknes at R17, but now is not the right time for white to play there (I think).])) (;B[lc] (;W[pe] ;B[qe] ;W[pf] ;B[od] ;W[ne] ;B[qf] ;W[pg] ;B[ni]C[Who is better?]) (;W[nf] ;B[pf] ;W[ob] ;B[pb] ;W[od] ;B[pc]C[I struggle to find a continuation for white that doesn't make black strong at the top.]))) (;B[lc]C[Black has an open skirt at the top, and the pincer is inefficient because of J16, so I dismissed this move. But...] (;W[qc]C[It depends on who has sente.] ;B[pc] ;W[qd] ;B[pe] ;W[pb] ;B[ob] ;W[qb] ;B[oc] ;W[qf] ;B[fb]C[In this case, it's black. The right side has been lost, however, the right side was already hard to defend, so black doesn't mind so much.]) (;W[fb]C[So white must play here directly.] (;B[oc] ;W[qc]C[Strike!] ;B[pb] ;W[re]C[Alive. Disaster for black.]) (;B[pc]C[The adji is bad. Black would struggle to threaten to make a central moyou.])))) (;W[ip] ;B[ho] ;W[hp] ;B[go] ;W[gq]C[White can cut the stone of anytime for some free cash!])) (;B[jq] ;W[jo] (;B[ko] ;W[jp] ;B[kp] ;W[jn]C[I was afraid of white undermining black, making the group heavy.]) (;B[kp] ;W[kn]C[Now the thickness is useless.]))) (;B[hn]C[Is it better to leave it as it is?] ;W[kp] ;B[jn])) (;W[dn] ;B[lp]C[Not enough.] ;W[mr] ;B[lq] ;W[mo])) (;B[cn] (;W[hp]) (;W[dr]C[Questionable.] ;B[hq]C[Can this be used now?]))) (;B[fq] ;W[qf]LB[rl:A]C[Black cannot make a (weak) double wing anymore, but A undermines white.])) (;W[or]C[White can't win.] ;B[nq] (;W[qs] ;B[pr] ;W[qr] ;B[ns]) (;W[nr] ;B[mr] ;W[ps] ;B[qr] ;W[pr] ;B[ns]))) (;B[or] ;W[rp] ;B[qr] ;W[sq] ;B[pr] ;W[rq] ;B[rn] ;W[qn] ;B[ro] ;W[qm] ;B[rm] ;W[rl] ;B[rs] ;W[sm] ;B[so] ;W[sl] ;B[sr] ;W[ss] ;B[df] ;W[qs] ;B[ee] ;W[dd] ;B[cg] ;W[be] ;B[cf] ;W[fb]C[Game over.])) (;W[qp] ;B[op] (;W[qq] ;B[pn]) (;W[qn] ;B[qq] ;W[ro] ;B[rq])))
The hardest part of training seems to be putting actual games in. Would have to do more of that
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By , Black's cross stars game, the most aggressive of conventional openings, has turned into ducking-and-diving.
So something went fundamentally wrong. is not the obvious choice, but if you play it you need to be in the two-point jump and counter-pincer openings. The lower right corner sequence is a small local gain for White, but a significant strategic loss for Black.
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Thanks for the notes! It actually turns out that white 18 may indeed have been a slight overplay, so black should not have turned out with a slightly inferior result (I'm mot sure if it was correct for white to let black completely cancel the influence). Also, black 13 is a very rare move for a pro. Yes, Joseki is probably my weakest part of my play, I have only read a few go books so DOP is not the trademark of my Go (being very nice). Attempting to Memorise hordes of Joseki isn't that effective in the short term, so I'm going to raise the number of games I play.
Yesterday, I thought that now would be appropiate to set the challenge of winning 5 games in a row on 7 different servers. Why? Well, while I've been determined to improve for quite a while now, for some reason I became even more "eager", if you will-- the downside to playing many strong players in a row without being used to it, like I did in October, is that you might become afraid of your weakest part of the game, and in this case, it was joseki, making it hard for me to even play anymore games much, and only studying. Well, I got tired of being afraid. And more determined to be able to face anyone in the world.
Ironically, after thinking about making sure that I reach 1d by 1st of Jan and "tough talk" about making it to 5th by the end of next year while Mastering every possible GCSE Subject there is, playing in a fun 9x9 tournament against mostly ddk was what needed to calm down, and discover a strange trend... that made the 5-win challenge the perfect goal)...
_________________ On Go proverbs: "A fine Gotation is a diamond in the hand of a dan of wit and a pebble in the hand of a kyu" —Joseph Raux misquoted.
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This particular post might be a little too long... (heh, yeah, particular) But I have an excuse!
On Saturday, I tried out, for the first time, a fun 9x9 double elimination tournament regularly held on OGS. The draw usually consists of mostly ddk's. However, it should be noted that on 9x9 ranks effectively become 3X smaller, making 9x9 tournament quite suitable for situations where there are wide margins of strength between players. In the first game, an interesting trick play arose (my opponent may have become flustered and made a mistake)
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[9]KM[5.50] PW[Elom]PB[Hitozuma]WR[2k]BR[17k]DT[2014-12-20]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1256209]C[Elom: Hi! ]RE[W+57.50] ;B[gc]C[Elom: Hi! ] ;W[cc]C[Elom: Have a nice game! ] ;B[gg]C[Hitozuma: Yoo too, are you from the tournament? ] ;W[eg] ;B[ce] ;W[cg] ;B[ee] ;W[ec] ;B[ge]C[The opening is slightly better for black, in my opinion.] ;W[gh] (;B[fh]C[The fighting spirit is good, but it was an overplay.] ;W[ff] (;B[gf]C[Black grabs onto too much.] ;W[fe] ;B[fd] ;W[ed] ;B[de]C[Elom: Yes
Responding to earlier question.] ;W[fc] ;B[bg] ;W[eh] ;B[hh] ;W[bh] ;B[bf] ;W[gd] ;B[hc] ;W[fg] ;B[gi] ;W[hd] ;B[id] ;W[he] ;B[fb] ;W[eb] ;B[fa] ;W[ea] ;B[hb] ;W[ha] ;B[ia] ;W[ib] ;B[ic] ;W[gb] ;B[ga] ;W[gb]C[Hitozuma: isn't that ko? Elom: Well, ] ;B[bc]C[Elom: due to shortage of liberties, Elom: black was unable to initiate a ko... ] ;W[bb] ;B[bd] ;W[ae] ;B[cd] ;W[cb] ;B[ah] ;W[ch] ;B[ac] ;W[af] ;B[hf] ;W[ie] ;B[if] ;W[ei] ;B[fi] ;W[] ;B[]C[Elom: Thanks for the game! Hitozuma: It's like you see into my mind Elom: got lucky Hitozuma: Thank you too Elom: I got lucky Elom: do you mind if... Elom: we could go over the game a little? Hitozuma: Sure man, I would love that Elom: OK! Elom: Startede quite nicely Elom: Here was a little unusual, I guess Elom: I thought black was ahead! Hitozuma: Where? Elom: This move. Hitozuma: I cannot see any stones moving Elom: but I think I played too passively Elom: and you played better in the opening Hitozuma: Time out, I cannot see what you are doing Elom: Here might better Elom: This move cost black. Elom: at F2 Elom: F2 should be F3 Elom: instead of m13, F5,G4, H4, H3, H5, white must play at F3, so black has sente to attack the upper side. ]) (;B[fe] ;W[gf] ;B[hf] ;W[hg] ;B[ef] ;W[fg] ;B[bd]C[Black is losing, but it's better.])) (;B[fg] ;W[fh] ;B[fb] ;W[eb] ;B[bd] ;W[bc] ;B[bf] ;W[bg] ;B[ac]C[Black can use sente to squeeze white. Black leads.] ;W[ab] ;B[ad] ;W[ba] ;B[ag] ;W[ah] ;B[af] ;W[bi] ;B[hh]))
The unusual part, was that I lost two games! Once against an 8k where I made a poor play on move four and was behind by about five points. I managed to claw back into the game, but eventually lost by 0.5 a point. After three more games, I lost to a player who was 10k after bad shape moves and a silly L&D oversight. Strange, but it seemed like it would be a one-off occurrence, however the strangeness was just starting.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50] PW[Elom]PB[LeMinion]WR[2k]BR[6k]DT[2014-12-21]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1258965]C[LeMinion: hihi ]RE[B+Resign] ;B[qd]C[LeMinion: hihi ] ;W[dd] ;B[pq]C[Elom: Hello! ] ;W[eo] ;B[dp]C[We don't usually invade directly on 4-4.] ;W[ep] ;B[dq] ;W[do] (;B[co] ;W[cn]C[The trouble is, I'm not sure which move can help black.] ;B[cp]C[Mistake (or misclick.).] ;W[eq] ;B[bn] ;W[cm] ;B[oc] ;W[qj] ;B[jq] ;W[po] (;B[qo] ;W[qn] ;B[qp] ;W[pn] ;B[cf]LB[bm:A]C[Black can play around A any time, so this side of the board isn't worth very much.] (;W[ci] ;B[fc] ;W[ce] ;B[df] ;W[ee] ;B[cc] (;W[dc]C[Weird.] ;B[be] ;W[bd] ;B[cd] ;W[de] ;B[bc] ;W[bf] ;B[ad] ;W[bg] ;B[ge]C[White ignored the value of the upper side, black realised this first and caught up.] ;W[jc]C[Overplay.] (;B[ef]C[Could be a misread.] ;W[ff] ;B[fe] ;W[eg] ;B[fg] ;W[gf] ;B[dg] ;W[eh] ;B[fh] ;W[dh]C[Black is in trouble again.] ;B[ie] (;W[mc] ;B[hg] ;W[db] ;B[cb] ;W[qg] ;B[re] (;W[op]C[Misclick.] ;B[oq] ;W[mp] ;B[me] ;W[hc] (;B[mg]C[It seems like black is trying to make points in a small area.] (;W[mi] ;B[gq] ;W[er] ;B[dr] ;W[nq] ;B[mk]C[This move was hard to deal with...] ;W[jk]C[Strange.] ;B[kl]C[I won't even pretend to know what to do.] ;W[nk] ;B[nl] ;W[ml] ;B[mm] ;W[jp] (;B[ll] (;W[ok]C[Makes no sense.] ;B[kq] ;W[nr] ;B[qr] ;W[rq] ;B[or] ;W[ro] ;B[rp] ;W[rn] ;B[sq] ;W[iq] ;B[ir] ;W[hr] ;B[jr] ;W[hq] ;B[kp] ;W[jo] ;B[lo]C[White is ahead by alot now.] ;W[nb] ;B[fj] ;W[ek] ;B[fk] ;W[bm] (;B[gm] (;W[bq]C[Wrong.] ;B[br] ;W[bo] ;B[bp] ;W[an] ;B[aq] ;W[lh] ;B[lg] ;W[hn] ;B[gn] ;W[go] ;B[hm] ;W[jh] ;B[kj] ;W[ki] ;B[jj] ;W[hh]C[White is being unreasonable. White is ahead by much, so should play safely.] ;B[hf] ;W[ij] ;B[ik] ;W[hj] ;B[hk] (;W[ji]C[Unthinkable byo-yomi mistake.] ;B[oh] ;W[pi] ;B[nj] ;W[oj] ;B[ni]C[Game over.] ;W[lj] ;B[kk] ;W[pb] ;B[pc] ;W[jf] ;B[kg] ;W[jg] ;B[kd] ;W[gh] ;B[gg] ;W[je] ;B[jd] ;W[nh] ;B[mh] ;W[gi] ;B[fi] ;W[ig] ;B[ii] ;W[fb] ;B[gb] ;W[cg] ;B[ff] ;W[gc] ;B[eb] ;W[fd] ;B[fa] ;W[da] ;B[gd] ;W[ed] ;B[ca] ;W[ha] ;B[ea]C[LeMinion: good game LeMinion: thanks! Elom: Thanks for the game! ]) (;W[mj]C[White wins.])) (;W[br] (;B[bq] ;W[ds] ;B[cs] ;W[cr] ;B[es] ;W[bo] ;B[ar] ;W[bs] ;B[ap] ;W[an] ;B[bp] ;W[fs] ;B[ds] ;W[ao]C[Mutal life.]) (;B[cr] ;W[bq] ;B[bp] ;W[an] ;B[ao] ;W[am] ;B[bs] ;W[ar] ;B[ds] ;W[as] ;B[cq] ;W[cs]C[Ko.]))) (;B[el]C[The only move.] ;W[dk] ;B[gm])) (;W[kp] (;B[ok] ;W[nj]) (;B[nj] ;W[ok] ;B[mj] ;W[ji]))) (;B[kq] ;W[ll] ;B[lm] ;W[lk] ;B[kk] ;W[lj] ;B[km]C[The game is close.])) (;W[he]C[Later.] (;B[hf]C[Black wouldn't want to make this mistake.] ;W[fd] ;B[hd] ;W[gd] ;B[he] ;W[gc]) (;B[gd] ;W[hd] ;B[hf] ;W[gc]C[White can connect if needed.]))) (;B[gc]C[More severe. White struggles to find a good move.])) (;W[oq])) (;W[hf] ;B[lc] ;W[je]TR[fg][fh]C[White is too weak to attack the marked stones well, I think...])) (;B[lc]C[This?] ;W[hc] ;B[fe] ;W[gb] ;B[fb] ;W[ef] ;B[id]C[White is bearing the reward of the overplay.])) (;W[be]LB[dc:A][fg:B]C[Better. A and the B area is miai.])) (;W[fd] ;B[bd] ;W[jc]C[Better direction, I think.])) (;B[np]C[Not sure this is good at all.] ;W[qq] ;B[qr] ;W[qp] ;B[or] ;W[oj]C[White take a position where black should extend.] ;B[jd])) (;B[eq]C[Here first?] ;W[fq] ;B[co] ;W[cn] ;B[bo]))
Then, I lost two games in the dame-filling stage.
In another shot at the 9x9 title
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[9]KM[5.50] PW[Elom]PB[barry.allison.712]WR[2k]BR[12k]DT[2014-12-21]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1259095]C[Elom: Hello! ]RE[B+Resign] ;B[cf]C[Elom: Hello! ] ;W[gg]C[Elom: Have a nice game! ] ;B[eg] ;W[fe] ;B[fc] ;W[cc] ;B[hd] ;W[he] ;B[gd] ;W[fh] ;B[eh] ;W[be] (;B[bf]C[Mmm...] ;W[ge] (;B[ce] ;W[ec] ;B[eb] ;W[db] ;B[ed] ;W[dc] (;B[gb]C[Hanging on to an un-important stone. Black can connect at F6 anytime, the group is not in danger.] ;W[ea]C[Terrible move.] (;B[fb]C[Losing move (almost ).] ;W[bd] ;B[fg] ;W[gh] ;B[ee]C[Black cannot make any territory now. Game over...] ;W[ae] ;B[af] ;W[cd] ;B[ff] ;W[id] ;B[gf] ;W[hf] ;B[ic] ;W[ie] ;B[hc] ;W[ei] ;B[di] ;W[fi] ;B[dh] ;W[dd] ;B[de] ;W[fa] ;B[ga] ;W[da] ;B[fd] ;W[]C[If it were not for this pass... ] ;B[hg]C[Elom: Thanks for the game! Elom: gg ]) (;B[bd] ;W[fb] ;B[fd] ;W[bc]C[Reverts back to previous diagram.])) (;B[bd] ;W[fb] ;B[gb] ;W[ea] ;B[fd] ;W[bc] ;B[fg] ;W[gh] ;B[ie]C[Black is leading.])) (;B[db]C[Better, I think.])) (;B[ge]C[This first?] ;W[hf] ;B[gf] ;W[hh] ;B[db]C[Proper direction.]))
For some reason, I then became frustrated due to a mis-click while playing in this game. Interestingly enough, these past few weeks, I haven't been all that interested in whether I win online games or not, and being that this was one of the worst game of Go I'd ever played, it was the most unlikely mis-click to ever become upset about.
Here's a rare game against a 2D, who made a strange mistake...
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50] PW[weixng01]PB[Elom]WR[2d]BR[3k]DT[2014-12-22]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1264389]C[Elom: Hello! Elom: Have a nice match! ]RE[W+Resign] ;B[oc] ;W[dp] ;B[pp]C[weixng01: hi ] ;W[dc] ;B[de] ;W[ce] ;B[cf] ;W[cd] ;B[dg] ;W[fc] ;B[ck] ;W[cm] ;B[ek] ;W[gq]C[Unusual.] ;B[cq] ;W[dq] (;B[cp]C[First of all, some simple reading shows that black can live.] ;W[co] ;B[bo] ;W[bn] ;B[do] ;W[cn] ;B[dr] ;W[er] (;B[cr]C[Now black missed the fairway for the rough.] ;W[bp] ;B[eq] ;W[ep] ;B[fq] ;W[fr] ;B[fp] ;W[eo] ;B[fo] ;W[en] ;B[hr] ;W[gr] ;B[hp] ;W[hq] ;B[iq] ;W[gp] ;B[bq] ;W[ao] ;B[qd] ;W[qn] ;B[qk] ;W[qq] ;B[qp] ;W[pq] ;B[op] ;W[rp] ;B[ro] ;W[rq] ;B[qo] ;W[nq] ;B[np] ;W[mq] ;B[mj] ;W[qe] ;B[rd] ;W[qj] ;B[pk] ;W[pj] ;B[oh] ;W[ph] ;B[oj] ;W[og] ;B[oi] ;W[qg] ;B[pf] ;W[pg] ;B[kd] ;W[ic] ;B[ie] ;W[re] ;B[mg] ;W[ng] ;B[mh] ;W[pe] ;B[hl] ;W[ef] ;B[df] ;W[he] ;B[hf] ;W[gf] ;B[ge] ;W[hd] ;B[fe] ;W[if] ;B[hg] ;W[je] ;B[ig] ;W[jf] ;B[kc] ;W[bk] ;B[cj] ;W[bj] ;B[bi] ;W[cl] ;B[bf] ;W[jg] ;B[jh] ;W[kh] ;B[ji]C[White apathetically let's black come within 15 points] ;W[fk] ;B[el] ;W[ik] ;B[gm] ;W[il] ;B[im] ;W[kk] ;B[ki] ;W[jm] ;B[jo] ;W[in] ;B[hm] ;W[jn] ;B[ko] ;W[ho] ;B[ip]C[Now all those points are gone.] ;W[go]C[Elom: Thanls for the game Elom: Thanks* ]) (;B[br]C[Ko.])) (;B[bp]))
It seemed as if my bad spell would never end. Finally, I won a game where I won after a bigger blunder, but white was alreadly ahead. Typical would be for white to just resign. A lesson about mistakes.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50] PW[Elom]PB[Tsubame]WR[3k]BR[4k]DT[2014-12-22]CP[online-go.com]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1264464]C[Tsubame: Bonne partie Elom: Hello! ]RE[W+Resign] ;B[pd]C[Elom: Hello! ] ;W[dd] ;B[dp]C[Elom: Hve a nice game ] ;W[pp] ;B[cf] ;W[cj] ;B[fc] ;W[fd] ;B[gd] ;W[fe] ;B[ec] ;W[de]C[Wrong.] (;B[jc]C[?] ;W[dc] ;B[qn]C[Elom: Have* ] ;W[qj] ;B[mp] ;W[qo] ;B[pn] ;W[gq] ;B[iq] ;W[cn] ;B[dn] ;W[dm] ;B[en] ;W[co] ;B[cp] ;W[em] ;B[ep] ;W[kq]C[Overplay...] ;B[jq] ;W[ko] ;B[io] ;W[hl] ;B[go] ;W[oo] ;B[qq]C[Overplay...?] ;W[ro] ;B[pq] ;W[oq] ;B[or] ;W[nq] ;B[nr] ;W[mq] ;B[oj] ;W[pl]C[Is this the correct response?] ;B[on] (;W[ph]C[Careless.] ;B[po] ;W[qp] ;B[no] ;W[op] ;B[lp] ;W[kp] ;B[lq] ;W[mr] ;B[lr] ;W[ns] (;B[kr] ;W[nm] ;B[nn] (;W[rq]C[Horrible.] ;B[mm] ;W[ge] ;B[hd]C[I have no Idea where to play next. This kind of situation is hard for me... Any ideas?] ;W[qf]C[Weird, but I didn't have any good ideas...] ;B[ci]C[Hmm... Black can't really succeed.] ;W[dj] ;B[di] ;W[be] ;B[fi] ;W[eh] ;B[ei] ;W[ih] ;B[ii] ;W[hi] ;B[gh] ;W[hh] ;B[fl] ;W[fm] ;B[gm]C[?] ;W[gl] ;B[cl] ;W[bj] ;B[dl] ;W[cm] ;B[bl] ;W[el] ;B[ek] ;W[fk] ;B[ej] ;W[bi] ;B[bh] ;W[dk] ;B[ai] ;W[al] ;B[am] ;W[aj] ;B[ak] ;W[ah] ;B[bg] ;W[bm] ;B[an] ;W[bp] ;B[ag] (;W[bo]C[misclick.] ;B[bk] ;W[ao] ;B[ai] ;W[id] ;B[ck] ;W[ic] ;B[hb] ;W[ib] ;B[he] ;W[ie] ;B[hf]C[It seems a bit much.] ;W[gg] ;B[gf] ;W[fg] ;B[if] ;W[jf] ;B[jg] ;W[ig] ;B[je] ;W[kf] ;B[jd] ;W[jb] ;B[hc] ;W[kb] ;B[db] ;W[cb] ;B[fb] ;W[da] ;B[ea] ;W[eb] ;B[ff] ;W[ef] ;B[db] ;W[ca] ;B[ga] ;W[eb] ;B[ed] ;W[ee] ;B[db] ;W[qc] ;B[eb] ;W[ni]C[Trade.] ;B[pc]C[Too much.] ;W[qb] ;B[qd] ;W[pb] ;B[ob] ;W[nc] ;B[oc] ;W[rd] ;B[re] ;W[sc] ;B[qe] ;W[nd] ;B[rb] ;W[ra] ;B[sb] ;W[pa] ;B[qg] ;W[pf] ;B[rf] ;W[pg] ;B[rh] ;W[ri] ;B[oe] ;W[nj] ;B[bc] ;W[cc] ;B[bb] ;W[bd] ;B[ce] ;W[hg] ;B[kg] ;W[lf] ;B[gj] ;W[ik] ;B[hj] ;W[ij] ;B[ji] ;W[kj] ;B[lg] ;W[mf] ;B[nf] ;W[mg] ;B[ng] ;W[nh] ;B[qi] ;W[qh] ;B[qr] ;W[rr] ;B[rn] (;W[rl] ;B[rg] (;W[km] ;B[pj] ;W[qk] ;B[pi] (;W[bq] ;B[rj] ;W[si] (;B[sj] (;W[nl] ;B[sh] ;W[ri] ;B[oh]C[So, here, resigning would be a quick response,, but was already ahead. Fortunately for white, white decided to play on.] ;W[er] (;B[dr] ;W[cr] ;B[dq] ;W[ds] ;B[fr] ;W[fs] ;B[eq] ;W[gr] ;B[es] ;W[oi] ;B[og] ;W[er] ;B[rc] ;W[sa] ;B[es] ;W[ok] ;B[si] ;W[er] ;B[os] ;W[ms] ;B[es] ;W[pk] ;B[ri] ;W[er] ;B[ne] ;W[fq]C[As it turns out, black is dead. Not completely obvious 26 moves ago.] ;B[hr] ;W[hp] ;B[jr] ;W[is] ;B[jo] ;W[kn] ;B[hs] ;W[ho] ;B[hn] ;W[in] ;B[jn] ;W[im] ;B[mk] ;W[nk] ;B[gs] ;W[li] ;B[hq] ;W[gp] ;B[fp] ;W[fo] ;B[fn] ;W[gn] ;B[ln] ;W[lo] ;B[go] ;W[hm] ;B[gn] ;W[do] ;B[jm] ;W[jl] ;B[kl] ;W[ll] ;B[ls] ;W[js] ;B[ml] ;W[kk]C[Tsubame: Merci pour la partie Elom: Thanks for the game! Elom: Merci Tsubame: ]) (;B[hp])) (;W[oh])) (;B[oh])) (;W[oh])) (;W[pi])) (;W[pi])) (;W[ao] ;B[ai] ;W[bn] ;B[bk] ;W[ah] ;B[os] ;W[pr] ;B[ai] ;W[id])) (;W[ml] ;B[om] ;W[ol] ;B[mm] ;W[ll] ;B[nl] ;W[nk] ;B[km] ;W[mh]C[White doen't mind this trade.] ;B[kl] ;W[kk] ;B[jk] ;W[kj] ;B[hk] ;W[gk] ;B[gj] ;W[hj] ;B[ik] ;W[fj] ;B[gi] ;W[fi])) (;B[ol]) (;B[km]C[White cannot descend. Very severe.])) (;W[nl]C[Better.]) (;W[no]C[Slow...] ;B[ol])) (;B[dc]C[Is this better?]))
The biggest mistakes are sometimes the one not noticed at the current level.
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Note: Heh, this is mainly a short rant (a little late-- 10-12 days exactly) about how much of a freshman I was ahem, _when_ I was playing in the London Open Go Congress for two days (out of four) last year, with enough use of the pronoun "I" to make me cringe, + some other thoughts and gobbledygook, but don't worry, there are a few short game reviews some might find useful...
I finally played in the London Open! After weeks of anticipation (actually, this was the only the second tournament I've ever played in, so please excuse me...)
This year was the toughest London Open ever to win, as three 7 dans, one 6 dan, and ten 5 dans. For comparison, last year there was only one 5 dan.
After entering the playing hall, it was announced that the bar would be at 5 dan (!). We spent some time in the hall before the start of round one (meeting up with someone from the previous tournament I went to, watching Andrew Kay review (?) a game), the predominant sound being chatter of dozens of people. Contrast that with the sound of nothing but the sound of ticking of 40 clocks and stones being snapped onto the board.
Game 1
For some reason, it was much more difficult for me to simply write down the coordinates of my moves than expected (I didn't use a proper game recorder), and spent 20% the time recording the game. I just played very badly, far worse than usual (no excuses, Elom!), so a loss was inevitable. When reviewed the opening after the game, I was mentally kicking myself half the time
In the game analysis room, we were introduced to Choi Dongeun 1p (assigned to help weak players like me ) and Fan Hui 2p (assigned to help not-so-weak players). It really didn't register until after a few seconds who I was in front of! I've always wanted a game review by a pro
In the first game, I played very badly. I don't want to make excuses, but figuring out the coordinates of each move was much harder than usual for me, my brain just didn't seem to be working properly, so it really was not my best go (Go which was already bad in the first place... I'm still weak anyhow ). I wanted to win quite a bit, but when I played badly in the opening, I panicked and made overplay after overplay before the position crumbled.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[AGA]SZ[19]KM[7.50]TM[5400]OT[20/300 Canadian] PW[Willson, Elom]PB[Wurzinger, Ralf]WR[2k]BR[2k]DT[2014-12-28]EV[London Open Go Congress]RO[1]WT[UK]BT[FR]SO[Faulty Record + Memory]RE[B+Resign] ;B[dp] ;W[qo] ;B[dc] ;W[ce] ;B[qd] ;W[fd] ;B[de] ;W[df]LB[po:C][np:B][pp:D][pq:A]C[In the end, I decided that I'd play the taisha in the other corner.] ;B[ee] ;W[cd] ;B[ec] ;W[cc]C[White made a compromise. But I probably shouldn't have said that during the review...] ;B[ef] (;W[cn]C[Very Bad.] (;B[dk] ;W[dg]LB[dg:1][dk:2][cn:3]C[I said, It's as if white played 3 after 1 and 2. Hmm, talking too much...] ;B[id] (;W[pq] ;B[co] ;W[jq] ;B[pj] ;W[nc]LB[oc:A]C[Choi 1p: White should just play at A instead.] ;B[pc] (;W[jc]C[Choi 1p: Bad--] ;B[ic] ;W[ib] ;B[hb] ;W[jd] (;B[ie]C[Choi 1p: Not so good.] ;W[pe]LB[ne:A]C[Choi 1p: Overplay. A instead is fine.] ;B[od] ;W[pi] ;B[qi] ;W[qh] (;B[qj] ;W[ni]LB[ph:A]C[Choi 1p: Bad shape. Just play A.] (;B[qm]C[Choi 1p: mistake.] ;W[rh] ;B[oi] ;W[oh] ;B[ph] ;W[pg] (;B[pi]C[Choi: Bad shape.
I wondered why black didn't make the ko during the game.] ;W[ng] ;B[nj]C[At this point, I completely mixed up the moves during the review, and stopped soon after.] (;W[gq] ;B[nd] ;W[kf] ;B[mi] ;W[mc] ;B[nh] ;W[mf] ;B[md] ;W[lc] ;B[le] ;W[jg] ;B[og] ;W[pf] ;B[rf] ;W[qg] ;B[of] ;W[oe] ;B[ne] ;W[nf] ;B[oh]C[The game went on for quite a bit more, but in the end, white resigned.]) (;W[kf]LB[mi:A]C[It's too painful to let black play at A] ;B[mi])) (;B[og]C[Choi 1p: Wrong.] ;W[nh]C[Black is strange.] ;B[pi] ;W[of]) (;B[nh] ;W[og] ;B[mh])) (;B[ph]C[Better.])) (;B[oi] ;W[ph] ;B[qj] ;W[oh]LB[ph:2][oi:1]C[Choi 1p: the 1-2 exchange isn't necessary.])) (;B[je]LB[jb:A]C[Choi 1p: -- Black can hane here or play at A, good for Black.])) (;W[kc]C[White can only play here.])) (;W[fq]C[I incorrectly believed I played here during the review.] ;B[co]LB[dn:A]C[Choi 1p: black should play A instead.] (;W[dn] ;B[eo] ;W[cq] ;B[bo]C[Choi 1p: Good for white.]) (;W[pq]LB[dn:A]C[White must play at A now.]))) (;B[dg] ;W[cf] ;B[dk]C[Expected.])) (;W[dg]C[Only move.]))
One problem was that I over-thought during the review (saying nothing but "yeah" doesn't sound like you're taking in the advice, at the same time I didn't want to start ranting about what I was thinking and when-- I'm not really interested in that myself, but in Choi sensei's thinking. Anyway, I stammered a lot (It's been three years! bad habit ), making it take a little longer than the length of the record suggests (I didn't really want to play it out from the game record, but to replay it from memory. Well, that didn't work too well fortunately the game had already been decided at the point where memory fails me.
Of course, the top room is quite different from the main hall. It just has a palpable tension in the air that the main hall doesn't have
Note: For the next three games, I did not record them at all until two to three days after my last game on the 29th. Unfortunately, I'm too weak a player to remember three game of Go in my head fr two days, so I only have the opening of each game, and I am definitely not 100% sure of whether the moves are correct
Game 2
Considering how much I wanted a positive win-loss ratio, I felt that I couldn't lose my next game no-matter what. Problem was, I already wasn't feeling very confident before my first game at all, partly due to the fact that I always believe that I'm going to mess up this or that joseki (I often do) and have been having a bad spell of unusual game-losing poka. It turns out that in this game, it was not me who made a jonseok mistake, but my opponent!
I was saying to myself to not worry about joseki, just play the ones you know and don't worry about making mistakes, contrary to how I had been thinking for the past few weeks. However, it turned out that the next game was against one of the older 2 kyu's, which in my mind meant that out of all other aspects of the game, jonseok and other aspects of Go related to knowledge is one thing that would not be one of his weaker points, to say the least.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[AGA]SZ[19]KM[7.50]TM[5400]OT[20/300 Canadian] PW[Willson, Elom]PB[Okabe, Kenjiro]WR[2k]BR[2k]DT[2014-12-28]EV[London Open Go Congress]RO[2]WT[UK]BT[JP]SO[Memory]RE[B+Resign] ;B[dp] ;W[pq] ;B[dc] ;W[qd] ;B[di] ;W[fq] ;B[cn] ;W[dr] ;B[od] ;W[mc] ;B[qc] ;W[pc] ;B[pd] ;W[oc] (;B[qe]C[This move is a mistake.] ;W[rd] ;B[nc] ;W[nd] ;B[nb] ;W[qb]LB[rd:2][qe:1]C[Here we can clearly see the damage of the 1-2 exchange.] (;B[ne] ;W[md] ;B[re] ;W[rc]C[The result is brilliant for white. From this point on, I'm not sure about the order of some of the moves.] ;B[pj] (;W[qo] ;B[me] ;W[jp] ;B[cq] (;W[ce]LB[le:A]C[Choi 1p: The hane at A is big.] ;B[cd] ;W[de] ;B[fd] ;W[dg] ;B[ch]LB[hc:B][mc:C][dk:A]C[White has helped black make moyou around A and territory around B while completely destroying the white thickness at C, a very silly thing to do.] ;W[gg]LB[ff:A]C[Choi 1p: A is better shape.] ;B[fi]C[At this point, I had a brain Block, so had to stop the review. I'm not sure about he record past this point.] (;W[mb] ;B[hd] ;W[le] ;B[lf] ;W[kf] ;B[ke] ;W[ld] ;B[lg] (;W[hh] ;B[je] ;W[fo] ;B[em] (;W[ql] ;B[hj] (;W[rj]LB[ii:A]C[I responded to black's move instantly, before kicking myself in the foot (well, not literally, but this move was far more painful than that).] ;B[ji] ;W[bd]C[White is desperate.] ;B[bc] ;W[dd] ;B[cc] ;W[fh] ;B[ff] ;W[gi] ;B[gj] ;W[fg] ;B[eh] ;W[ed] (;B[eg] ;W[ec] ;B[fc] ;W[eb] ;B[be] ;W[bf] ;B[ad]LB[ha:A]C[Eyeing at A, I picked up my stone from the bowl, moved my fingers towards the top of the board. Problem was, I was so nervous that accidentally placed the stone... One point to the right... ] (;W[ia] ;B[ga]C[Like this, the game is hopeless for white. If black plays correctly, white should lose. I'm really unsure about the move order now.] ;W[qh] ;B[ph]LB[ko:A]C[Black should play A for a sure win.] ;W[km]C[After this, black invaded white's framework too deeply, and nearly lost the game. However, white made an unimaginable mistake that allowed black to live, so resigned. ]) (;W[ha]LB[ef:B][kh:A]C[Like this, the game is not bad for white at all. A is a good probe, and B is even sente.])) (;B[ec]C[Maybe black thought the aji was bad.] ;W[fe]C[I don't think this works for white, but I haven't found a way for black to kill white yet.] (;B[ge] ;W[gf] ;B[ee] ;W[ef] ;B[fe] ;W[eg] (;B[hi] ;W[ig] ;B[ih] ;W[jg] ;B[kh] ;W[hf] ;B[gh] ;W[bf] ;B[ad] ;W[gi] ;B[cg] ;W[dh] ;B[ei] ;W[ci] ;B[bi] ;W[cj] ;B[bj] ;W[ck] ;B[bk] ;W[fj] ;B[ej] ;W[fk] ;B[ek] ;W[dl]) (;B[dh] ;W[hi] ;B[hg] ;W[jh] ;B[ki] ;W[hf] ;B[ig] ;W[jf] ;B[ih] ;W[ii] ;B[ij] ;W[gh] ;B[jg] ;W[ie])) (;B[ef] ;W[eg] ;B[ge] ;W[gf] ;B[ee] ;W[df] ;B[fe] ;W[dh] ;B[ei] ;W[ci]))) (;W[ii] ;B[ij] ;W[ki] ;B[mi] ;W[jj] ;B[rk] ;W[rl]C[The game is even.])) (;W[hj] ;B[qm])) (;W[je]C[Better (if this is what happened in the game.])) (;W[ic])) (;W[le]C[Choi 1p: White can aim at the weakness in black's shape.])) (;W[me] ;B[nf] ;W[qo]C[Better.])) (;B[rc]LB[pb:B][rd:A]C[Because of the white stone at A, White does not need to play B] ;W[rb])) (;B[nc]C[Black usually goes here immediately.]))
After the game, we played another friendly match (which I won this time, heh) in which an interesting mutual life position almost appeared (my opponent played tenuki and died instead), you could tell, however, that he really enjoyed playing Igo!
Actually, last year, having a game reviewed by a professional player was seen as a dream that may happen in the far future, more of a wish-- last year, the strongest participant in the Congress was 5 dan, and at the time I signed up, much of the information about this years congress had not yet been online. Having three professional and the amount of strong players this year was completely beyond the realm of what I (huh, I've used this pronoun so much. Wait, not again...) expected. How to explain this sudden increase in stature? Well, it can only be a good thing in any case.
Afterwards, I met with two of the juniors playing in the tournament (I was one of the few others), 6 kyu and 10 kyu, the latter of whom I played a six stone handicap lightning Game with. However, when black missed an important cut that lost quite a few stones while giving white a strong outside position, (it was a lightning mistake, I think) the game quickly became difficult for black because the handicap was overcome too early. In a 4-stone game against the 6kyu, white made a silly opening mistake that allowed black to pincer where white should have extended, and from that point on black just did not let up, no matter what I tried. Seeing I had overturned less than two handicap stones by the endgame, I resigned! I'm sure that with some hard work and drilling of the fundamentals, they can become strong in the future .
the next two games were not reviewed by Choi 1p
Game 3
Next morning, we arrived at the ISH 40 minutes late , and I mistakenly believed that after 30min (60m may have been the actual time) if your opponent doesn't show up, you're awarded a win (but miss out on a game :/). Upon arriving, I met an opponent who had been patiently waiting for me to appear, so we headed straight towards the main hall for our game on board number thirty-something. I was perfectly capable of playing so called "fast" Go! (about 30-40m of main time were left).
Incredibly, not only did I not fall behind due to a Jonseok mistake for the second time in a row, but also had all but sealed the win! We both made some mistakes which I may not exactly be proud of, but when the kettle boiled I had captured his dragon so that the only way for me to lose was to repeatedly make "poka" so that the dragon could live. Guess what? This is exactly what I did as if my "luck" (which is what mostly decides kyu games ) couldn't have gotten any worse from the strange dame-blunders in the previous post)
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[AGA]SZ[19]KM[7.50]TM[5400]OT[20/300 Canadian] PW[Sonneberger, Joerg]PB[Willson, Elom]WR[3k]BR[2k]DT[2014-12-29]EV[London Open Go Congress 2014]RO[3]PC[International Students House]WT[DE]BT[UK]SO[Memory]RE[W+Resign] ;B[pd] ;W[dp] ;B[pq] ;W[dd] ;B[fc] ;W[df] ;B[jd] ;W[qf] ;B[qe] ;W[pf] ;B[pi] ;W[nf] ;B[nd] ;W[qk]C[Questionable, white creates two weak groups.] ;B[qj] ;W[pk] ;B[ni] ;W[po] ;B[og] ;W[of] (;B[rj]C[Questionable (Siven's note), too small.] (;W[oh]C[Black became stronger by much; the compensation for white is small.] (;B[oi] (;W[ng]C[This move also seems like it should be saved for later. It's a big mistake.] ;B[qp]C[The timing is strange.] ;W[oq]C[White risks starting a fight where black is weak.] (;B[ol]C[Weird.] (;W[ok]C[A bit much. I wasn't expecting this.] ;B[nk] ;W[nl] ;B[mk] ;W[om] ;B[re]LB[kg:C][ml:A][nm:B]C[(Siven) It's better to play the A-B-C sequence. Or play at C directly.] ;W[qo]C[Crucial mistake. Now the game is hopeless for white.] ;B[kg] ;W[le] ;B[kd] ;W[lh] ;B[kh] ;W[li] (;B[kj] ;W[ki] ;B[ji] ;W[lj] ;B[lk] ;W[jf] (;B[jj]C[BAD, black is too scared of making a mistake and losing.] ;W[me] ;B[lg] ;W[md] (;B[mc]C[I'm annoying myself ] ;W[lc] (;B[ld]C[A very thoughtless move.] ;W[nc] ;B[mb] ;W[nb] ;B[lb] ;W[od]C[Now, the game is beyond hopeless for black.] ;B[pc] ;W[rf]C[Is it better to leave this unplayed?] ;B[pa] ;W[jp]C[I'm not sure about the order of the moves from here.] ;B[ch] (;W[dh] ;B[di] ;W[eh] ;B[cg] ;W[cf] (;B[cn] ;W[cj]C[Black should resign.] (;B[dj] ;W[ck] ;B[dk] ;W[cl] ;B[dl] ;W[cm] ;B[dm] ;W[co] ;B[dn] ;W[bn] ;B[rp] ;W[ro] (;B[pr]C[Terrible move.] ;W[or] ;B[pp] ;W[op] ;B[so] ;W[sn] ;B[sp] ;W[rm] ;B[os] ;W[ns] ;B[ps] ;W[mr]C[Now black ends in gote or loses eight points.] ;B[fq] ;W[hq] ;B[cq] ;W[dq] ;B[dr] ;W[cp] ;B[er] ;W[ci] ;B[fn] ;W[cr] ;B[bq] ;W[br] ;B[lp]C[Too deep of course, the game is desperate.] ;W[ko] ;B[mn] ;W[mo] ;B[no] ;W[mp] ;B[ln] ;W[lo] ;B[on] ;W[pn] ;B[hn] ;W[fo] ;B[fn] ;W[go] ;B[cc] ;W[dc] ;B[db] ;W[eb] ;B[cb] ;W[ec] ;B[fb] ;W[fa] ;B[ga] ;W[ea] ;B[be] ;W[bf] ;B[ce] ;W[cd] ;B[bd] ;W[bc] ;B[ac] ;W[gb] ;B[gc] ;W[hb] ;B[hc] ;W[ib] ;B[fi] ;W[rr] ;B[rs] ;W[sr] ;B[qr] ;W[rq] ;B[hr] (;W[ir] ;B[gq] ;W[hp] ;B[fs] ;W[hs] ;B[gr] ;W[ds]) (;W[ss] (;B[qs]C[This shows why it's a ko.] ;W[sq] ;B[qq] ;W[sr]) (;B[sq] ;W[qs]))) (;B[or]C[This is the obvious play.])) (;B[ci] ;W[dk] (;B[cq] ;W[ej] ;B[bj] ;W[bk] ;B[dj] ;W[ck] ;B[ei] ;W[fi] ;B[fj] ;W[ek] ;B[fh] ;W[gi] ;B[gh] ;W[gj] ;B[dg] ;W[eg] ;B[ef] ;W[fg] ;B[ff] ;W[gg] ;B[hh] ;W[hg] ;B[fk] ;W[gk] ;B[fl] ;W[gl] ;B[fm] ;W[bg]) (;B[ek] ;W[dj] ;B[ei] ;W[ej] ;B[fi] ;W[dg]LB[cn:D][ro:B][rp:A][or:C]C[After playing A, B, and C, black can choose where to invade whites area using the aji of D.]))) (;B[cm]C[Black can only go so far. White is way ahead now.] (;W[cj] ;B[dj] ;W[ck] ;B[dk] ;W[cl] ;B[dl] ;W[bm] ;B[cn] ;W[bn] ;B[co] ;W[bo] ;B[cp] ;W[ci]) (;W[pr] ;B[qr] ;W[pp] ;B[qq] ;W[or] ;B[ro] ;W[rn] ;B[sp] ;W[co]))) (;W[cg] ;B[dh] ;W[ck]C[I expected this.])) (;B[nc] ;W[ld] ;B[kf])) (;B[nc]C[Obvious.])) (;B[me] ;W[jj] ;B[kk] ;W[jh] ;B[lg] ;W[mh] ;B[ii])) (;B[jj] ;W[lk] (;B[ml] ;W[kl] ;B[nm]) (;B[lj] ;W[kj] (;B[mj] ;W[ki]) (;B[kk] ;W[mj] ;B[ll] ;W[nj] ;B[lj] ;W[mi] ;B[oj] ;W[lk] ;B[ml] ;W[ki] ;B[ji] ;W[kl] ;B[jk] ;W[rk]C[Not looking good for black.])))) (;W[qo]CR[pk][qk]C[Quite big, and naturally saves the two stones.]) (;W[md]LB[ng:A]C[This move now works because of the stone at A. I think it's the biggest move on the board...] (;B[ne] ;W[me] ;B[mf] ;W[lf]) (;B[me] ;W[ne]) (;B[mc]C[Only way.] ;W[ld] ;B[lc] ;W[kd] ;B[kc] ;W[je]))) (;B[pp] ;W[op] ;B[oo]C[Siven's suggestion.])) (;W[lf]LB[nh:A]C[Playing a move like A would be too slow for black.] ;B[nh] ;W[md])) (;B[mh]C[I think this move may have been stronger.])) (;W[lf])) (;B[mg]C[This move seems far more logical. White is in a difficult position.]))
One of the good things about playing in person is that your more able to have a post-game analysis. Online, you don't exactly know if the person has all the time in the world @.@ and you tend to usually want to play many fast games.
My aim is to be able to play a game in the top room next year. You could say that it's a bit much on the delluded side, but after some thought, it's not quite as scary as it first sounds (more below). But I definitely won't advise anyone to confident on that possibility !
One of the amusing things about the huge difference in level and attitude between Asia and Europe concerning Baduk is when trying to explain the meaning of ranks to beginners. Yes, the 10k-1k levels imply that Go is a hobby for you, and Dan levels are quite "advanced" levels, the time in which it takes to become a blackbelt in Igo is the same as many other martial arts. But describing it that way can put things out of context. In the end, I thought that the best way was to give my dad two almost contradictory scales-- the "pastime" scale and the "competitive" scale, where 4 dan is considered average. On that note, one other interesting situation was when my dad and I met with Matuesz Surma (Yay! Err, you didn't hear that). Of course, my Dad didn't know who he was, and was quite impressed upon finding out that he made it to Seven-dan (almost pro level) .
Game 4
With the earlier loss still taking its toll, I played my last game against another 3 kyu. Desperately hoping for just one victory (partly to show I wasn't saying strange things when entering at 2kyu), I played relatively safely, and lo and behold, White came out ahead in the opening once again-- black invested in territory that was undermined to a large extent, and when white activated the aji of two flexible white stones, the game became extremely difficult for black. White just kept amassing points and securing the garden, while black's strategy was to attack the thin white stones severely (something which was very, very hard to do). By the early endgame, the match was all but over, all white had to do was connect his stones in the centre to another group which was connected to the rest of the board (I left the centre group to become unnecessarily weak, opting to greedily take more cash). But, out of five options, I chose the one possible direction the would lead to white's demise. Yes, it was hard to believe that I had killed my own group by playing useless forcing moves against my opponents strong group, but that's exactly what had happened. I continued the game for a while actually, but every fancy move I thought of missed mutual life literally by a hairs breadth (a SINGLE stone). Finding that I almost felt the very letters of the phrase "I resign" creeping up my throat just to materialize into an undignified grunt of "I--" before placing a stone that was the last tricky play, I started to think that the dramatic resignation scenes in HnG were not as much of an exaggeration as I first thought
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[AGA]SZ[19]KM[7.50]TM[5400]OT[20/300 Canadian] PW[Willson, Elom]PB[Kaniuk, Geoff]WR[2k]BR[3k]DT[2014-12-29]EV[London OpenGo Congress 2014]PC[International Students House]WT[UK]SO[Memory]RE[B+Resign] ;B[dp] ;W[pd] ;B[dc] ;W[op] ;B[ci] ;W[fq] ;B[ip] ;W[cq] (;B[dq] ;W[cp] ;B[do] ;W[dr] ;B[er] ;W[cr] ;B[eq] ;W[cn] (;B[fp] ;W[nc] ;B[qo] (;W[de] ;B[fd] ;W[cc] ;B[cb] ;W[fe] ;B[gd] ;W[bb] ;B[cd] ;W[bc] ;B[dd] ;W[db] ;B[eb] ;W[ca] ;B[ce] ;W[qj] ;B[mq] ;W[qp]C[Is this strategy correct?] (;B[po]C[I expected black to cut.] ;W[pp] ;B[ql] ;W[oj] ;B[ol] ;W[mp]C[Is this okay?] ;B[lp] ;W[nq] (;B[lq]LB[mo:A]TR[ol][ql][po][qo]C[A is an important point, because of the marked group. This move is too slow.] ;W[ei]TR[de][fe]C[The two marked stones were hard to capture. Like this, much of black's influence has now been undermined (as well as some territory). I'm quite unsure of the record from this point, (more than I already was) but white should have an easy game.] ;B[dl] ;W[ef] ;B[cf] ;W[ek] ;B[el] ;W[kc] ;B[hh] ;W[he] ;B[ge] ;W[gf] ;B[hf] ;W[hg] ;B[if] ;W[ig] ;B[gg] ;W[gh] ;B[ff] ;W[fg] ;B[gf] ;W[jg] ;B[fh] ;W[gi] ;B[hi] ;W[eg]LB[qd:A]C[At one point in the game, white eventually secured the point at A while the centre group was clearly alive. It may seem amazing that white lost the game from that point on, all I can say is don't underestimate how badly I can play, and that white was desperately looking for a single win, which led to a greed that led to white sudden collapse (from a "won" game).]) (;B[mo] ;W[np] ;B[mn]LB[lq:A]C[Maybe black should deal with the upper left first, but i don't know what the best move is for that. A stone is not really needed at A (I think).])) (;B[pp] (;W[pq] ;B[po] ;W[qq] ;B[mo] ;W[oo] ;B[pl] ;W[oj]C[I think this is slightly better for black than in the game, but my positional judgement isn't very good...] ;B[nl]) (;W[po] ;B[pq] (;W[qn] ;B[ro] ;W[rn] ;B[rp] ;W[oq] ;B[pr] ;W[on]TR[mq]C[White is choosing a strategy that doesn't seem very logical.] ;B[oj]C[The white thickness isn't working very well.]) (;W[rp]C[Black has the choice.])))) (;W[qp] ;B[po] ;W[pp] ;B[qk] ;W[qm]C[Leads into a complicated battle that I could not hope to understand (for now...)] (;B[pl] ;W[pm] ;B[om] ;W[on] ;B[pn] ;W[ol] ;B[nm] ;W[ro] ;B[oo] ;W[nn] ;B[no] ;W[mn] ;B[rm] ;W[ql] ;B[pk] ;W[rl] ;B[rn] ;W[rj] ;B[mm] ;W[ln] ;B[pi] (;W[qh] ;B[np]LB[ol:A]C[Removes some of the aji at A.] ;W[lm] ;B[nk] ;W[ll] ;B[mk] ;W[rp]) (;W[rp]C[Mistake.] ;B[ri] ;W[qj] ;B[pj] ;W[qi] ;B[qh] ;W[rh] ;B[rk] ;W[sk] ;B[qn] ;W[sl] ;B[sm])) (;B[ro] ;W[om] ;B[rp] ;W[qh] ;B[oo] ;W[np] ;B[pl] ;W[pm] ;B[nk]))) (;B[jd]LB[hp:B][ip:A]C[If A was at B, doesn't this mean black can play here? I don't think A has to be where it is considering the 5-4 stone in the lower right...])) (;B[cp] ;W[dq] ;B[ep]LB[ci:A][hp:C][ip:B]C[(Kanuik) because the stone at A is low, this direction doesn't work very well for black. Considering that, I think that maybe the pincer at B should be at C to take sente to play on the upper side, since part of black's left side is undercut.]))
I'm not sure whether it's because I finished all my games very quickly, but one of the things I was struck by was the fact that the number of people taking the chance to review their games with the professional players was relatively low, to the point where there were sometimes instances where none if the three teachers were actively giving teaching games or game reviews! I remember that Lee Hajin 3p once mentioned that in some tournaments not a lot of people review their games with pros.
But it's a privilege
Pattern
Wow, it seems that only one game was decided due to a Joseki error (#1).
Teaching
I knew that Fan 2p was one of The Top European players I saw on online TV a week or two earlierEuropean Champion Very, very strong but seeing how passionately he was breaking down different positions to keenly listening amateurs I thought he must be something like 5p in teaching .
After my last game, seeing that the Pros were free, I had a second game review-- except, at the time, I wasn't sure whether I could remember much at all of the games I had played on the day, and thought that I may be more successful attempting recall of game #2 (I have no idea why this is), although I didn't expect to remember much (She had to teach at a lecture soon). I got stuck at a sudden point, even earlier than expected, and had to excuse myself having replayed only 40-45 moves (a little embarrassed ).
I feel that I lost the first game badly (I played horrible Go) and lost the second one almost "normally", in that if I hadn't played such a "stupid" move, the game would have been even. However, games three and four can be considered throwaways from a winning position. But any disappointment from that is dwarfed by the fact that none of the games were of good quality at all. It’s as if a wrongdoing had been done which could only be rectified by becoming stronger...
Future Goals
I haven't been around here much because I've been busy studying ! (yes, so believable) Okay, I should work harder to improve. One of the features of my Go journey is the fact that I spend a lot less input than other players learning concepts. I've only read 3 go books (Rivermountain Go 1&2, (I was already close around 10k at the time, however, yet it was the first time I learned the proverb "extend three from two" etc ) and 1/3 of the book "the Chinese opening" by Katao Masao 9p, because the Chinese Opening is-- Let's just say I couldn't play with it, definitely couldn't play against it, yet modern Go is not the same without it ) and the lack of fundamental principles are a snag that needs to be removed. For an example, the jumping on the upper right of the first game was a basic mistake. Also, when showing a variation where black initiates the ko (instead of connecting in bad shape) I was meaning to calculate which cut was better, yet my fingers did not oblige while my mouth said "here or here". Of course, Choi 1p demonstrated that the two cuts are different, and that precision and reasoning are necessary. My fingers cannot take responsibility here, I must be responsible for my own moves and not disrespect the Go board with compromised effort and half-baked moves.
This why I set the goal of 4d-5d by the end of the year, not because it's crazy (okay then, partly because it's a closer to a pipe dream than a goal) but because I want to start playing a different game. The most likely scenario is that I'm hovering by the end of the year at around 2d~3d, but rank improvement isn't actually the goal. The hope is to 'be at peace with Go'/'become one with the stones'/'hmm, can't think of a third expression'...
So the main plan
1: Start reading books and listening to lectures (note that I did not include 'more' in that statement!), specifically one slightly below my level that focus on fundamental principles for the first six months.
2: Begin studying Joseki from multiple sources. I started this a couple of days ago, and I realized that what I learnt the most was about about positional judgement, not joseki. Therefore, no attempt must be made to memorize. Choosing two or three opening points two use exclusively each month while repetitively going over the same joseki sequences and comments should do the trick in the long term, anyway.
Hopefully, we'll see some good games posted here in the future!
*Okay, this is the last unnecessarily long first-person post I'm doing in a long time* *sweat*
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I can't emphasize enough that if you are going to record your games using pen and paper, it's much much easier to use a traditional kifu, ideally a full sized sheet (Letter/A4). You don't have to worry about coordinates at all, just shape, and the shape on the record should match that on the board as you go.
That said, it takes experience doing it to keep recording a game from distracting you, and once you get to a certain level, you may find it easier to remember the game and recording afterwards, as while going over it, than to do it during the game. I certainly find that in our local tournaments (45 min + 5m/20stones canadian overtime) the time controls can be a bit tight to do both, but I always record by hand at the US Open (1h30m + 5x30s byo-yomi).
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I forgot to mention that they did in fact have game recording sheets at the Congress, and after the first game I actually took a sheet of recording paper with the intention of using it, but by the time I started the second match I wrote an X and forgot all about recording!
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Hello. It's been a while since the last post, and simply put, this journal has been relatively quit due to the fact that nearly all of my games are played online-- and the PC brokedown, during the very period in which I started to focus more on studying, meaning only games had been played in January and February, apart from giving four teaching games .
There is the feeling that my positional judgement has improved, so hopefully there'll be less blind fighting a little calmer, less "time to get to 10d" nonsense and filling the sgf with expert (not) analysis (shame ) or whining about how X loss was a throw-away, more substance .
(Exerimenting on OGS with a Tablet for the first time)
(;WR[3k]RE[B+T]BR[7k]KM[0.5]C[Elom: Hi! samsam: hi ]HA[4]DT[2015-03-05]PL[W]AB[dd][pp][pd][dp]RU[japanese]PW[Elom]SZ[19]GM[1]CP[online-go.com]FF[4]PB[samsam]PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1656319];W[pc]C[MisTap.];B[qc] ;W[qd] ;B[oc] ;W[pb] ;B[qe] ;W[rd] ;B[re] ;W[od] ;B[pe] ;W[rc] ;B[qb] ;W[rb] ;B[ob] ;W[qa] ;B[nd]C[The result is very bad for white.];W[fq] ;B[fp] ;W[gp] ;B[fo] ;W[eq] ;B[dq] ;W[go] ;B[dn] ;W[fn]C[This move is vulgar.
My reasoning was that black may find it tricky to come up with the best response. Still, I cannot vouch for it's playability.];B[gn]C[I was a little surprised by the fierceness of this counter.];W[en] ;B[do] ;W[hn] ;B[gm] ;W[hm] ;B[gl] ;W[oe] (;B[ho]C[Another fierce play.];W[hp] ;B[io] ;W[ip] ;B[jo] ;W[jm]C[Was this proper haengma?];B[jp] ;W[jq] ;B[kq] ;W[jr]C[Was this correct shape?];B[hl] (;W[jn]C[For an apparent lack of a better move, white simply triesto create shape.];B[kn] ;W[km] ;B[ln] ;W[lm]C[I actually was not sure if I should play this exact move, but I decided to not try be clever.];B[kr] ;W[qm]C[This is an unsure moment for white. Loosely approaching the corner was a bid to eventually weaken the upper right group-- strengthening white's position in turn-- it also seemed to be the case that if the central stones where attacked, any resulting black wall wouldn't be extremely effective.
This logic is probably wrong, and I of course expected black to go against white's plan and pincer, anyway.
I missed the reactivation of the ladder.](;B[mn]C[Unexpected.];W[of] (;B[mm]C[Is black's direction correct?];W[mc] ;B[lk] ;W[jk]C[It is difficult to attack the stones well.];B[jj] ;W[ik] (;B[hj]C[Slip.];W[ij] ;B[ii] ;W[ji] ;B[kj] ;W[hi] ;B[ih] ;W[hk] ;B[gj] ;W[gk] ;B[el] ;W[fl] ;B[fm] ;W[fk] ;B[em] ;W[gi]C[White has a reasonable position in the center?];B[il]C[];W[jl] ;B[ei] (;W[fj] ;B[gg]C[Black is still on the offensive?];W[hg]C[];B[hh]C[];W[gh] ;B[fg] ;W[dj] ;B[ej] ;W[ek] ;B[dk] ;W[dl] ;B[ck] ;W[cj] ;B[ll] (;W[qj] ;B[fi]C[With this mistake, things start looking uncomfortable for black.];W[fh] ;B[eh] ;W[eg] ;B[gj] ;W[hj] ;B[dh] ;W[dg] ;B[ch] ;W[hf] ;B[ff] ;W[fe]C[This exchange was probably in black's favour.];B[ef] ;W[jh]C[Black may have missed this.
I'm not sure about how I would continue as black.](;B[md]C[Not a ladder breaker per se-- white can use a net in the center.];W[ld] ;B[lc] ;W[kc] ;B[lb] ;W[kb] ;B[kd] ;W[le] ;B[mb] ;W[jd]C[Hmm, it seems that black possibly should have waited?];B[ke] ;W[kf] ;B[nc] ;W[oh] ;B[qh] (;W[ri]C[Terrible move.];B[pi] (;W[oi]C[The wrong direction. White is being careless and disrespectful to the stones!];B[pj] (;W[rp] ;B[rq] ;W[qp] ;B[qq] ;W[po] ;B[op] (;W[qk]C[Losing move?];B[oj] ;W[cc] ;B[cd] ;W[fc] ;B[ec]C[];W[fb] ;B[eb] (;W[cl]C[Complete nonsense.];B[bk]C[];W[bj] ;B[bl] ;W[cg] ;B[bg] ;W[de]C[147-152 byo-yomi suji.];B[ee] ;W[fd] ;B[ed] ;W[bf] ;B[cf] ;W[dr]C[Thanks to the debacle on the left, white is 40 points behind. White's only hope is a play in the upper right that gains about 15 points. Can you find it?];B[cr] ;W[ks] ;B[hr] (;W[gr]C[Is this just a slack move?];B[iq] ;W[ir] ;B[hq] ;W[gq] ;B[hs] ;W[gs] ;B[er]C[Slip.](;W[is]C[This is byo-yomi panic nonsense.];B[lr] ;W[ls] ;B[ms] ;W[js] ;B[mr] ;W[oo]C[Timesuji that doesn't work -@-];B[no] ;W[sq] ;B[on] ;W[pn] ;B[pm] ;W[pl] ;B[qo] ;W[om] (;B[ro]C[Black is in danger. White should attac ck now.](;W[rn]C[I exhasperate myself ](;B[ni]C[Sensible direction, good.];W[nh] ;B[mi] (;W[nn] ;B[sp] ;W[sn]C[];B[mf] ;W[mh] ;B[lh] ;W[lg] ;B[kh] ;W[mg] ;B[nf] ;W[og] ;B[lf]C[I didn't pay attention to the clock (or more precisely, I couldn't *see* the clock, as I had zoomed into this section if the board.)
B+T
The observant viewer would spot the possible play mentioned earlier.](;W[kg];B[je];W[ie];B[jf];W[jg];B[me];W[id];B[rh]C[What some may think would happen.])(;W[je];B[kg](;W[qg]C[])(;W[li]C[What was going to happen.
White is still far behind, however, thanks to some poor skills on the left.];B[lj];W[nj](;B[ki];W[nk](;B[jg]C[This would be an overplay.];W[ml])(;B[ml];W[jg]))(;B[mj])(;B[nk];W[mj](;B[ol];W[nl])(;B[ok];W[mk];B[nl];W[ml])))))(;W[nk];B[nj];W[ml];B[nl]C[Black can use this.]))(;B[nl]C[Is this better?]))(;W[nl];B[ml];W[nj]))(;B[nj]))(;W[lr]))(;W[lr];B[iq];W[gq];B[ir];W[js];B[is];W[ls];B[lq];W[mr];B[mq];W[nr];B[or];W[gr]))(;W[bi]C[Basic tesuji.]))(;W[nl]))(;W[nl]C[Can black escape?];B[nk];W[ok];B[qk];W[rk];B[pk](;W[ql];B[oj];W[ol];B[nj];W[ml];B[pl])(;W[ol]C[Correct, and black is dead.])))(;W[pj];B[oi];W[nj]))(;W[qi]C[The clear way.]))(;B[cl]C[Very large.])(;B[pi]C[Is this possible?]))(;W[eh]C[This is more severe?]))(;W[di];B[eh]C[Seemed to strengthen black.]))(;B[ij];W[hk](;B[hj];W[gk])(;B[gk];W[hj];B[kj]C[Is this the best way?])))(;B[qh];W[mc])(;B[mc];W[qg]))(;B[of];W[ne];B[me])(;B[qo];W[pi](;B[qk];W[qj];B[pk];W[of]C[White's dream.])(;B[of]C[The ladder now works.])))(;W[il];B[ik];W[jk];B[ij]C[White does not seem to gain anything much-- the possible peeks are very painful-- and black gets a solid wall.];W[jj];B[kl];W[jl];B[ii]))(;B[hq];W[jp]C[If black peeps, it seems that white can handle it somewhat.])(;B[ne];W[of](;B[nc];W[qg]C[It's a struggle for me to find a great move for black.])(;B[pg];W[nc](;B[mc];W[nb];B[mb];W[oa]C[Black is destroyed.])(;B[nb];W[mc];B[mb];W[lc]))))
_________________ On Go proverbs: "A fine Gotation is a diamond in the hand of a dan of wit and a pebble in the hand of a kyu" —Joseph Raux misquoted.
I notice that you seem to look at the point at which white lost as fairly late in the game, but I think, apart from the iffy result at the top right, that the real problems came in the lower left when white overplayed a few times and black took advantage by cutting white apart. Running with the central group was also not good, as even when it lived, it solidified the entire left side for black, and it was hard to see where white was supposed to get the points to win after that.
You could consider the more advanced technique of using the central stones as bait, to force black to capture them relatively small later on while you build strong positions on the outside. The other thing is that with a 4 stone game, if the handicap is right, you shouldn't catch up until the endgame. Trying to catch up too fast leads to issues.
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Thank you very much, skydr! After reading your notes, it becomes strikingly clear that white's whole approach towards the game and positional perception was flawed.
ps: On move 141, if white plays at B11 first, as far as I can tell, it seems that C8 and the kosumi at C14 become miai (pardon me if I've missed something, as I'm prone to blindspots ).
_________________ On Go proverbs: "A fine Gotation is a diamond in the hand of a dan of wit and a pebble in the hand of a kyu" —Joseph Raux misquoted.
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