emeraldemon wrote:Anyway i have notes in the sgf, any suggestions on how to play better would be most appreciated.

Big point, but you should hold back one line, because the enclosure is already stretched out.

I think I'd play at P5, trying to get sente here. The M3 stone can't be completely killed in one more play. F13 is where you want to start a fight.

This sort of sequence almost always gives up too much.

At P7 would set up more attacking chances, and give White the problem of how to cut across in good shape. But Black has become thin on the whole right side.

This play hardly coordinates at all with the previous one.

This is the area where White is strongest, so postpone fighting here.

Come out at L5 and you can at least challenge White. Don't defend kikashi stones, exploit them indirectly.
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