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Please critique my game? 7/4/16

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In the following game, are :b31: :b33: :b37: :b49: :b51: :b53: :b69: dubious moves some of which are a waste?

Are there any other obvious misplays or areas of improvement you noticed?

Thanks in advanced for any comment.

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Post by EdLee »

Hi pragmaticleas,

:b19: Q12.

:b25: Q12.

After your :b17: , W needs to add a move (example: R11, etc.).
W never fixed his group, and you never thought to punish him ?

Example: if ( :b25: - R12 ) exchange, then :b25: feels slow.

:b29: Unclear what's your gain. R7.

:b31: Misclick ? :)

:b33: Misclick, again ?

:b35: Q4.
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EdLee wrote:Hi pragmaticleas,

:b19: Q12.

:b25: Q12.

After your :b17: , W needs to add a move (example: R11, etc.).
W never fixed his group, and you never thought to punish him ?

Example: if ( :b25: - R12 ) exchange, then :b25: feels slow.
Very much so. By the way, would B R13 be comparable to B Q12?
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Post by EdLee »

pragmaticleas wrote:would B R13 be comparable to B Q12?
B R13 feels too close. You need to look ahead a few moves to look at the resulting shape(s).
If B R13 still looks good then, good. Else, no.
( You cannot look at just one move, B R13, or two, or three, ... --
we're all trying to read as far as we can. :))
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Thanks once again EdLee for your analysis.

I will aim to seize any chance to punish my opponent from now on (and avoid misclicking :) ).
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Post by Charles Matthews »

Seems you need some disobedience training.
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