Magicwand's Study Journal

[Magicwand]

I have stable job now and some time for me to enjoy my life and I would like to improve my game by going over the game.
I will post some of my games from KGS or some other server put together some thoughts in my head into this journal.

anyone may post comments or questions:
I hope this thread become long and helpful to many.

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[EdLee]

I have stable job now and some time for me to enjoy my life

Congrats, Magicwand.

[Magicwand]

$$Wcm1 1-10
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W9: i think this is more flexable than Q14
B10: appears to be strong but i am thinking unnecessary aggresion.

Below is my choice.

$$Wcm1 1-10
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 . . . . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 . . |
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[go]$$Wcm1 1-10
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$$ | . . 6 . . . . . . . . . . . . . 0 . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

[Magicwand]

$$Wcm11 11-20
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . 0 . 8 . 6 . . . . |
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$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm11 11-20
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

B14: Mistake. It should jump knight move to P11
W15: I was not sure how i answer B14 but realize that jump to the center is good for white.

after many trade of jumping black loses influene on top. I think i gained some points after my final jump below

$$Wcm21 21-30
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 . . . O . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X 0 X 7 X . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm21 21-30
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . 1 . O 4 O . O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 6 5 3 . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X 0 X 7 X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . 9 8 . , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

I am regreting the fact that i didnt answer peep.
I think black made good decision not to answer my peep.
But it is getting more complicated and stronger player usually come out ahead because weaker player miss one critical move. (i will discuss on next post)

[Magicwand]

$$Wcm31 31-40
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O 5 O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O 4 . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X 1 , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 3 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 8 O 6 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 0 7 . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm31 31-40
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O 5 O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O 4 . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X 1 , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 3 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 8 O 6 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 0 7 . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

W37: I know that it is an overplay but i had no choice
B39: This is the chance #1 black lost imo. simple S9 would leave R7 cut or S12. i think that would kill white group and i get some compensation of thickness. black ahead by capturing my group.

$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . 7 . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O . 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X O X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 1 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . 0 . O 8 . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . 9 . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . 7 . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O . 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X O X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 1 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . 0 . O 8 . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . 9 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

some might disagree with me but black second missed chance is B44
I have analyzed the board and came to that conclusion.
Below is my assessment of the position.

$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O 4 O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O 9 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X 7 X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 6 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . 0 8 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O 4 O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O 9 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X 7 X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 6 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . 0 8 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

capturing at 44 is the critical point black should have played.
playing ko for life and getting little compensation in the corner is good enough to win this game. But if black read that much then i can not give him two stone.

[Magicwand]

Move 45 below was too big. black should never lose that point.
luckly i had enough sense to tenuki corner.

$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . 7 . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O . 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X 7 X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 1 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . 0 . O 8 . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . 9 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm41 41-50
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 5 X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . 7 . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 X O . 2 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X 7 X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 1 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . . 0 . O 8 . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . . . . . . 9 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

again B46 is big point but my W47 was even bigger imo.
B48 is a mistake that solidified by weak lower side.
any invasion on bottom will give me enough influence to capture center group without any fight.
I am thinking B48 cause that thickness.
B60 is also mistake. It is looking for ladder breaker but it is not that important at this point of the game.

$$Wcm51 51-60
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . O X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . O X O . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . 3 . . 9 1 . X . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . 7 X . O X . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . 2 . 5 6 . O 4 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 . 0 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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[go]$$Wcm51 51-60
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . . X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . O X . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O X O O O . O . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O O X . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . X X X O X . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . O X O , X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . O X O . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . 3 . . 9 1 . X . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . O , . . 7 X . O X . . |
$$ | . . . . . O . . . . 2 . 5 6 . O 4 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 . 0 . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

I was really proud of myself of finding move W53
At this point B54 is very small but i think he played it to attack my group by taking my eye space away from me. Because of that move i was able to solidify center influence and was happy.

I will stop my review of this game now.
Black had some more chances but white in the middle appears to be too be for black player which forced him to kill his group clean.
I have pointed out many of his mistakes but it was very close game at the end.
that must means that i must have made many mistakes myself.
Yes i am weak. that is why i am trying to improve.

any comments or questions are welcomed.

[Magicwand]

I have self-reviewed another game i played.
Full of mistakes..some has to do with my opponent being much weaker player..

I am learning how to use multigo... SGF i created was also full of mistakes..
i have posted them anyway for the record purpose.

hope i can get a game with even or stronger player so my review can have more quality.

(;CA[utf-8]FF[4]ST[2]RU[Japanese]OT[5x20 byo-yomi]C[magicwand [4d\]\: hi
MoogleOo [3d\]\: hi
magicwand [4d\]\: ???
magicwand [4d\]\: ayt?
]
AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]GM[1]DT[2016-07-16]PC[The KGS Go Server at http\://www.gokgs.com/]
PB[MoogleOo]BR[3d]PW[magicwand]WR[4d]KM[0.5]TM[600]RE[W+Resign]MULTIGOGM[1]
;B[pd]BL[410.51];W[dp]WL[594.514]C[MoogleOo [3d\]\: sry
];B[pq]BL[408.671];W[dd]
WL[592.065];B[fq]BL[406.411];W[cn]WL[588.644];B[fc]BL[402.213];W[df]WL[585.49];B[jp]
BL[386.712];W[qj]WL[575.23];B[qf]BL[380.62];W[qn]WL[570.681];B[po]BL[377.846];W[rp]
WL[567.094]
(;B[pn]BL[352.594]N[that would be B mistake. Letting your opponent's cover their weakness in sente.]
BM[1];W[qm]WL[564.817];B[qq]BL[351.046]N[End game move during fuseki.];W[hq]WL[547.534]
;B[hp]BL[339.269];W[ip]WL[546.604];B[io]BL[327.063];W[iq]WL[544.811];B[jq]BL[324.668]
;W[gp]WL[543.988];B[ho]BL[323.372];W[gq]WL[542.97];B[kn]BL[321.411];W[ec]WL[531.57]
(;B[dq]BL[319.784];W[cq]WL[522.462]
(;B[ep]BL[313.042];W[dr]WL[520.458];B[er]BL[310.462];W[eq]WL[519.437];B[qk]BL[308.546]
;W[pk]WL[507.681];B[dq]BL[306.72];W[eo]WL[503.801];B[cr]BL[301.626];W[eq]WL[502.263]
;B[ql]BL[290.482];W[pl]WL[499.199];B[dq]BL[289.044];W[jr]WL[480.997];B[kr]BL[275.552]
;W[eq]WL[479.297];B[rj]BL[271.21];W[qi]WL[438.382];B[dq]BL[268.238];W[kq]WL[431.313]
;B[kp]BL[266.171];W[eq]WL[429.315];B[ri]BL[264.835];W[qh]WL[395.131]N[black should have answerd]
(;B[dq]BL[244.051];W[rh]WL[393.243];B[ds]BL[217.028];W[fo]WL[390.826]N[white is ahead already after first fight.]
;B[cp]BL[215.333]N[I should have answered atari. was too greedy.];W[fd]WL[362.461]
;B[do]BL[209.051];W[dn]WL[358.216];B[ch]BL[207.139];W[cg]WL[353.287]N[timid move.. should have pincerd to cover my cut at E6]
;B[cc]BL[205.018];W[db]WL[349.695];B[en]BL[198.063];W[fn]WL[321.211];B[bg]BL[195.287]
;W[bf]WL[311.305];B[dg]BL[194.298];W[cf]WL[297.566];B[em]BL[192.597];W[fm]WL[288.3]
;B[dm]BL[169.416];W[el]WL[270.921];B[cm]BL[159.204];W[cl]WL[267.124];B[bm]BL[153.132]
;W[dl]WL[260.898];B[bl]BL[136.458];W[bk]WL[256.613];B[ck]BL[135.434];W[cj]WL[244.924]
;B[bn]BL[128.128];W[fk]WL[224.182]N[black captured my garbage stones and give up too much influence.]
;B[oc]BL[109.714];W[mc]WL[217.396];B[kc]BL[106.322];W[me]WL[213.098];B[ke]BL[104.288]
;W[nb]WL[210.131]N[This move is trying to stop in sente black from connecting under.]
;B[mf]BL[90.049];W[nf]WL[193.227];B[nd]BL[85.74];W[md]WL[189.224];B[ne]BL[84.726]
;W[lf]WL[187.3];B[mg]BL[83.886];W[jd]WL[172.587]N[nice sequence before connection. IMO]
;B[jc]BL[73.894];W[id]WL[164.011];B[ic]BL[70.601];W[hd]WL[144.52];B[kd]BL[65.462]
;W[le]WL[140.89];B[fb]BL[63.231];W[ng]WL[113.736];B[eb]BL[42.146];W[dc]WL[107.108]
;B[nh]BL[35.705];W[og]WL[102.285]N[empty triangle was very good move IMO];B[jf]
BL[19.861];W[lg]WL[93.114];B[ob]BL[14.959];W[om]WL[80.223]N[If it was close game i would have took two stone but i felt that i was ahead by alot and can out play my opponent.]
;B[rg]BL[13.395];W[sh]WL[70.21];B[mh]BL[1.968];W[lh]WL[67.427];OB[5]B[oh]BL[20]
;W[pg]WL[65.539];OB[5]B[oj]BL[20];W[nk]WL[47.232];OB[5]B[li]BL[20];W[ki]WL[42.411]
;OB[5]B[lj]BL[20];W[jh]WL[21.973];OB[5]B[lb]BL[20]N[my reading say black was alive...]
;W[oa]WL[17.052];OB[5]B[pa]BL[20];W[na]WL[15.748];OB[5]B[qb]BL[20];OW[5]W[lm]WL[20]
;OB[5]B[pj]BL[20];OW[5]W[nj]WL[20];OB[5]B[ni]BL[20];OW[5]W[ph]WL[20];OB[5]B[gl]
BL[20];OW[5]W[fl]WL[20];OB[5]B[kj]BL[20];OW[5]W[jl]WL[20];OB[5]B[ji]BL[20];OW[5]
W[kh]WL[20];OB[5]B[kl]BL[20];OW[5]W[km]WL[20];OB[5]B[jk]BL[20];OW[5]W[il]WL[20]
N[should have connected at K7];OB[5]B[ii]BL[20];OW[5]W[ih]WL[20];OB[5]B[ll]BL[20]
;OW[5]W[ik]WL[20];OB[4]B[ml]BL[20];OW[5]W[oi]WL[20];OB[4]B[mm]BL[20];OW[5]W[ln]
WL[20];OB[4]B[mn]BL[20];OW[5]W[lo]WL[20]N[i was afraid of this variation but black didnt see that. I should have played more solid game. \:(]
(;OB[4]B[jn]BL[20];OW[5]W[jm]WL[20];OB[4]B[mi]BL[20];OW[5]W[ok]WL[20];OB[4]B[hi]
BL[20];OW[5]W[hh]WL[20];OB[4]B[gh]BL[20];OW[5]W[gi]WL[20];OB[4]B[gj]BL[20];OW[5]
W[fi]WL[20];OB[4]B[gk]BL[20];OW[5]W[hj]WL[20]C[MoogleOo [3d\]\: =(
];OB[4]B[jj]
BL[20];OW[3]W[hm]WL[20];OB[4]B[ge]BL[20];OW[3]W[gd]WL[20];OB[4]B[gg]BL[20];OW[3]
W[if]WL[20];OB[4]B[np]BL[20];OW[3]W[ko]WL[20];OB[4]B[jo]BL[20];OW[3]W[mo]WL[20]
;OB[4]B[no]BL[20]C[MoogleOo [3d\]\: thx
magicwand [4d\]\: thx
])
(;B[jm];W[jn];B[im];W[in];B[hm]
(;W[ko];B[jo])
(;W[jo];B[hn];W[ko];B[lq];W[lp];B[kq])))
(;B[rh]
(;W[pm])
(;W[rl];B[rk];W[pm];B[dq])))
(;B[cp]N[Shape such as this should have been cross cut.]))
(;B[fd]N[black playing corner that i tenukied but unless he can get sente and come back here he should have answered my move.]))
(;B[rq]N[This would at least make sense ];W[qp];B[qq]))

[Magicwand]

Lost game to 3D. I would not say that he is stronger but i played few timid moves to lose game.
Not too many comments due to me not feeling good about this game.
any comments also welcome. I want to improve my game through this.

(;CA[utf-8]FF[4]ST[2]RU[Japanese]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]GM[1]DT[2016-07-17]
PC[The KGS Go Server at http\://www.gokgs.com/]PB[netarou]BR[3d]PW[magicwand]WR[4d]
KM[0.5]TM[1500]RE[B+11.50]MULTIGOGM[1]
;B[pd]BL[1495.26];W[dp]WL[1496.9];B[pq]BL[1493.12];W[dd]WL[1494.66];B[fq]BL[1491.47]
;W[cn]WL[1491.69];B[jp]BL[1489.53];W[qj]WL[1488.67];B[ql]BL[1476.21];W[qg]WL[1486.28]
;B[qe]BL[1473.81];W[nc]WL[1484.98];B[nd]BL[1467.01];W[md]WL[1484.08];B[ne]BL[1465.29]
;W[oc]WL[1482.82];B[pc]BL[1463.55];W[lc]WL[1481];B[ok]BL[1454.1];W[ng]WL[1461.44]
;B[me]BL[1436.19];W[le]WL[1458.55];B[lf]BL[1434.06];W[mf]WL[1454.75];B[ke]BL[1431.93]
;W[ld]WL[1452.45];B[lg]BL[1421.3];W[pb]WL[1428.55];B[qb]BL[1418.87];W[oa]WL[1427.31]
;B[rc]BL[1407.77];W[ni]WL[1416.96];B[li]BL[1368.03];W[nk]WL[1409.81];B[nl]BL[1314.98]
;W[mk]WL[1406.56];B[oj]BL[1313.31];W[mi]WL[1404.91];B[jd]BL[1210.6];W[jb]WL[1365.06]
;B[kj]BL[1196.93];W[ml]WL[1360.57];B[nm]BL[1193.98]
(;W[ln]WL[1334.1];B[kl]BL[1177.55];W[mm]WL[1330.03];B[nn]BL[1172.5];W[lp]WL[1328.51]
;B[ko]BL[1168.71];W[lo]WL[1319.29];B[np]BL[1166.77];W[jk]WL[1292.21];B[kk]BL[1162.45]
;W[nq]WL[1283.31];B[oq]BL[1150.56];W[mp]WL[1266.6];B[no]BL[1093.42];W[nr]WL[1260.76]
;B[lr]BL[1090.57];W[kq]WL[1251.23];B[jq]BL[1088.32];W[kr]WL[1249.85];B[jr]BL[1087.46]
;W[ls]WL[1248.69];B[ph]BL[981.899];W[pf]WL[1228.29];B[pe]BL[978.331]
(;W[pi]WL[1225.08];B[oi]BL[961.571];W[oh]WL[1222.14];B[og]BL[953.106];W[nh]WL[1218.49]
;B[qi]BL[936.467];W[pj]WL[1212.44];B[qh]BL[934.497]
(;W[pg]WL[1192.48];B[rg]BL[897.928];W[of]WL[1190.09];B[rf]BL[818.804];W[jm]WL[1177.03]
;B[km]BL[812.343];W[kn]WL[1174.87];B[jn]BL[810.963];W[in]WL[1167.57];B[jo]BL[808.94]
;W[jl]WL[1161.99];B[jj]BL[805.861];W[hl]WL[1156.28];B[hj]BL[803.606];W[eq]WL[1147.61]
;B[fp]BL[800.735];W[ho]WL[1090.54];B[hp]BL[787.454];W[go]WL[1087.19];B[fo]BL[780.692]
(;W[gm]WL[1062.23];B[do]BL[764.121];W[co]WL[1059.52];B[cq]BL[760.629];W[dq]WL[1016.56]
;B[fm]BL[755.187];W[fl]WL[1014.36];B[em]BL[748.902];W[el]WL[1005.51];B[dm]BL[745.927]
;W[dn]WL[992.492];B[eo]BL[741.625];W[cp]WL[986.707];B[gk]BL[737.803];W[gl]WL[983.952]
;B[dl]BL[733.62];W[ej]WL[969.607];B[dk]BL[727.875];W[fi]WL[964.677];B[ci]BL[725.747]
;W[jf]WL[939.782];B[kf]BL[718.675];W[jh]WL[920.222];B[kh]BL[704.977];W[hh]WL[911.383]
;B[nf]BL[702.061];W[mg]WL[905.664];B[hd]BL[651.81]
(;W[mr]WL[892.148];B[fc]BL[637.253];W[ec]WL[888.137];B[fd]BL[633.751]
(;W[cg]WL[884.638];B[de]BL[627.689];W[ce]WL[882.292];B[ed]BL[622.987];W[dc]WL[880.793]
;B[df]BL[620.708];W[cf]WL[879.206];B[dg]BL[618.943];W[dh]WL[868.698];B[ch]BL[589.073]
;W[ff]WL[860.648];B[fe]BL[580.425];W[di]WL[845.045];B[dj]BL[577.498];W[hf]WL[828.012]
;B[eh]BL[561.257];W[ei]WL[824.877];B[gi]BL[559.368];W[fh]WL[823.35];B[kb]BL[526.51]
(;W[kc]WL[792.864];B[ib]BL[499.915];W[jc]WL[791.372];B[ic]BL[499.006];W[eb]WL[706.082]
;B[ji]BL[441.007];W[ie]WL[682.651];B[id]BL[437.94];W[jg]WL[657.814];B[ek]BL[380.376]
;W[fk]WL[654.898];B[fj]BL[379.044];W[gj]WL[646.855];B[mn]BL[364.095];W[lm]WL[645.057]
;B[fj]BL[362.564];W[ij]WL[581.536];B[ii]BL[352.275];W[gj]WL[579.96];B[ja]BL[343.299]
;W[lb]WL[568.895];B[fj]BL[340.827];W[ik]WL[514.441];B[hi]BL[335.04];W[gj]WL[510.426]
;B[cd]BL[303.117];W[eg]WL[504.397];B[ee]BL[300.794];W[bd]WL[486.873];B[fj]BL[298.901]
;W[je]WL[475.333];B[kd]BL[230.544];W[im]WL[453.372];B[gg]BL[121.671];W[gh]WL[435.633]
;B[ge]BL[93.41]
(;W[lj]WL[366.47];B[kg]BL[18.082];W[gb]WL[298.113];B[gf]BL[6.335];W[hg]WL[278.541]
;OB[5]B[fg]BL[30];W[gj]WL[277.065];OB[5]B[fb]BL[30];W[fa]WL[250.766];OB[5]B[fj]
BL[30];W[lh]WL[225.869];OB[5]B[gj]BL[30];W[ki]WL[224.972];OB[5]B[he]BL[30];W[ih]
WL[223.02];OB[5]B[li]BL[30];W[cj]WL[219.844];OB[5]B[bj]BL[30];W[ki]WL[218.147];OB[5]
B[ig]BL[30];W[lk]WL[190.916];OB[5]B[li]BL[30];W[bi]WL[188.758];OB[5]B[bh]BL[30]
;W[ki]WL[187.104];OB[4]B[cc]BL[30];W[cb]WL[185.235];OB[4]B[li]BL[30];W[bg]WL[179.935]
;OB[4]B[ck]BL[30];W[ki]WL[178.115];OB[4]B[bc]BL[30];W[bb]WL[164.729];OB[4]B[li]
BL[30]
(;W[pl]WL[137.208];OB[4]B[ki]BL[30];W[qm]WL[108.048];OB[4]B[qo]BL[30];W[ol]WL[66.346]
;OB[4]B[rm]BL[30];W[rl]WL[60.333];OB[4]B[qn]BL[30];W[rj]WL[48.962];OB[4]B[pm]BL[30]
;W[qk]WL[40.958];OB[4]B[qm]BL[30];W[qs]WL[10.155];OB[4]B[qr]BL[30];W[os]WL[8.152]
;OB[4]B[rs]BL[30];OW[5]W[bl]WL[30];OB[4]B[er]BL[30];OW[5]W[dr]WL[30];OB[4]B[fr]
BL[30];OW[5]W[js]WL[30];OB[4]B[hr]BL[30];OW[5]W[rh]WL[30];OB[4]B[is]BL[30];OW[5]
W[gc]WL[30];OB[4]B[ds]BL[30];OW[5]W[cs]WL[30];OB[4]B[es]BL[30];OW[5]W[cr]WL[30]
;OB[4]B[ks]BL[30];OW[5]W[lq]WL[30];OB[4]B[ps]BL[30];OW[5]W[ka]WL[30];OB[4]B[ia]
BL[30];OW[5]W[ag]WL[30];OB[4]B[ah]BL[30];OW[5]W[gp]WL[30];OB[4]B[gq]BL[30];OW[5]
W[ip]WL[30];OB[4]B[hq]BL[30];OW[5]W[io]WL[30];OB[4]B[bm]BL[30];OW[5]W[cm]WL[30]
;OB[4]B[cl]BL[30];OW[5]W[am]WL[30];OB[4]B[bk]BL[30];OW[5]W[bn]WL[30];OB[4]B[or]
BL[30];OW[5]W[sm]WL[30];OB[4]B[sn]BL[30];OW[5]W[sl]WL[30];OB[4]B[ns]BL[30];OW[5]
W[iq]WL[30];OB[4]B[ir]BL[30];OW[5]W[qa]WL[30];OB[4]B[ra]BL[30];OW[5]W[pa]WL[30]
;OB[4]B[na]BL[30];OW[5]W[ob]WL[30];OB[4]B[mb]BL[30];OW[5]W[nb]WL[30];OB[4]B[om]
BL[30];OW[5]W[pk]WL[30];OB[4]B[qf]BL[30];OW[5]W[sg]WL[30];OB[4]B[sf]BL[30];OW[5]
W[sh]WL[30];OB[4]B[ak]BL[30];OW[5]W[al]WL[30];OB[4]B[gn]BL[30];OW[5]W[hn]WL[30]
;OB[4]B[fn]BL[30];OW[5]W[ha]WL[30];OB[4]B[ef]BL[30];OW[5]W[mh]WL[30];OB[4]B[eh]
BL[30];OW[5]W[rn]WL[30];OB[4]B[ro]BL[30];OW[5]W[eg]WL[30];OB[4]B[rk]BL[30];OW[5]
W[sk]WL[30];OB[4]B[eh]BL[30];OW[5]W[so]WL[30];OB[4]B[sp]BL[30];OW[5]W[eg]WL[30]
;OB[4]B[od]BL[30];OW[5]W[ma]WL[30];OB[4]B[eh]BL[30]
(;OW[5]W[js]WL[30];OB[4]B[if]BL[30];OW[5]W[ks]WL[30];OB[4]B[hb]BL[30];OW[5]W[ga]
WL[30];OB[4]B[gd]BL[30];OW[5]W[ea]WL[30];OB[4]B[os]BL[30];OW[5]W[ri]WL[30];OB[4]
B[]BL[30];OW[5]W[]WL[30]TB[qd][rd][sd][ie][je][re][se][ff][hf][eg][jf][hg][jg][dh]
[fh][gh][hh][ih][jh][ai][bi][di][ei][fi][aj][cj][ej][on][pn][rn][oo][po][so][op]
[pp][rp][qq][rb][rq][sq][gr][pr][rr][sr][fs][gs][hs][qs][ss][sa][qp][sb][qc][sc]
TW[aa][ba][ca][da][la][na][ab][db][kb][mb][bc][cc][mc][ad][cd][ae][be][af][bf][og]
[ph][qh][oi][qi][si][mj][nj][oj][sj][ok][rk][il][bm][hm][an][ao][ap][bp][aq][bq]
[cq][mq][ar][br][lr][as][bs][ac][bo])
(;W[rb];B[sb];W[eg];B[be];W[ac];B[eh];W[qc];B[qd];W[eg];B[oe];W[ri];B[eh];W[ai]
;B[aj];W[eg];B[sj];W[si];B[eh]))
(;W[ah];B[ai];W[ki];B[ea];W[da];B[li]))
(;W[gf];B[fb];W[qq];B[qp];W[qr];B[rp];W[pr]))
(;W[ic];B[jc];W[hb];B[id];W[kc]))
(;W[ic];B[id];W[df]))
(;W[ic];B[id];W[fd]))
(;W[fn]
(;B[do];W[co];B[en];W[em];B[fm];W[gn])
(;B[en];W[em];B[fm];W[gn];B[dm];W[el];B[co];W[do];B[dn];W[cp];B[cm];W[bo];B[eo])))
(;W[ri];B[rh];W[pl];B[ol];W[rk];B[pg];W[qm]))
(;W[oi]N[i think this works ???];B[pi];W[pj];B[ri];W[qi];B[qh];W[rh];B[rg];W[sh]
N[i guess not work?];B[pg];W[qf];B[rf];W[of];B[si];W[oh];B[sg];W[rh];B[sh];W[og]
;B[rh]N[does not work \:(])
(;W[qh];B[pi];W[of];B[nf]))
(;W[kl];B[ln]))

[Shaddy]

Move 8 normally at r8, r10 gives black what he wants
Move 12 is a little overplay, I would p13. If Black o17, w can invade at q5.

[Magicwand]

Move 8 normally at r8, r10 gives black what he wants
Move 12 is a little overplay, I would p13. If Black o17, w can invade at q5.

Agree on both. thank you for your input.

[Shaddy]

I have to say, you made a good game out of it. You play a lot tougher than I would have, after that opening. Keep playing, I want to see more of your games

[Magicwand]

I have to say, you made a good game out of it. You play a lot tougher than I would have, after that opening. Keep playing, I want to see more of your games

I waited and waited for the chance to kill my opponent... when i had that chance...... i played timid (due to limited time)
KGS games that i play is not my style of play. I am susally maintaining balance person but it is my chance to practice fighting with time limit.

I played few more games after that... which i am shamed of for playing subpar games.( due to distraction in life (family))
I will certainly post more games. Glad someone is enjoying.

v/r

[Magicwand]

I have played few games that i am very displeased and frustrated.
I guess i only post games that i am pleased.

(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[600]OT[5x20 byo-yomi]
PW[fengxinzi]PB[magicwand]WR[4d]BR[4d]DT[2016-08-23]PC[The KGS Go Server at http://www.gokgs.com/]RE[B+9.50]
;B[pd]BL[599.347]
;W[dq]WL[595.341]
;B[pp]BL[596.484]
;W[dc]WL[593.237]
;B[cj]BL[589.957]
;W[nq]WL[584.603]
;B[pn]BL[587.477]
;W[jp]WL[580.868]
;B[do]BL[584.859]
;W[co]WL[575.411]
;B[cn]BL[557.94]
;W[cp]WL[573.099]
;B[dn]BL[541.907]
;W[fp]WL[571.243]
;B[ce]BL[540.795]
;W[ed]WL[566.753]
;B[ee]BL[535.098]
;W[fe]WL[563.474]
;B[ef]BL[533.818]
;W[cd]WL[561.911]
;B[bd]BL[531.962]
;W[bc]WL[559.804]
;B[ff]BL[525.348]
;W[ge]WL[557.969]
;B[lq]BL[515.111]
;W[qq]WL[551.569]
;B[pq]BL[509.255]
;W[pr]WL[549.919]
;B[qp]BL[495.854]
;W[rr]WL[547.636]
;B[rq]BL[494.955]
;W[qr]WL[546.101]
;B[hp]BL[445.954]
;W[lp]WL[541.658]
;B[kp]BL[426.679]
;W[kq]WL[529.701]
;B[ko]BL[425.275]
;W[lo]WL[528.478]
;B[jq]BL[410.904]
;W[kr]WL[526.272]
;B[ln]BL[380.798]
;W[lr]WL[522.206]
;B[jo]BL[368.951]
;W[gp]WL[503.137]
;B[gn]BL[351.075]
;W[hg]WL[499.753]
;B[be]BL[325.226]
;W[gh]WL[490.098]
;B[fi]BL[315.033]
;W[fh]WL[487.148]
;B[eh]BL[313.55]
;W[ei]WL[478.655]
;B[dh]BL[311.402]
;W[nc]WL[470.299]
;B[lc]BL[295.326]
;W[ne]WL[464.742]
;B[ic]BL[290.954]
;W[pf]WL[461.756]
;B[gf]BL[272.597]
;W[hf]WL[459.262]
;B[he]BL[271.01]
;W[ie]WL[454.238]
;B[hd]BL[269.712]
;W[gc]WL[452.806]
;B[le]BL[241.586]
;W[qc]WL[438.787]
;B[lg]BL[234.683]
;W[gj]WL[426.866]
;B[ej]BL[230.69]
;W[jg]WL[406.242]
;B[je]BL[220.107]
;W[jf]WL[402.462]
;B[ke]BL[204.509]
;W[ki]WL[397.972]
;B[kh]BL[188.721]
;W[jh]WL[386.022]
;B[li]BL[187.38]
;W[kj]WL[384.576]
;B[lj]BL[185.283]
;W[kk]WL[372.831]
;B[lk]BL[184.151]
;W[gi]WL[367.091]
;B[qf]BL[147.564]
;W[qe]WL[356.305]
;B[qg]BL[130.91]
;W[re]WL[351.053]
;B[pg]BL[128.665]
;W[of]WL[348.312]
;B[mo]BL[125.749]
;W[mp]WL[339.239]
;B[np]BL[122.75]
;W[mq]WL[337.193]
;B[kl]BL[113.261]
;W[jl]WL[330.707]
;B[jm]BL[108.194]
;W[il]WL[320.691]
;B[og]BL[94.227]
;W[sh]WL[294.389]
;B[rh]BL[91.368]
;W[sf]WL[291.204]
;B[si]BL[90.072]
;W[sg]WL[287.912]
;B[ri]BL[88.915]
;W[fj]WL[233.653]
;B[ek]BL[85.063]
;W[di]WL[231.993]
;B[ci]BL[81.986]
;W[ng]WL[150.057]
;B[nh]BL[78.835]
;W[no]WL[122.679]
;B[mn]BL[73.021]
;W[op]WL[121.339]
;B[nn]BL[61.769]
;W[on]WL[116.894]
;B[om]BL[60.101]
;W[oo]WL[114.05]
;B[hk]BL[44.929]
;W[gl]WL[88.502]
;B[oq]BL[38.446]
;W[rp]WL[78.14]
;B[ro]BL[29.159]
;W[sq]WL[76.793]
;B[hl]BL[21.433]
;W[hm]WL[73.46]
;B[im]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ij]WL[69.925]
;B[gm]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[gk]WL[35.26]
;B[po]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[np]WL[32.485]
;B[or]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[jr]WL[27.444]
;B[nr]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[hq]WL[10.705]
;B[mr]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[lq]WL[9.1]
;B[ip]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[iq]WL[0.207]
;B[nb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ob]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[so]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[sp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[mb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[pm]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[qm]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[bo]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[bn]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[an]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[am]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ao]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[bl]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[hb]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ib]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[oa]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ac]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ab]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ad]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[cb]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[fl]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[hj]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[hn]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ia]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[hc]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[gb]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ja]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ha]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[kb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[mg]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[mh]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[jp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ep]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[eq]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[fo]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[io]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ho]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[dp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[eo]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fg]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[de]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[dd]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[gd]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fd]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[ik]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jk]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[hm]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[if]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[id]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[md]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[me]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ld]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[kd]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[oc]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[mc]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[nd]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[ls]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jq]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[dj]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[eg]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[dg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[na]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[fi]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ma]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[la]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ei]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[kg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[kf]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[lf]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[nf]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[ps]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[qs]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[rf]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ks]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[pl]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ms]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[os]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ls]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[rg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[se]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[gg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fi]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[fk]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[di]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[ji]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jj]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[ih]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ii]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[hh]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[]BL[20]OB[4]TW[aa][ba][ca][da][ea][fa][ga][pa][qa][ra][sa][bb][db][eb][fb][pb][qb][rb][sb][cc][ec][fc][pc][rc][sc][od][pd][qd][rd][sd][oe][pe][ap][bp][aq][bq][cq][fq][gq][rq][ar][br][cr][dr][er][fr][gr][hr][ir][sr][as][bs][cs][ds][es][fs][gs][hs][is][js][rs][ss]TB[ka][jb][lb][jc][kc][jd][ae][af][bf][cf][df][ag][bg][cg][ah][bh][ch][lh][oh][ph][qh][ai][bi][mi][ni][oi][pi][qi][aj][bj][mj][nj][oj][pj][qj][rj][sj][ak][bk][ck][dk][mk][nk][ok][pk][qk][rk][sk][al][cl][dl][el][ll][ml][nl][ol][ql][rl][sl][bm][cm][dm][em][fm][km][lm][mm][nm][pm][rm][sm][en][fn][in][jn][kn][qn][rn][sn][io][qo])

What i want is a second eye on what my opponent did wrong.
I have some moves of his that i think was mistake but not too many.
I am sure that what i played has some shortcoming also.

Seki at the end doesnt count because the game was already over.

weaker player may comment also. I would like this to be interactive.

Thank you.

[Knotwilg]

My review:

(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[600]OT[5x20 byo-yomi]
PW[fengxinzi]PB[magicwand]WR[4d]BR[4d]DT[2016-08-23]PC[The KGS Go Server at http://www.gokgs.com/]RE[B+9.50]
;B[pd]BL[599.347]
;W[dq]WL[595.341]
;B[pp]BL[596.484]
;W[dc]WL[593.237]
;B[cj]BL[589.957]
;W[nq]WL[584.603]
;B[pn]BL[587.477]
;W[jp]WL[580.868]
;B[do]BL[584.859]
;W[co]WL[575.411]
;B[cn]BL[557.94]
;W[cp]WL[573.099]
;B[dn]BL[541.907]
;W[fp]WL[571.243]C[White has all eggs in 1 basket and bad aji at it.]
(;B[ce]BL[540.795]C[My choice would be to play on the right side]
(;W[ed]WL[566.753]
;B[ee]BL[535.098]
;W[fe]WL[563.474]
;B[ef]BL[533.818]
;W[cd]WL[561.911]
;B[bd]BL[531.962]
;W[bc]WL[559.804]
;B[ff]BL[525.348]
;W[ge]WL[557.969]
(;B[lq]BL[515.111]LB[jc:C][qj:B][hq:A]C[KW: is this urgent? A is available too. Stabilizing at B and surely negating White's influence at C seems bigger]
;W[qq]WL[551.569]
;B[pq]BL[509.255]
;W[pr]WL[549.919]
;B[qp]BL[495.854]
;W[rr]WL[547.636]
;B[rq]BL[494.955]
;W[qr]WL[546.101]
;B[hp]BL[445.954]
;W[lp]WL[541.658]
;B[kp]BL[426.679]
;W[kq]WL[529.701]
;B[ko]BL[425.275]
;W[lo]WL[528.478]
;B[jq]BL[410.904]
;W[kr]WL[526.272]
;B[ln]BL[380.798]
;W[lr]WL[522.206]
;B[jo]BL[368.951]
;W[gp]WL[503.137]
;B[gn]BL[351.075]C[KW: although White seems to have been outplayed, she takes a lot of territory and gets sente to play the big points top or right.]
;W[hg]WL[499.753]C[KW: seems White worries more about the moyos than about the territory]
;B[be]BL[325.226]
;W[gh]WL[490.098]
;B[fi]BL[315.033]
;W[fh]WL[487.148]
;B[eh]BL[313.55]
;W[ei]WL[478.655]
;B[dh]BL[311.402]
;W[nc]WL[470.299]C[KW: huge]
;B[lc]BL[295.326]
;W[ne]WL[464.742]
;B[ic]BL[290.954]
;W[pf]WL[461.756]C[KW: Now the game looks much better for White. Black only has territory on 1 side, White in 3 corners. And Black has the top right to worry about]
;B[gf]BL[272.597]
;W[hf]WL[459.262]
;B[he]BL[271.01]
;W[ie]WL[454.238]
;B[hd]BL[269.712]
;W[gc]WL[452.806]
;B[le]BL[241.586]C[KW: White is afloat in the centre all right but Black's shape doesn't look too great either]
(;W[qc]WL[438.787]LB[jb:3][kd:1][ld:2][jg:A][lg:B][ng:C]C[KW: White leaves the real front. I would play the mild to aggressive A/B/C to prepare for 1-2-3]
(;B[lg]BL[234.683]C[KW: Now the game favours black, as all stones cooperate to form a gigantic moyo

However, with hindsight, this being a defensive move in nature, see var]
;W[gj]WL[426.866]
(;B[ej]BL[230.69]C[KW: Not sure this is the best answer. See var]
;W[jg]WL[406.242]C[KW: this seems to be the key point all along]
;B[je]BL[220.107]
;W[jf]WL[402.462]
;B[ke]BL[204.509]LB[jd:A]C[KW: i prefer A]
;W[ki]WL[397.972]C[KW: it looks hard to kill this group and with 4 corners in the pocket, White may then still be ahead]
;B[kh]BL[188.721]C[KW: crude move]
;W[jh]WL[386.022]
;B[li]BL[187.38]C[KW: helping White]
;W[kj]WL[384.576]
;B[lj]BL[185.283]
;W[kk]WL[372.831]
;B[lk]BL[184.151]
(;W[gi]WL[367.091]C[KW ?]
;B[qf]BL[147.564]
(;W[qe]WL[356.305]C[KW: I think this is overconcentrated]
;B[qg]BL[130.91]
;W[re]WL[351.053]
;B[pg]BL[128.665]C[KW: big]
;W[of]WL[348.312]
;B[mo]BL[125.749]
(;W[mp]WL[339.239]C[KW: these stones are not worth a lot]
;B[np]BL[122.75]
;W[mq]WL[337.193]
;B[kl]BL[113.261]
;W[jl]WL[330.707]
;B[jm]BL[108.194]
;W[il]WL[320.691]
;B[og]BL[94.227]C[KW: big]
;W[sh]WL[294.389]
;B[rh]BL[91.368]
;W[sf]WL[291.204]
;B[si]BL[90.072]
;W[sg]WL[287.912]
;B[ri]BL[88.915]
(;W[fj]WL[233.653]C[KW: ????]
;B[ek]BL[85.063]C[KW: thank you]
;W[di]WL[231.993]
;B[ci]BL[81.986]
;W[ng]WL[150.057]LB[mh:A][ll:B]C[KW: aji keshi of A/B combination]
;B[nh]BL[78.835]
;W[no]WL[122.679]
;B[mn]BL[73.021]
;W[op]WL[121.339]
;B[nn]BL[61.769]
;W[on]WL[116.894]C[KW: mistake]
;B[om]BL[60.101]
;W[oo]WL[114.05]
(;B[hk]BL[44.929]
;W[gl]WL[88.502]
;B[oq]BL[38.446]C[KW: good one!]
;W[rp]WL[78.14]
;B[ro]BL[29.159]
;W[sq]WL[76.793]
(;B[hl]BL[21.433]
;W[hm]WL[73.46]
;B[im]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ij]WL[69.925]
;B[gm]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[gk]WL[35.26]
;B[po]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[np]WL[32.485]
;B[or]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[jr]WL[27.444]
(;B[nr]BL[20]OB[5]C[KW: caught up in the flow]
;W[hq]WL[10.705]
;B[mr]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[lq]WL[9.1]
;B[ip]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[iq]WL[0.207]
(;B[nb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ob]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[so]BL[20]OB[5]C[KW: ok ]
;W[sp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[mb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[pm]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[qm]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[bo]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[bn]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[an]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[am]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ao]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[bl]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[hb]WL[20]OW[5]C[KW: close now]
;B[ib]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[oa]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ac]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ab]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ad]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[cb]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[fl]BL[20]OB[5]C[KW: big

Might even be the winning move.

End of comments.]
;W[hj]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[hn]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ia]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[hc]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[gb]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ja]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[ha]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[kb]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[mg]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[mh]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[jp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ep]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[eq]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[fo]BL[20]OB[5]
;W[io]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[ho]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[dp]WL[20]OW[5]
;B[eo]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fg]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[de]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[dd]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[gd]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fd]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[ik]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jk]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[hm]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[if]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[id]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[md]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[me]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ld]WL[20]OW[4]
;B[kd]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[oc]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[mc]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[nd]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[ls]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jq]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[dj]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[eg]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[dg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[na]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[fi]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ma]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[la]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ei]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[kg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[kf]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[lf]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[nf]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[ps]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[qs]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[rf]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ks]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[pl]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ms]WL[20]OW[3]
;B[os]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ls]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[rg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[se]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[gg]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[fi]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[fk]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[di]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[ji]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[jj]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[ih]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[ii]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[hh]BL[20]OB[4]
;W[]WL[20]OW[2]
;B[]BL[20]OB[4]TW[aa][ba][ca][da][ea][fa][ga][pa][qa][ra][sa][bb][db][eb][fb][pb][qb][rb][sb][cc][ec][fc][pc][rc][sc][od][pd][qd][rd][sd][oe][pe][ap][bp][aq][bq][cq][fq][gq][rq][ar][br][cr][dr][er][fr][gr][hr][ir][sr][as][bs][cs][ds][es][fs][gs][hs][is][js][rs][ss]TB[ka][jb][lb][jc][kc][jd][ae][af][bf][cf][df][ag][bg][cg][ah][bh][ch][lh][oh][ph][qh][ai][bi][mi][ni][oi][pi][qi][aj][bj][mj][nj][oj][pj][qj][rj][sj][ak][bk][ck][dk][mk][nk][ok][pk][qk][rk][sk][al][cl][dl][el][ll][ml][nl][ol][ql][rl][sl][bm][cm][dm][em][fm][km][lm][mm][nm][pm][rm][sm][en][fn][in][jn][kn][qn][rn][sn][io][qo])
(;B[so]C[KW: big and almost double sente (depends if you like the ko)]))
(;B[hq]LB[fr:A][nr:B]))
(;B[or]C[sente]
;W[hl]
;B[nr]
;W[jr]
;B[iq]
;W[mr]
;B[ir]))
(;B[oq]
;W[or]))
(;W[rp]C[KW: this seems by far the biggest move]
;B[ro]
;W[sq]
;B[so]
;W[bn]
;B[bm]
;W[bo]))
(;W[mh]
;B[lh]
;W[oh]))
(;W[qg]
;B[qe]
;W[pg]
;B[pc]
;W[mh]
;B[lh]
;W[mf]
;B[lf]
(;W[qj])
(;W[qk])))
(;W[ik]))
(;B[jg]
;W[ej]
;B[hi]
;W[gi]LB[ph:C][ik:A][el:B]))
(;B[jg]C[Perhaps Black should have attacked the White group right away]))
(;W[jg]LB[of:A]C[KW: the cut is hard to play now]))
(;B[jc]LB[gc:A][mc:B]))
(;W[ql]C[If White attacks here]
;B[ed]
;W[ec]
;B[fd]
;W[gc]C[Then I think the left side is not that impressive, not enough to incur the loss of stability at the right side]))
(;B[qj]C[I would play here now]
;W[ce]C[This shimari doesn't affect the group at the left]
;B[jc]C[and Black gets a double wing]
;W[qc]
;B[pc]
;W[qd]
;B[qe]
;W[re]
;B[qf]
;W[rf]
;B[qg]
;W[pb]
;B[ob]
;W[qb]
;B[nc]LB[gc:A][cg:B]))

[Magicwand]

thank you for your comments.
some i agree some i dont...but still good comments.

I want to see how strong you are in actual game.
do you want a malkovich game with me?

I think 2 stone will be good? (i dont mind 3)
let me know what you think.