You have gotten a number of excellent replies. Much food for thought.
First, let me say that in this game your problem was not so much creating or not protecting weaknesses, as not taking advantage of your opponent's weaknesses.
Also, your opponent is a very good fighter for a 7 kyu. Play him more often. You can learn a lot from him.
A few comments for now, probably more later.
Fedya wrote:
For
, the only other move I saw was J4, which I didn't like because I felt it would allow Black to make easy life on the side and leave me with nothing.
Right.
is good. Probably the only play.
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I didn't see any way to attack on the left without getting split and getting a bunch of stones killed.
Let's go back to
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is in general the right idea. You keep the
stones divided from stone that might help them. In Wilcox's terms, you break a sector line. But there is a better play, one that frequently comes up with this joseki.
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That move is this press. If Black ignores it and jumps out,
cuts off the Black corner. You can probably kill it.
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is the usual defense, but now
tops the tree, creating a severe attack.
Back to the game, with the one space jump. Here is how to attack on the left without "getting a bunch of stones killed."
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and
threaten the corner. Then
tops the tree, yielding a strong attack. Later White can come back and fill at "a". But if Black gets that cut in, White will lose only one or two stones.
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pushes from behind. This is in general a bad idea, like squeezing out the toothpaste.
runs out, breaking a sector line. Maybe
should jump out at "a", breaking another sector line, too. But White does not seem to have a very strong attack now.
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Instead,
can peep, making the Black group heavy, and then
tops the tree. This is a strong attack.
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Influence/thickness never seems to work for me.
That's because you don't attack enough. It's not so much that you do not attack very well. You are a 7 kyu. You are going to make mistakes, like everybody else.
You do not attack enough. Besides, if you attack more, you will get better at it.
Moi wrote:
It is better to have attacked and lost, than never to have attacked at all.
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I didn't play 140 at H7 because I was worried about the stones in the lower left.
You see hobgoblins. Don't cower under the covers. Slay them.
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I didn't see any aji in the upper left either.
More hobgoblins. Black made a move in the corner and you gave up. Even if you did not see the excellent tesuji that bernds found, you should have fought for the corner at
. Courage, mon vieux!
Danto wrote:
De l'audace, encore de l'audace, toujours de l'audace!
Bonne chance!