Here are my notes from the BIBA review:
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[WebGoBoard:0.10.11]ST[2]RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.5]HA[0]TM[3600]OT[3x30 byo-yomi]RE[B+Resign]DT[2020-02-21]PB[Brian]PW[elmregl]PC[The KGS Go Server at http://www.gokgs.com/]C[BIBA Review];B[pd]BL[3586.682]C[elmregl [-]: Have a good game
];W[dp]WL[3595.473];B[qp]BL[3584.19];W[oq]WL[3590.915];B[dd]BL[3580.521](;W[cc]WL[3582.127];B[dc]BL[3568.068];W[cd]WL[3517.451];B[de]BL[3564.878];W[bf]WL[3512.993](;B[cq]BL[3545.671];W[dq]WL[3502.318];B[cp]BL[3543.448](;W[do]WL[3483.876];B[co]BL[3415.972];W[cn]WL[3473.264];B[bn]BL[3413.876](;W[cm]WL[3471.533];B[bm]BL[3399.62];W[cl]WL[3466.963];B[po]BL[3371.829](;W[jq]WL[3406.379]C[He said good opening for black](;B[nc]BL[3322.543];W[oo]WL[3393.657];B[on]BL[3244.407];W[no]WL[3359.911];B[pq]BL[3241.321];W[or]WL[3357.235];B[pm]BL[3222.964];W[mm]WL[3313.994](;B[jo]BL[3144.696](;W[io]WL[3303.733]C[Since white answered, it's a good exchange, he said];B[in]BL[3122.688];W[ho]WL[3292.709];B[jp]BL[3074.851];W[iq]WL[3287.992];B[km]BL[3000.492]C[Good result for black, he said];W[lp]WL[3256.077];B[hn]BL[2958.701];W[gn]WL[3196.983];B[lo]BL[2890];W[mo]WL[3180.834];B[gm]BL[2883.325];W[fn]WL[3177.341](;B[hl]BL[2881.459]C[He said it was slow];W[qg]WL[3104.58];B[qi]BL[2866.658];W[rd]WL[3101.19];B[qc]BL[2860.107];W[rc]WL[3098.379];B[rb]BL[2859.151](;W[qd]WL[3096.182];B[pc]BL[2857.956](;W[sb]WL[3094.238];B[ra]BL[2849.381](;W[pf]WL[3091.478](;B[rh]BL[2585.91];W[pi]WL[3072.151];B[rf]BL[2577.662](;W[qe]WL[2992.19];B[pj]BL[2550.253];W[oi]WL[2958.958];B[og]BL[2241.015];W[of]WL[2882.969];B[qf]BL[2159.519](;W[pe]WL[2871.482];B[pg]BL[2151.609];W[ng]WL[2862.952];B[qh]BL[2147.385];W[ne]WL[2852.333]C[Slow for white he said];B[ld]BL[2128.377];W[jc]WL[2832.356](;B[nh]BL[2114.856]C[Hane is bad exchange, he said. Wrong direction];W[mg]WL[2824.916];B[ke]BL[2086.736];W[oj]WL[2819.179];B[mh]BL[2075.538];W[lg]WL[2804.816];B[ki]BL[2065.623];W[jg]WL[2795.056];B[ie]BL[2052.946]C[Hard exchange for white](;W[pk]WL[2790.294];B[qj]BL[2050.421](;W[ok]WL[2782.338]C[Connect is too heavy, he said];B[nl]BL[1941.467](;W[lk]WL[2756.428];B[mj]BL[1933.77];W[ik]WL[2742.684];B[ml]BL[1864.019];W[ll]WL[2727.34];B[lm]BL[1862.01];W[nm]WL[2725.581];B[ol]BL[1859.458];W[jk]WL[2711.5];B[ii]BL[1849.793];W[li]WL[2683.078];B[lj]BL[1830.268];W[lh]WL[2654.842];B[nj]BL[1819.798];W[hj]WL[2644.295];B[hi]BL[1672.597];W[hg]WL[2602.75];B[gj]BL[1666.143];W[ge]WL[2594.622]C[White didn't gain anything, he said];B[gd]BL[1647.816];W[he]WL[2589.508];B[hd]BL[1639.604];W[id]WL[2587.601];B[if]BL[1634.207];W[ig]WL[2583.813];B[hb]BL[1601.586];W[mc]WL[2572.355];B[md]BL[1598.288];W[nd]WL[2569.348];B[mb]BL[1552.827];W[fd]WL[2524.932];B[fc]BL[1547.99];W[kd]WL[2509.076];B[kc]BL[1536.152];W[jd]WL[2503.904];B[jb]BL[1497.673])(;W[oh];B[ph];W[li];B[lh];W[kh];B[mi];W[lj];B[mj];W[mk];B[lk];W[kj];B[nk];W[ml];B[nj];W[nm];B[ol];W[ji]C[White can do something like this]))(;W[mk])(;W[lh]C[One of these]))(;W[lh]C[Since there's this weakness, that's why he doesn't like the hane])(;W[gj];B[hc]C[Black can kill in one move this way]))(;B[mf]C[Peep he said];W[nf];B[mi]C[Later, attack everything. This is the way to attack];W[lh]))(;W[rg];B[sg];W[pg];B[pe];W[qj];B[rj];W[qk];B[rk];W[qh];B[ri];W[ql];B[rl];W[qm];B[rm];W[qn];B[rn]C[He said it was good for white this way]))(;W[rg];B[sg];W[qf];B[pj];W[oi]C[No problem for white, he said]))(;B[qe];W[re];B[pe]C[He said this was better];W[qf];B[rh]))(;W[og]C[Maybe better than kosumi, but still toubh]))(;W[pe];B[pf]C[He said there's this tesuji here]))(;W[pe]C[He said attach is correct order];B[oe](;W[pf];B[qd])(;W[qd])))(;B[qg];W[hm];B[im];W[hl];B[ik]C[He said the cut was small]))(;W[jm]C[Now it's hard to know what to do]))(;B[jl];W[jn];B[hl]C[He said this is more reasonable]))(;B[qf]C[He said also ok, but he doesn't know which is better])(;B[np]C[Also possible, he said];W[nq];B[mp];W[mq];B[lp];W[kq];B[qg]))(;W[kp]C[If white played here, he said black cannot reduce, but must invade]))(;W[po];B[qo];W[pn];B[qm];W[qc]C[He said this is normal]))(;W[co];B[bo](;W[cn])(;W[bn];B[cn];W[do];B[bm];W[bp];B[an];W[bq]C[If there's no big place, he said this is big for white])))(;B[po]C[He said this was normal])(;B[pn]))(;W[po];B[qo];W[pn];B[qm]C[He said AI doesn't like this, but with 3 corners, it's worth it]))
Some of the highlights of comments on my moves:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . . . . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . B . . . O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
The move above was too deep. They didn't know what to do for black if white caps:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . 2 . . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . 1 . . . O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
So I was lucky that I wasn't attacked severely here.
Instead, he said this was fine:
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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . 3 . 1 . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . . . . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . . . . 2 . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . . . . . O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Black has points in other areas. So it's fine.
Then here:
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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . 1 . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . 2 O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
They said the opening was good for black. But this move is too slow for me:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . B . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Blackie said the cut is no big deal, so not a problem not to defend:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . 5 . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . 4 . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X 2 3 . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
He said it wasn't that big for white...
That being said, I'm not really disappointed with this particular choice, given my typical aggressive style. I think Blackie is right here, but I want to try to keep a handle on playing in a controlled way.
Here:
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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . B . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
He said I missed the chance to do this:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . 3 1 2 . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O 4 . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
And then it's a lot more clear.
They didn't like this move:
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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O B X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
I was aiming at miai between cutting the stone and capturing the corner... But capturing the corner isn't necessarily that good:

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[go]$$Wc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . 4 O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X 3 O 1 2 |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X 0 . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . X 5 6 . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 8 . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

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[go]$$Wcm11
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . . . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . . . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . X O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O O O X |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X 3 |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X 4 |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . X O X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . 1 2 . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X 5 6 . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . 7 . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Basically, black can get the corner with something like this, but the result is still good for white with all white gets on the outside.
I thought my move was interesting since it threatened the corner, but I guess the corner wasn't everything here.
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Blackie really didn't like this hane, given the weakness at the marked move (I alluded to this weakness in my own review):

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . O . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . X . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . O . O O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . B C . X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
He said the proper way was to try to just attack the whole group:

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[go]$$Bc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . O . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . X . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . O . O O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . 1 2 O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . O X X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . C . O O X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Later, black can attack the whole group in a move like the marked intersection.
White was a little easy on me, and didn't exploit the cut. There was even some time later to make use of it, though maybe, black already got some benefit:

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[go]$$Wc
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . O . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . X . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . X . X . . O . O O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O O O X X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . 3 2 X X W B X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . X 1 4 . O O X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , 9 5 6 . O X X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 8 7 0 O O . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . . X . . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O . . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

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[go]$$Wc11
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X O |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . O . . . X . X X O . |
$$ | . . O X . . . . . , . X . . . X O O . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . X . X . . O . O O . . |
$$ | . O . . . . . . . . . . . . O O X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . O . O O O X X O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . O X X X O X X X . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . 5 C O X . O O X . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , O O X 2 O X X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . X O X O O . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . X . . . . 1 X 4 . . . . |
$$ | . X O . . . X . . . X . O 3 . X . . . |
$$ | . X O . . O O X X . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . O O X . X O O O X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . . X . O . . . , X . . |
$$ | . . X O . . . . O O . . . . O X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Here, black did get a lot on the right so it might be OK, but it's a better option for white than in the game, they said.
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The overall feeling is that I overplayed a couple of times, even though I didn't realize it:
1.) My reduction on the bottom was too deep
2.) My move to try to threaten to take the corner wasn't worth it (corner wasn't big enough)
3.) My hane discussed above, was too much (just attack the whole group)