i agree with your feeling about black 23. only thing to worry about is this:
if white defends this way, his cut at 'a' becomes unpleasant for black, while he still wants to keep sente. but i guess even if black answers and defends the cut with 'b', white still can't feel really safe
after kakari R6 white shouldn't have any serious troubles (though he mustn't become careless about the group)
i don't like black 27, it looks like if black decided to play on all sides, invading white's left area but hurting his own top. we will see how will it go, but i agree with Kirby that it is not a very good move
up to these two moves i believed black has clearly better position, now it is unclear, much depends on upper left
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if white defends this way, his cut at 'a' becomes unpleasant for black, while he still wants to keep sente. but i guess even if black answers and defends the cut with 'b', white still can't feel really safe
after kakari R6 white shouldn't have any serious troubles (though he mustn't become careless about the group)
i don't like black 27, it looks like if black decided to play on all sides, invading white's left area but hurting his own top. we will see how will it go, but i agree with Kirby that it is not a very good move
up to these two moves i believed black has clearly better position, now it is unclear, much depends on upper left
was definitely a mistake, but I don't know where I should have played instead. My only other thought at the time was to play F15, but I'm not sure if that would have been better or not. I could go and play F15 now, and that's the other move I'm currently considering.