Hi I need one serious game reviewed, as far as I concern I open good, if anybody could point out, at
which direction of the game that I did a lot of mistake, I feel like the game is equal but suddenly
my opponent get lots of area, many thanks
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Hi wingly,
Between
and 
, B already made some mistake
( hopefully other higher level folks can point out ).
Not the right way to play a ko threat --
this is a normal approach move to a 4-4: W can tenuki.
Instead, consider an attach: D17, or C16.
This way, your follow-up is continue with a second attach to his 4-4 stone.
This is very different from a double-approach to the 4-4...
...which you also missed. Even without any ko, is soft.
At least double approach ( C14 or D14 ).
Look at the whole board:
Upper Left corner: W gets a Better result than joseki,
thanks to , .
Lower left corner: your ko was a disaster for yourself;
you just gave W a HUGE corner.
K16.
Impossible. 
You must cut W (K16).
Trying to be fancy. No need -- just connect at K16.
See Toothpaste .
Very slow, very small -- almost a pass.
Again, small & slow; not looking at the whole board.
Again, small & slow; almost a pass.
, 
Classic Toothpaste .
Again, very slow & small -- almost a pass.
By now, White already has a huge lead; very difficult for Black. .. ),
and continued throughout the game to fall further and further behind.
White was ahead from early on; it was not sudden at all.
Very slow & small; also wrong direction: you didn't even block W (S13, instead).
119 Very small; almost a pass.
Biggest problems:
- Very slow & small moves: you basically Passed more than 6 times.
- Basic broken shapes. See Toothpaste .
- Life-and-death ( Lower Left corner ).
- More advanced problems: ko threats ( , ).
Between
and , B already made some mistake( hopefully other higher level folks can point out ).
Not the right way to play a ko threat --this is a normal approach move to a 4-4: W can tenuki.
Instead, consider an attach: D17, or C16.
This way, your follow-up is continue with a second attach to his 4-4 stone.
This is very different from a double-approach to the 4-4...
...which you also missed. Even without any ko, is soft.At least double approach ( C14 or D14 ).
Look at the whole board:Upper Left corner: W gets a Better result than joseki,
thanks to
, .Lower left corner: your ko was a disaster for yourself;
you just gave W a HUGE corner.
Up to here, Black gave up a lot to W.wingly wrote:as far as I concern I open good
K16. Impossible. You must cut W (K16). Trying to be fancy. No need -- just connect at K16.See Toothpaste .
Very slow, very small -- almost a pass. Again, small & slow; not looking at the whole board. Again, small & slow; almost a pass. , Classic Toothpaste . Again, very slow & small -- almost a pass.By now, White already has a huge lead; very difficult for Black.
B had mistakes, slow and small moves ( as early aswingly wrote:I feel like the game is equal but suddenly my opponent get lots of area
.. ),and continued throughout the game to fall further and further behind.
White was ahead from early on; it was not sudden at all.
Very slow & small; also wrong direction: you didn't even block W (S13, instead). 119 Very small; almost a pass.Biggest problems:
-
Very slow & small moves: you basically Passed more than 6 times.-
Basic broken shapes. See Toothpaste .-
Life-and-death ( Lower Left corner ).- More advanced problems: ko threats (
, ).