9k vs 2k

[hailthorn011]

I made a great number of mistakes here, and it ended up costing me severely. But I guess I shouldn't have expected to beat a 2k anyway! lol. Any help would be much appreciated. Some things have been pointed out to me, but I'd like to see what opinions y'all have. Grazie!

(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[1500]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]
PW[GoChaos]PB[hailthorn]WR[2k]BR[9k]DT[2011-07-08]PC[The KGS Go Server at http://www.gokgs.com/]C[GoChaos [2k]: Onegaishimasu.
hailthorn [9k]: Hello, gg
hailthorn [9k]: ASR League
]RE[W+Resign]
;B[pd]BL[1487.512]C[GoChaos [2k]: ASR League
]
;W[dp]WL[1496.615]C[hailthorn [9k]: 2k...oh boy
]
;B[pp]BL[1481.506]C[GoChaos [2k]: my power is wierd
GoChaos [2k]: i lose to a 7k then win to a 2d
]
;W[dc]WL[1487.477]C[GoChaos [2k]: and both of them i wasnt trying hard
GoChaos [2k]: ._.
GoChaos [2k]: its become hard to try hard xD
hailthorn [9k]: Odd. Well, do you think I could get a free review?
]
;B[dj]BL[1461.692]C[GoChaos [2k]: sure ^_^
hailthorn [9k]: Thanks n_n
]
;W[ci]WL[1481.518]
;B[cj]BL[1453.951]
;W[di]WL[1478.302]
;B[cn]BL[1450.446]
;W[cp]WL[1476.969]
;B[nq]BL[1414.138]
;W[bj]WL[1460.244]
;B[bk]BL[1410.622]
;W[bi]WL[1459.336]
;B[cl]BL[1405.889]
;W[id]WL[1458.267]
;B[jp]BL[1362.248]
;W[fq]WL[1433.991]C[GoChaos [2k]: yay its practise
Practise [2k]: hey
hailthorn [9k]: An observer to my destruction.
GoChaos [2k]: lol
]
;B[qj]BL[1304.143]C[Practise [2k]: I've got opinions already
]
;W[ii]WL[1393.722]C[GoChaos [2k]: nevr
GoChaos [2k]: you wont dieeee
hailthorn [9k]: Well, I'd hope not.
]
;B[ig]BL[1195.07]
;W[hg]WL[1389.316]C[GoChaos [2k]: dblarhg you
GoChaos [2k]: barging through the door to my house
GoChaos [2k]: bob always calls the big territory place your house :3
GoChaos [2k]: ive got a big mansion there, and a house on the bottom left :3
hailthorn [9k]: lol
hailthorn [9k]: I guess I'm homeless
GoChaos [2k]: nXD no
]
;B[hf]BL[1159.346]
;W[if]WL[1386.899]
;B[hh]BL[1155.443]C[GoChaos [2k]: you have more houses then me
GoChaos [2k]: but there under construction
GoChaos [2k]: xD
]
;W[gg]WL[1380.913]
;B[ih]BL[1143.417]
;W[jf]WL[1377.019]
;B[gh]BL[1139.05]
;W[fh]WL[1333.97]
;B[fg]BL[1134.19]
;W[gf]WL[1332.15]
;B[fi]BL[1131.929]C[GoChaos [2k]: ugh.
]
;W[eh]WL[1330.827]C[GoChaos [2k]: whew.
GoChaos [2k]: dblarhg.
]
;B[ff]BL[1122.911]C[hailthorn [9k]: o,o
]
;W[ge]WL[1292.973]
;B[ei]BL[1119.234]C[GoChaos [2k]: interest
]
;W[dh]WL[1289.443]C[GoChaos [2k]: ing
]
;B[gj]BL[1114.144]C[hailthorn [9k]: I thought this might be okay...but I'm not entirely sure if I benefited from this idea or not
]
;W[nc]WL[1241.246]C[GoChaos [2k]: ok
GoChaos [2k]: i want mcdonalds but its fat T_T
hailthorn [9k]: lol
]
;B[md]BL[1044.77]
;W[mc]WL[1232.877]
;B[nd]BL[1038.038]
;W[oc]WL[1231.073]
;B[pc]BL[1034.901]
;W[od]WL[1230.057]
;B[oe]BL[1028.456]
;W[ne]WL[1228.364]
;B[nf]BL[1025.462]
;W[me]WL[1226.961]
;B[of]BL[1021.803]
;W[mf]WL[1224.795]
;B[mg]BL[1006.718]
;W[ld]WL[1218.809]
;B[lg]BL[1002.553]
;W[qm]WL[1196.781]
;B[pl]BL[997.499]C[GoChaos [2k]: you giot more moyo than me now
GoChaos [2k]: T_T
]
;W[pm]WL[1191.548]C[hailthorn [9k]: Somehow...
GoChaos [2k]: durrhurrplz
]
;B[ol]BL[988.967]C[GoChaos [2k]: hurrdurrplz
]
;W[nn]WL[1186.543]
;B[on]BL[984.647]
;W[om]WL[1182.877]
;B[nl]BL[981.8]
;W[oo]WL[1181.284]
;B[po]BL[975.221]
;W[pn]WL[1179.502]
;B[lm]BL[961.863]
;W[mq]WL[1161.068]
;B[mp]BL[941.285]C[GoChaos [2k]: xenooo
GoChaos [2k]: he got more moyo
]
;W[np]WL[1157.883]C[GoChaos [2k]: TT
GoChaos [2k]: T_T
]
;B[op]BL[929.628]
;W[no]WL[1061.977]
;B[or]BL[922.973]
;W[lp]WL[1059.703]C[GoChaos [2k]: durrrhurrT_T
]
;B[lo]BL[917.857]C[hailthorn [9k]: <<
]
;W[mo]WL[1019.012]C[GoChaos [2k]: T_T
]
;B[ko]BL[909.62]
;W[jq]WL[1015.92]
;B[hp]BL[901.778]C[GoChaos [2k]: durrhurr T_T
]
;W[iq]WL[1011.138]C[GoChaos [2k]: too much moyo
]
;B[ip]BL[898.419]
;W[fm]WL[1006.69]C[hailthorn [9k]: Easily invadable...like that
]
;B[fo]BL[889.408]
;W[eo]WL[1003.844]C[GoChaos [2k]: it aint
GoChaos [2k]: T_T
]
;B[en]BL[886.103]
;W[fn]WL[1003.09]C[GoChaos [2k]: blocked so easily
]
;B[go]BL[881.266]
;W[dn]WL[1001.667]
;B[em]BL[877.739]
;W[dm]WL[999.687]
;B[el]BL[874.818]
;W[qh]WL[994.366]
;B[qf]BL[870.753]
;W[rj]WL[991.201]
;B[ri]BL[867.392]
;W[rk]WL[989.914]
;B[qi]BL[863.807]C[GoChaos [2k]: bleh
]
;W[qk]WL[988.25]C[GoChaos [2k]: keepe the middle -.-
]
;B[pk]BL[859.932]C[Xenorosth [7k]: This is..
]
;W[ro]WL[985.028]C[Xenorosth [7k]: wtf
]
;B[rp]BL[856.064]
;W[qo]WL[983.282]
;B[qp]BL[852.501]
;W[sp]WL[981.595]
;B[sq]BL[849.025]
;W[so]WL[980.998]
;B[rr]BL[840.202]
;W[pb]WL[978.715]
;B[qb]BL[836.901]
;W[ob]WL[977.898]
;B[qc]BL[834.11]C[GoChaos [2k]: see what happens when you get overconfident
Practise [2k]: Game might hinge on H3?
GoChaos [2k]: and let the 9k get eveyrthing in the middle to the point you cant invade
]
;W[kj]WL[958.963]C[GoChaos [2k]: ima do this for fun
GoChaos [2k]: ^_^
Xenorosth [7k]: tenuki
Practise [2k]: yeh
]
;B[ji]BL[814.455]C[Xenorosth [7k]: XD
]
;W[kh]WL[937.943]C[Practise [2k]: It's a knight's move, you can't but cut it!
hailthorn [9k]: I think I fudged
Practise [2k]: z no eyes yet
Xenorosth [7k]: yeah ou can
]
;B[lh]BL[742.581]
;W[ki]WL[925.155]C[GoChaos [2k]: idk
GoChaos [2k]: its not an eye yet
]
;B[kg]BL[735.611]
;W[jh]WL[923.247]C[Practise [2k]: Now there's an eye
]
;B[jg]BL[730.793]C[Xenorosth [7k]: one
GoChaos [2k]: its not two eyes yet*
]
;W[ij]WL[919.684]C[GoChaos [2k]: lol
]
;B[jk]BL[726.322]
;W[jj]WL[918.16]C[GoChaos [2k]: T_T
GoChaos [2k]: you know how to kill
]
;B[kk]BL[720.883]
;W[ik]WL[915.824]C[GoChaos [2k]: meh
GoChaos [2k]: ima die D:?
]
;B[cf]BL[605.07]
;W[df]WL[897.727]C[GoChaos [2k]: noway
]
;B[de]BL[536.377]
;W[ef]WL[891.368]C[GoChaos [2k]: dont live plz
GoChaos [2k]: if you live i'll make my center group live too along with r12 somehow -.-
GoChaos [2k]: o_O
Practise [2k]: Save r12 maximum style bonus
]
;B[ee]BL[479.995]C[Xenorosth [7k]: lmfao
]
;W[cd]WL[872.934]C[hailthorn [9k]: u_u;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
]
;B[fe]BL[420.597]C[Practise [2k]: What are these faces T_T D: o_O u_u
]
;W[ce]WL[869.94]
;B[gd]BL[416.55]
;W[he]WL[868.667]
;B[bf]BL[398.813]
;W[eg]WL[857.064]
;B[fc]BL[384.253]
;W[cg]WL[855.699]
;B[hc]BL[372.341]C[GoChaos [2k]: could you review for free plz?
]
;W[ic]WL[849.522]C[GoChaos [2k]: you gonna win
GoChaos [2k]: winner reviews >:P
hailthorn [9k]: I can try, but you're surely better than me'
]
;B[gb]BL[334.502]C[GoChaos [2k]: ...
GoChaos [2k]: you made life? D:
]
;W[ib]WL[795.578]C[Xenorosth [7k]: I do believe that is life
]
;B[eb]BL[251.727]
;W[db]WL[793.237]C[GoChaos [2k]: T_T
]
;B[hb]BL[222.108]
;W[dd]WL[780.882]C[GoChaos [2k]: impawesible
GoChaos [2k]: now i haz to make life in center D:
]
;B[fa]BL[178.603]C[GoChaos [2k]: dblarhg
]
;W[lk]WL[775.933]C[GoChaos [2k]: smart guy -.-
GoChaos [2k]: i really bad
]
;B[kl]BL[144.661]
;W[ll]WL[771.45]
;B[km]BL[139.872]
;W[gk]WL[769.326]
;B[fk]BL[133.473]
;W[gl]WL[767.102]
;B[hm]BL[126.887]
;W[hj]WL[761.437]
;B[hl]BL[122.372]
;W[ni]WL[749.087]C[GoChaos [2k]: i lost
hailthorn [9k]: Eh, just luck I think
GoChaos [2k]: nah
GoChaos [2k]: im bad
]
;B[mi]BL[100.331]C[GoChaos [2k]: worse when reading
]
;W[mj]WL[741.753]
;B[li]BL[94.204]
;W[lj]WL[739.861]C[hailthorn [9k]: I'm terrible at reading
GoChaos [2k]: i mean reading manga >_>
]
;B[nh]BL[75.295]
;W[ml]WL[737.797]C[GoChaos [2k]: that is luck
GoChaos [2k]: before was a display of my bad skill
hailthorn [9k]: Oh well....I guess this is why I'm 9k
Xenorosth [7k]: Control
GoChaos [2k]: gg
])

[EdLee]

A few ideas:

(;CA[utf-8]GM[1]FF[4]ST[2]RU[Japanese]AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]DT[2011-07-08]
PC[KGS]PB[hailthorn]BR[9k]PW[GoChaos]WR[2k]KM[6.5]TM[1500]RE[W+R]MULTIGOGM[0]
;B[pd]BL[1487.51];W[dp]WL[1496.62];B[pp]BL[1481.51];W[dc]WL[1487.48];B[dj]BL[1461.69]
;W[ci]WL[1481.52];B[cj]BL[1453.95];W[di]WL[1478.3];B[cn]BL[1450.45];W[cp]WL[1476.97]
(;B[nq]BL[1414.14]C[See var.]
(;W[bj]WL[1460.24]C[See var.];B[bk]BL[1410.62];W[bi]WL[1459.34]
(;B[cl]BL[1405.89]C[Slow, small, and inefficient. See var.]
(;W[id]WL[1458.27]C[See var.];B[jp]BL[1362.25];W[fq]WL[1433.99];B[qj]BL[1304.14]
;W[ii]WL[1393.72]
(;B[ig]BL[1195.07]C[Small and wrong direction. See var.];W[hg]WL[1389.32];B[hf]
BL[1159.35];W[if]WL[1386.9];B[hh]BL[1155.44];W[gg]WL[1380.91];B[ih]BL[1143.42]TR[hg]
[ii]SQ[hh][ih]C[Good. Broken shape for W.];W[jf]WL[1377.02];B[gh]BL[1139.05];W[fh]
WL[1333.97];B[fg]BL[1134.19];W[gf]WL[1332.15];B[fi]BL[1131.93];W[eh]WL[1330.83]
;B[ff]BL[1122.91];W[ge]WL[1292.97];B[ei]BL[1119.23];W[dh]WL[1289.44];B[gj]BL[1114.14]
;W[nc]WL[1241.25];B[md]BL[1044.77];W[mc]WL[1232.88];B[nd]BL[1038.04];W[oc]WL[1231.07]
;B[pc]BL[1034.9];W[od]WL[1230.06];B[oe]BL[1028.46];W[ne]WL[1228.36];B[nf]BL[1025.46]
;W[me]WL[1226.96];B[of]BL[1021.8];W[mf]WL[1224.8];B[mg]BL[1006.72];W[ld]WL[1218.81]
;B[lg]BL[1002.55];W[qm]WL[1196.78]
(;B[pl]BL[997.499]C[Standard mistake. See var.];W[pm]WL[1191.55];B[ol]BL[988.967]
;W[nn]WL[1186.54];B[on]BL[984.647];W[om]WL[1182.88];B[nl]BL[981.8];W[oo]WL[1181.28]
;B[po]BL[975.221];W[pn]WL[1179.5];B[lm]BL[961.863];W[mq]WL[1161.07];B[mp]BL[941.285]
;W[np]WL[1157.88];B[op]BL[929.628];W[no]WL[1061.98];B[or]BL[922.973];W[lp]WL[1059.7]
;B[lo]BL[917.857];W[mo]WL[1019.01];B[ko]BL[909.62];W[jq]WL[1015.92];B[hp]BL[901.778]
;W[iq]WL[1011.14];B[ip]BL[898.419];W[fm]WL[1006.69];B[fo]BL[889.408];W[eo]WL[1003.84]
;B[en]BL[886.103];W[fn]WL[1003.09];B[go]BL[881.266];W[dn]WL[1001.67];B[em]BL[877.739]
;W[dm]WL[999.687];B[el]BL[874.818];W[qh]WL[994.366];B[qf]BL[870.753];W[rj]WL[991.201]
;B[ri]BL[867.392];W[rk]WL[989.914];B[qi]BL[863.807];W[qk]WL[988.25];B[pk]BL[859.932]
;W[ro]WL[985.028];B[rp]BL[856.064];W[qo]WL[983.282];B[qp]BL[852.501];W[sp]WL[981.595]
;B[sq]BL[849.025];W[so]WL[980.998];B[rr]BL[840.202];W[pb]WL[978.715];B[qb]BL[836.901]
;W[ob]WL[977.898];B[qc]BL[834.11];W[kj]WL[958.963];B[ji]BL[814.455];W[kh]WL[937.943]
;B[lh]BL[742.581];W[ki]WL[925.155];B[kg]BL[735.611];W[jh]WL[923.247];B[jg]BL[730.793]
;W[ij]WL[919.684];B[jk]BL[726.322];W[jj]WL[918.16];B[kk]BL[720.883];W[ik]WL[915.824]
;B[cf]BL[605.07];W[df]WL[897.727];B[de]BL[536.377];W[ef]WL[891.368];B[ee]BL[479.995]
;W[cd]WL[872.934];B[fe]BL[420.597];W[ce]WL[869.94];B[gd]BL[416.55];W[he]WL[868.667]
;B[bf]BL[398.813];W[eg]WL[857.064];B[fc]BL[384.253];W[cg]WL[855.699];B[hc]BL[372.341]
;W[ic]WL[849.522];B[gb]BL[334.502];W[ib]WL[795.578];B[eb]BL[251.727];W[db]WL[793.237]
;B[hb]BL[222.108];W[dd]WL[780.882];B[fa]BL[178.603];W[lk]WL[775.933];B[kl]BL[144.661]
;W[ll]WL[771.45];B[km]BL[139.872];W[gk]WL[769.326];B[fk]BL[133.473];W[gl]WL[767.102]
;B[hm]BL[126.887];W[hj]WL[761.437];B[hl]BL[122.372];W[ni]WL[749.087];B[mi]BL[100.331]
;W[mj]WL[741.753];B[li]BL[94.204];W[lj]WL[739.861];B[nh]BL[75.295];W[ml]WL[737.797])
(;B[qo]SQ[jp][gj][fi][gh][hh][ih][ig][lg][mg][qj]C[Take away W's base and eye space -- how can W live with all the strong B stones waiting for W?]))
(;B[kc]C[Your cash is this direction, 3rd line.]))
(;W[ej]C[W also does not understand this basic shape.];B[ek];W[fk];B[el];W[fl]C[Painful for B -- completely crunched up, super inefficient while W gets the outside.]))
(;B[ej]LB[ck:a][ei:b]C[Vital point -- prevent W from getting this good point.
Also fixes the cut (a) and threatens the big turn at (b).
See again W move 12, variation
and B move 11, variation.]))
(;W[ej]C[Basic shape. Hane head of 2 stones.];B[ek];W[fk]C[Compare this result to B Move 11, variation.]))
(;B[ei]C[Basic shape. Hane head of 2 stones.];W[eh];B[fh]C[Compare this result to W Move 12, variation.]))