42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

Post by Violence »

Man, Joaz, if you read this at the end of the game, this is in fact, my entire impression of you as a Go player.

You are normally a solid player who relies on fundamentals and reading.

However, when confused about what to do, your play becomes very erratic.

This move is kinda characteristic of that, I think.

This move is in fact, very bad. Nothing of what it tries to accomplish is important.

Joaz's theory that his three stones have to be useful for attacking isn't necessarily true. As long as they command a presence, he can use forcing moves from them to gain thickness in a certain direction. when this is considered, I think the jump, the natural move, is perfectly fine. This is because while black can't surround white, white can also not surround black.

Even if you don't jump, you can connect under, treat your single stone lightly, take his corner, something!

I think, Joaz, personally, you are at your weakest when you are your most closed minded to moves. I would recommend you to watch commented games of Liu Xing, or Xie He. Flexible and creative, I think they will seem very weird to you when you begin, but ultimately, I think you'll come to think of plans you've never considered before.

That said... I think Solch is going to love this move.


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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

Post by Joaz Banbeck »

I was going to clamp at J16, but interposing the peep at M16 may give me a better position, especially if he wants to cut at the star point. It is aji keshi, but may be worth it.

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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Joaz Banbeck wrote:I was going to clamp at J16, but interposing the peep at M16 may give me a better position, especially if he wants to cut at the star point. It is aji keshi, but may be worth it.

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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Is something wrong with the obvious L15?
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Bill Spight wrote:
That makes me flinch. :(

make me flinch also :-?
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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daniel_the_smith wrote:
Is something wrong with the obvious L15?


It is inconsistent. W L-18 is still possible, so the exchange of the last two moves is not good. (Not that the exchange is good, anyway. ;))
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Thanks, Bill. I should have known that, haha.
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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I never finished the previous post describing why I chose the move that I did, so I'll incorporate it here, and the next move also.

As mentioned before, the general plan here is to strengthen the pincer stone at L17 to attack the two stones at N17/N15. With this goal in mind, the only place for that stone to go is toward the center, for white has stones on either side. The simple and natural jump toward the middle does not work because white connects underneath like this:

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So the stone must be strengthened while preventing the connection underneath. To accomplish this, I'll sacrifice a stone, and while he is busy killing it, my middle group becomes stronger and runs toward the center. Black :b1: is the sacrifice and :b3: is the stone that actually works for black.

White has several possible responses:

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Simply killing the sacrifice stone with 'a' cooperates with black's plans too much, as white has with a ko that he cannot fight due to lack of threats, and he ends up low and eyeless while black gets influence:

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Killing the sacrifice stone like this gives black sente with lots of possibilities. I can't tell who is better off here.

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Option 'b' again goes low and black gets the center influence that he wants:

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I suspect that the best for white is 'c', as black gets influence, but white does get complesation over in the left corner.

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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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without reading any further than what he has played...
"wrong wrong worng" written all over.

let me take a look at his justification...
ok he didnt discuss white's correct response.
2 exchanges he made doesnt help black in any way.
and white is building influence to solidify the corner..
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arrrrgh, Joaz, why must you hurt my eyes...
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Okay, I'm going to be doing things a little differently now with Malkovich games and feedback would be much appreciated on whether this approach is preferred over the previous ones. I've noticed that there are several pros and cons with the "classical" way of doing Malkovich games (where you just write your heart out per each move) and the more recent way I've been doing it where I use video commentary. I've discussed these before and talk briefly about them in my blog.

So the new way will be straightforward. For each move I will discuss it very succinctly. Similar to the way Magicwand and others do it, minus the trash-talking (just applies for one person ;)) and more information packing. However, after every 10 moves I will discuss the past 10 moves in detail by text. After every 50 moves I will not only do the usual text analysis over the past 10 moves, but also throw in a video commentary going over the last 50 as well. There are several reasons why I'm experimenting with this:

  • This approach puts less emphasis on predicting the future and more on analyzing the past, which I think is absolutely crucial and something that Malkovich games need more of. You'll note that in the previous Malkovich games I played, I constantly focused on what would be next for my opponent and the current move that I played (the present and the future), but never really stepped back and analyzed moves I made earlier to see if I made any mistakes (and rest assured, I made plenty). I think this approach will balance that out a lot.
  • I really enjoyed making video commentary, but to reiterate a point I made elsewhere, using video to commentate on individual moves is excessive. I don't want to scrap the idea entirely, and this approach will allow it to be used as a supplementary tool. I personally think it shines for whole-game reviews or lectures. Using video to review 50 moves rather than a single move will be more streamlined for the observers.
  • This will allow more thinking for observers and bring in more questions for me to directly answer because it leaves more to interpretation.
  • It's a no brainer that stronger players have begun to watch these Malkovich games, and it's great to see players like Bill Spight, Violence, Magicwand, and others who are similarly-leveled watching. This approach will also cater to these players because they already know a lot of the variations I have in mind, and they need less to see what I had in mind and offer their insight from there.
  • This will keep me under control from trying to exhaust all possible variations for some fight and, as a result, cause me to miss the more obvious moves and rely less on something that's very important: intuition.
  • And finally, I think this approach is a good median between the way things used to be done and the way things are going now. Both sides of the camp have their share of complaints and justifications for why their side is better, but I think this approach negotiates well and can make both sides happy.

So tell me what you think! Remember, this is just an experiment and without feedback I won't be able to know whether to run with this idea or just go back to the way I used to do things. I was slightly inspired with this methodology by reminding myself of the KISS principle.

To even things out with the numbers, I will do the next detailed text analysis on move 20, and the next video commentary will be on move 60.

And with that said, here's my thoughts on the current move:
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$$ | . . . . . . . O B . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . a . 1 O c X . O . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . @ . . . b B , . . . . X , O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
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$$ | . . . X . . . . . , . . . . X , . . . |
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The last move Joaz played is questionable. After :w1: , the invasion at 'a' becomes less feasible and my H17 group is well supported with :ws: . In exchange, Black ends up with newly played :bc: stones that aren't doing anything. It's important that I don't play 'b' instead of :w1: because it gives Black 'c' for free which gives me less options for handling the top.
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Araban wrote:So tell me what you think! Remember, this is just an experiment and without feedback I won't be able to know whether to run with this idea or just go back to the way I used to do things. I was slightly inspired with this methodology by reminding myself of the KISS principle.

My only complaint is that you had so much text describing your new system that I couldn't read both your move analysis with its coordinates and the actual board at the same time :)

I think your approach is very reasonable. I hope that you won't shy away from variations completely, and that you'll answer questions with a little more detail if people ask them.
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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Araban:
This sounds pretty good so far. The occasional encyclopedia post and video sound like they should flesh out this style just fine. My only request (for the moment) is, any time you say the 'j' word, add a diagram. If people say something is joseki, they often leave it at that without even showing where the joseki should go and why they chose it. Often weaker players (I only speak for myself) are left in the lurch, not being certain what exactly the player is aiming for and why that joseki shape was chosen. I figure you would have shown this anyways, but this is one thing I wanted to improve, so I figured I'd mention it.


Thanks, as always, to both players and observers for making this both interesting and educational!
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Re: 42. Joaz Banbeck (1d) vs. Araban (5d)

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dfan wrote:For Araban:
Araban wrote:So tell me what you think! Remember, this is just an experiment and without feedback I won't be able to know whether to run with this idea or just go back to the way I used to do things. I was slightly inspired with this methodology by reminding myself of the KISS principle.

My only complaint is that you had so much text describing your new system that I couldn't read both your move analysis with its coordinates and the actual board at the same time :)

I think your approach is very reasonable. I hope that you won't shy away from variations completely, and that you'll answer questions with a little more detail if people ask them.

Yes definitely. The way I've usually done it will not only be reserved for the 10-move interval, but also for any questions that are asked!

Chew Terr wrote:Araban:
This sounds pretty good so far. The occasional encyclopedia post and video sound like they should flesh out this style just fine. My only request (for the moment) is, any time you say the 'j' word, add a diagram. If people say something is joseki, they often leave it at that without even showing where the joseki should go and why they chose it. Often weaker players (I only speak for myself) are left in the lurch, not being certain what exactly the player is aiming for and why that joseki shape was chosen. I figure you would have shown this anyways, but this is one thing I wanted to improve, so I figured I'd mention it.


Thanks, as always, to both players and observers for making this both interesting and educational!

Yes, if I ever find myself going over joseki or using too many coordinates, I will use diagrams and it will not be something I will restrict myself from. Simply, expect the amount of text to be within one to two paragraphs. I will try to refrain myself from using such phrases like "this is joseki." or "this is shape.", which is easy to do when you're going over one move at a time but still tempting regardless.
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